(Just a shot at escritura a fanfic..... might not be good)
Ryan and Lucas were known as the neighborhood punks. They would terrorize the other neighborhood children, vandalize property, steal and do all sorts of other things. They were brothers, aged 11 and 12 and their parents, although they knew what their sons were doing, would do little to correct them.
"They're just being boys," they would say when someone came to complain to them. Everyone hated them.
Ryan and Lucas would ride up and down the calle on their bikes at night and "egg" the neighbors' homes. Some of the other kids soon started talking about the old house - the very last one at the end of the neighborhood. They dicho it was haunted por a really scary ghost that ate people. The kids told the bullies they bet they weren't Valiente enough to go and egg the old mansion.
"We're not scared of some silly old ghost," Lucas proclaimed bravely. However, Ryan was a little más hesitant to take up the challenge. "C'mon Ry, don't be such a chicken!" his brother teased. Not one to be teased, the boy accepted the challenge.
They were going to the house that night.
"Don't say we didn't warn tu guys! The ghost is really scary!" the other kids warned. Still the boys wanted to prove that they were the bravest and would go and mess up the old house to do so.
So later that night, the boys got their bikes, a carton of eggs and headed to the house. It was a very big, spooky mansion. No one was home... o so they thought. They got off their bikes and began throwing the eggs at the structure; slimy, yellow yolks slid off the windows and large front door.
"See, I told tu there's no ghost," Lucas dicho as he got back on his bike, ready to leave. Suddenly, a strong breeze blew over the boys, making some leaves to blow and creating a weird howling sound.
Then, as though they were pulled por a strong, invisible force, the bullies flew off their bikes and ended up in the large, scary mansion. The door slammed shut. They were locked in.
Yea, this isn't really good but it's my first several part fanfic. Pt. 2 will be up soon - comentario and tell me what tu think. P.E.A.C.E
Ryan and Lucas were known as the neighborhood punks. They would terrorize the other neighborhood children, vandalize property, steal and do all sorts of other things. They were brothers, aged 11 and 12 and their parents, although they knew what their sons were doing, would do little to correct them.
"They're just being boys," they would say when someone came to complain to them. Everyone hated them.
Ryan and Lucas would ride up and down the calle on their bikes at night and "egg" the neighbors' homes. Some of the other kids soon started talking about the old house - the very last one at the end of the neighborhood. They dicho it was haunted por a really scary ghost that ate people. The kids told the bullies they bet they weren't Valiente enough to go and egg the old mansion.
"We're not scared of some silly old ghost," Lucas proclaimed bravely. However, Ryan was a little más hesitant to take up the challenge. "C'mon Ry, don't be such a chicken!" his brother teased. Not one to be teased, the boy accepted the challenge.
They were going to the house that night.
"Don't say we didn't warn tu guys! The ghost is really scary!" the other kids warned. Still the boys wanted to prove that they were the bravest and would go and mess up the old house to do so.
So later that night, the boys got their bikes, a carton of eggs and headed to the house. It was a very big, spooky mansion. No one was home... o so they thought. They got off their bikes and began throwing the eggs at the structure; slimy, yellow yolks slid off the windows and large front door.
"See, I told tu there's no ghost," Lucas dicho as he got back on his bike, ready to leave. Suddenly, a strong breeze blew over the boys, making some leaves to blow and creating a weird howling sound.
Then, as though they were pulled por a strong, invisible force, the bullies flew off their bikes and ended up in the large, scary mansion. The door slammed shut. They were locked in.
Yea, this isn't really good but it's my first several part fanfic. Pt. 2 will be up soon - comentario and tell me what tu think. P.E.A.C.E