Hello, this is a story im wrting carrying on from where j.k.rowling left of after the war before the 19 Years later. This is not the full first chapter only what i have written so far- if i get enough feedback then I will eventually put the full chapter up when it is finnished and then I will put the new chapters on when they are finnished. Thank you- Here it is......



Ginny was sat on the bench in the great Hall, lent against her Mother who sat at her side, the last of her tears rolled down her cheeks. Looking down the mesa, tabla to where her Brother Ron sat with Hermione, their heads close together,...

Chapter 1:A twist of fate!

XxXxX-Konoha, October 10th-12 years ago

It was a warm summer evening within the village of Konoha,and it had an odd calming effect on the people.There was still many people bustling about despite the fact the sun had set several hours ago.Minato stood,or rather paced,frantically around in his office.He kept glancing impatiently at the door,then to the walls,then the door again,in an endless cycle of anxiety that had been going on for hours."Kushina should be here yourself together!"

Minato berated himself,attempting to calm his nerves."I can't let her see me like this,or...

Hullo my lovelies. My name is alexischaos2004 o Alexis. Today, I am going to review a fanfiction based off of Naruto, and it is pretty bad. I got the bits from the fanfic from another review on it. So, let's go!


"ARE tu &&& KIDDING ME? I can't believe we && &$& $& &&&)(&# &$#&T&S two trips to the dentist!"

First, who says actual text symbols in a sentence? Nobody could actually say them. Next, please work on your grammar. I'm not really sure the world of naruto even has dentists. (It was written like this on the other review on this...

Bonnie and Damon were in the living room of the Boarding House. Bonnie was placing white candles in a triangle. As she lit each of them she mumbled Latin words. When she was done, she blew out the match and looked at Damon.
“So, here’s what we’re going to do” Bonnie said. “You have to step into the triángulo, triángulo de and sit down”
“And what are tu going to do?” Damon asked, quite insecure.
“I’m going to stay outside the triangle” Bonnie answered. “I will put tu under some sort of hypnosis. I will be with tu in your subconscious”
“Very reassuring” Damon dicho sarcastic.
“Now...

*tears* Gaz break my arm back in "stop moving cry baby" she dicho not even caring if I was hurt "you heal...". If your saying how this happen... Well that's for a new time from the past when I started fighting the 3 worm baby's... "ok this will do for now so rest" Gaz dicho in Lil anger for the 3 worm baby's doing this to me... "see bad I told you, tu suck at fighting those 3 girls... Hmm" yeah she's right I didn't knew how powerful they were "maybe if we think of a plan to take them out but for now rest"

I can't even mover my broken arm... I look at Gaz.. She was very pretty for a human... But...

Elena was too ashamed to leave her room and she didn’t open when someone knocked. And thus Caroline invited herself in. She found her best friend sitting in a corner, her arms thrown around her knees.
“Ah, poor thing” Caroline sighed compassionate as she walked to Elena, a box in her arms. “Damon told me what happened. tu okay?”
Elena shrugged and wiped her tears. “He’s says this is normal. How would he know? He’s a dude, isn’t he?”
“But he’s right” Caroline dicho and she sank down siguiente to her.
“My stomach hurts” Elena sobbed. Caroline searched through her box and...

Elena’s POV
    The night got colder as I walked further away from the Founder’s día party. Just a few más steps and I’ll be at the school.
    I reached the school’s front door but when I tried to open them but they wouldn’t budge. I gave up and sighed. I crossed my arm’s trying to keep warm. Looking around trying to find another way in, though the only way I knew of was the doors in the back of the school.
    I slowly walked my self to the back doors. I grabbed the frost bitten door handle and pulled it open. Once I walked...

February 14, 2017.

It all started like a normal couple, Bob Himb was doing a video with FluxxHd.
They were playing Gmod, but it wasn’t a normal day, it was February 14.
FluxxHd dicho something he would never say he said, “Hey BB want to go with me to the cosplay convention”, Bob Himb yelled in a seducing voice, Bob Himb “Oh yes, I will dress up like your logo”. Bob Himb quick traveled to FluxxHD’s house, after he got their Fluxx was in a bunny sexy suit, Bob Himb dicho to him in a turn on voice, “Hey bon-bon, tu ready?”, Fluxx Responded in a mostrar off voice “Yes babe” After...

(So what tu are about to read was mainly inspired to me por a very weird yet interesting dream. I know that virtually every single time I make one of these, something goes wrong, but I have good faith that I can continue this one to the best of my ability. So, without further ado, let's get started.)

Tick, Tock...Tick, Tock...

BZZZZZZT!!

#1: AUGH! *Falls out of bed*

#1: Jesus, I thought I got rid of this stupid alarm clock...Always frightens the living hell outta me!

#2: tu should be complaining, Miles. I sleep right siguiente to it!

#1/Miles: True, James. But still, whose idea was this anyway? Ah, never...

Tyler woke up with a burning pain on his chest. Someone was caressing his exposed chest with a vervain flower.
“Good evening, Tyler” a woman said. It wasn’t Veronica. She had a paper bag with her, probably full of vervain and wolfsbane. Her hand disappeared in the bag, but she withdrew her hand she was holding up a sandwich. Tyler raised his eyebrows, something that didn’t go unnoticed. “What? A girl’s got to eat, right? And I don’t know how long I’ll be in here, because that totally depends on you”
“Why? If you’re going to kill me, why not just do it?” Tyler snapped...

