what do tu think

I'm escritura a story called taking chances right now but im starting to write a new story right now and heres a summary tell me what tu think. be honest plz.

adriana has been in a four año reationship with a boy named Xaveor. adriana's parents got divorced when she was 6 she stil remebers when she had to choose, one of the two peope she coudnt live without. her parents tod her that she wi never have to choose like that. but they were wrong. xavie made her choose him o her fmily. Adriana chose her family. so Xaveor got really mad and started threatning her. when Xaveor kept on threattning Adriana, a guy came over and stopped him. his name was John. john made Xaveor back off of tu and he moved to another school after that for some reason. then yu try to be friends with john while tu find out he has a mysterious past that tu are trying find out, and the summary is still being writen so tell me what tu think so far