Please comentario your opinoin should i make más o do tu like it???

Hey, I wrote a fanfic but no-one seems to be lectura it. I'm hoping it just cuz they can't find it. Please could tu read it and tell me what tu think?

It was a normal día in Destiny Islands.The sun was shining and the residents were as happy as ever.But when Kioka woke up,Destiny Islands had changed forever.Some of the ideas from this fic came from my anterior fic but I'm ditching that one.

As the fallout occurs, the story closes on Zexion's reflection

The final battle of the story.

Xenmas reports something that forever changes everything.

A día that belongs only to LarSon

Axel attempts another assassination.

A huge smorgasbord, mezcla heterogénea explodes in Twilight Town.

Zexion and Jason go on a mission together.