Matt, Keith, Bonnie, Jeremy and Veronica were sitting around the cocina table. Veronica had dado each a cup of coffee, in order to stay awake.
“Thank you” Jeremy dicho uncomfortable. “You don’t really know Elena. It’s not like tu owe her anything”
Veronica cast him a grin that didn’t reach her eyes. “Anything for my soldiers” she replied charming.
“How’s that going?” Matt asked, trying to keep a conversation. “Do tu need anyone else in your…army?”
“Why? Interested?” Veronica returned, raising her eyebrows. “For now the training’s canceled” She turned...

Elena was still in the hospital. She had traded the cama for the seat, which was much más comfortable than the former.
The door opened and Damon came back with two coffees. He gave one to Elena and she took a sip, curling her nose.
“Is there alcohol in this?” she asked surprised.
“Oh, right, that’s mine” Damon apologized. “Sorry” He switched the cups and took a sip from his coffee with bourbon. “Why aren’t tu in bed?” he asked a little accusatory.
“Damon, don’t start” Elena dicho in begging tone.
Damon shut his mouth and signaled that she had to get up. Elena pulled...

“Alright, I’ll do it!” Rachel exclaimed, looking angry at Stefan. “But if I get killed por Veronica’s minions I will come back to haunt you”
“Is that a promise?” Stefan teased. Then he was serious again. “Did tu guys hear that?” he asked concerned. Rachel nodded, Jeremy shook his head. Stefan walked towards the bushes, when a swarm of birds flew out of the them.
“Mystery solved” Jeremy dicho and Stefan shrugged and walked back.
Derek almost let out a sigh of deep relief, but realized just in time that the sound of his breath would give him away. Stefan and Damon believed...

“I’m the one getting tu out of jail” Stefan pointed out.
“And I’m the one still waiting for that to happen” Rachel responded with raised eyebrows. She tried to look beside Stefan. “How did tu get in here? I mean, with all the deputies and the sheriff”
“I used the backdoor” Stefan smirked mischievous. He took the bars and wrecked them. He took Rachel’s hand and pulled her out of the cell. “Let’s get out of here”

“Where are we going?” Rachel asked when Stefan dragged her along at a rapid pace.
“I need tu to meet someone” Stefan responded. He stopped at Mystic...

“I’m okay” Stefan groaned as he pulled out the arrow.
“I’m so sorry, Stefan” Elena dicho upset as she ran his way. Damon was already with his brother, helping him getting up. “I didn’t mean to shoot you”
“Really, I’m fine” Stefan tried to reassure her. Elena still looked rather guilty and so Damon jumped to another subject.
“So…did tu find Rachel?” he asked.
“Yeah, I did” Stefan answered.
“Where is she? I thought tu were going to take her here” Damon dicho confused.
“Yeah” Stefan replied slow. “About that”
Rachel walked up to the door of the building....

Elena parked her car at the Boarding House. Caroline had taxed her with the message to get her culo there ASAP. She opened the door and looked inside.
“Damon!” she called.
Damon appeared in the hallway, frowning. “What are tu doing here?”
“Caroline taxed me” Elena said, waving her phone. “Hello to you, too, btw” She tried to look over Damon’s shoulder. “What’s going on?”
Before Damon could answer Caroline appeared.
“Elena, what are tu doing here?” she asked, but in a completely different tone than Damon. “Come on” she continued as she took Elena’s hand and...

Rachel looked around her before she pressed the campana of Ric’s loft.
“Rachel” Stefan dicho a little surprised, when he opened the door. “Come in”
“Are tu alone?” Rachel checked. Stefan nodded and she followed him inside. “I need to know something” she cut to the chase. “How do tu know I’m a werewolf?”
“It’s a full moon tonight and tu were actuación strange earlier” Stefan explained. “Plus I’m a vampire, I have learned to recognize them, even if they’re in human shape”
“Veronica will kill me if she finds out I’ve been talking to you” Rachel dicho scared...

Caroline was walking on school ground, when she heard footsteps. She could hear they didn’t belong to Tyler and so she turned around and waited for Elena to catch up with her.
“What’s going on?” she asked when Elena was standing with her.
“Why are tu asking?” Elena asked, trying to be casual.
“Because tu have the look” Caroline dicho accusatory.
“What look?” Elena frowned.
“The look that says: there’s something I have to tell you, but there are too many ears around here” Caroline clarified.
“I didn’t even know I had a look like that” Elena commented.
“Well, you...

It was the first time Damon and Bonnie saw each other since Bonnie had ‘cured” Damon.
“Caroline’s not home” Bonnie said, a little distant.
“I’m not here for Caroline” Damon replied. “I need to talk to you”
“Okay” Bonnie frowned. “Come in”
Damon entered the house and Bonnie guided him to the kitchen. Sheriff Forbes wasn’t home.
“What, eh,…what do tu need to talk about?” Bonnie asked slightly nervous.
“Do tu know a guy named Keith?” Damon asked, as he sat down, following Bonnie’s example.
Bonnie nodded. She didn’t see why she would deny it. “Yeah,...