Well, there is certainly room for improvement. Here are some things that tu should look into.
- Try practicing around with detail and anatomy. Regardless of style, there are always ground rules for both. One thing tu can do is look at photographs o even other artwork and really study all the different shapes and forms that are used in artwork and how they flow and balance out one another. Tutorials are also a very nice tool that tu can use to improve. There is a wonderful man on youtube with the nombre de usuario markcrilley who does drawing tutorials. He does mostly anime, considering that he's a manga artist, but his tutorials are very helpful and easy to understand and a wonderful place to start.
- Lighting. Pay very close attention to color gradient and how the light fuente affects the hues in the things we see. The best way to study this is in real life. One thing that helps is to stand in dim lighting, study how tu and the things around tu look, and gradually mover into and study the same things in different light intensities. Pay close attention to the light fuente and how light hits certain shapes and the form it gives it.
Right now, since your drawing style is fairly simple and a little hard to critique well, I suggest that tu focus on these things to improve on first. youtube and deviantART are great places to start at and look for resources to help tu improve. Don't get discouraged. Remember, practice is the key to everything!
Well... actually balance is.. and numbers... but practice is important, too...
@trainofdoom MAKE IT 8 DAMN YOU! D:< 8!! 8!!! PLEASE, 8!!! DDX @thisperson1212 It really did take some time to write... XD I was also ironically drawing at the time... so it took longer than it should have.... XD
No. But tu could go for a little más detail. It needs shading and color variations. If tu haven't already I would advise tu to take an art course in school. It helps. Practice: tu will get better.
I would say yes, due to the fact that your picture seems to be off, the hair could use some texture, and I'm not too sure what that black thing in the background is.
tu do choose nice colores though, I will admit that.
Criticism: A guilty habit of mine~.
posted hace más de un año
its ok the black thing in the backround is spiral hill, you'd know what it is if tu watch nightmare before navidad
u draw beautifully & im honest u need más detail &c im honest (because my mom is an art teacher at my school) my mom reviewed it & dicho u need más detail for example trees she is making an account called ArtTeacher122
posted hace más de un año
can tu give me the link to the account i might need some help XD