I'm only going to post crappy chapter one and part of ch 2. Tell me your thoughts criticism whatever.
    Chapter 1 Leaving
    “There was a world so far away and different from Blazenta that many people don't know it existed. The people there were called humans instead of magicals” dicho the teacher, Ms C. Swan, to her students, “It was called Earth and only one person is still alive from the planet”. The students, ten thirteen-year-old boys, were very interested in what Ms cisne had to say. “Her name is Axelia. She is my good friend and she will...