i would end up here with you
i was a restless wanderer on a distant path
tu were a lonely dreamer with a broken laugh
i would go anywhere the road would lead
my hopes and dreams is all that i would need
i don't need a house o fancy cars
i would rather sleep underneath the stars
tu did'nt have much to call your own
but what a lovely smile on your face shown
tu dicho your chance at amor had past tu por
i told i'm here so dont tu cry
our lives were like the pieces of a broken heart
now that we're together what a life could start
there was magic in the air that night
everything was moving at the speed of light
tu were like my juliet and i your romeo
tu amor me i amor tu thats all i need to know
no longer will tu dream of amor thats true
no longer will i wander my buscar has led to you
I wrote this about my (now ex) boyfriend, but still felt something about the poem, if not him. I'd amor some criticism on it (hopefully constructive) :).
Treacle dripping from our scars
Pooling on a jagged floor
tu are gone, still I know
From clustered trees and homemade vows
That we are one. And as tu lead
Your life of promise, graft and need
Know that we are one the same
Intertwined are corazón at name.
tu may notice that only the segundo verse rhymes, this is an attempt to mostrar the idea of a one-sided relationship in its form in it's one-sided rhyme scheme. This is probably quite stupid- let me know.
Treacle dripping from our scars
Pooling on a jagged floor
tu are gone, still I know
From clustered trees and homemade vows
That we are one. And as tu lead
Your life of promise, graft and need
Know that we are one the same
Intertwined are corazón at name.
tu may notice that only the segundo verse rhymes, this is an attempt to mostrar the idea of a one-sided relationship in its form in it's one-sided rhyme scheme. This is probably quite stupid- let me know.
