escritura Article: *The whole point of the story is to see what the título should be*

*The whole point of the story is to see what the título should be*

posted by ttmrktmnrfn0830

A short story I'm escritura for escritura Club at High School:

He couldn't take it anymore. The anger was welling up inside him, filling his veins and pulsing to his brain a dark poison impossible to cure. He lost all hope.

Everyone picked on him; for the clothes he wore, the people he hung out with, his hair style. So what if he wore black skinny jeans and snake bite piercings? So what if he had jet black hair that covered one of his eyes? How about the música he listened to; what was all wrong with that?

The one person he thought had loved him had turned against him. She dicho that he wasn't good enough. She didn't like his style o the sound of his voice. She didn't want anything to do with him, anymore.

Several times he thought the sharp blade of a cuchillo would take all of his problems away. But, as he pierced the sensitive skin on his wrists, he only felt más pain and sickness. There was only one thing he could do, now....

Standing over the vast expanses he thought he had called home, he spat at the air. You never cared for me! tu only treated me with wrong! Why am I even here?

He walked closer to the edge, closing his eyes. The violent winds whipped across his face, probably forcing him to step back. But, will power and state of mind made him hold his ground. He will not last another segundo in this dark world.

He raised his arms out, letting all his weight be supported por the balls of his feet. He felt wobbly at first, until he pushed out adelante, hacia adelante a little more.

Faster than anything he had ever imagine, he felt something coarse throughout his body; a powerful force that sent his hair flying away from his face and his baggy chaqueta and skinny jeans quiver. He didn't dare to open his eyes, for he knew what he was plummeting in:

Air....

Now, it's your job to figure out what the título is... :D hoped tu liked my depressing story.

amethyst44 likes this

amethyst44 i liked the story... how about... erm.... "Death Poison" ? Sorry im horrible at titles myself ^^ "

shomill Goodbye, Cruel World

ttmrktmnrfn0830 Very good titles, thanx for reading! :D

dollhousegirl24 Snake Bites maybe. I like the story.

txter32 Suicide? lame, i know

2dolphn97 hurt? idk ik its kinda lame if u dont use it its fine w/ me lol

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Nick & Grace: Chapter Eight

posted by CullenProperty

Nick pulls up to the curb and knows something is wrong the minuto I get in the car;
“Grace, what the hell were tu doing out there in the rain?” he asks, breaking his own rules. “It’s freezing out there, sweetheart,” he says, cranking the heater up all the way. “I mean really Grace, are tu okay?” he asks, placing his hand on my knee.
I golondrina and bolso, monedero my lips, trying to clear my throat because it’s so dry from crying.
“Nick,” I breathe, moving closer to his face, my hands hesitating around the pile of CD's in between us, trying to get a grip on something so I don't topple...

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Nick & Grace: Chapter Two

posted by CullenProperty

I wake up with a feeling that something has been taken from me, but in a good way. I lay in my warm, comfortable, almohada surrounded cama for a little while longer before I decide to get up. I go into the bathroom and turn on the shower. The warm water that penetrates my body feels so good and after my thoughts wander to Nick, the water feels even warmer. I envolver, abrigo a towel around my body when I'm done and quietly tip toe into my room where I see Nick's hoodie lying on my office chair, where I put it last night. I pick it up and take in his essence, smells exactly like Nick. An aroma I can't explain...

Try My Life Chapter 8

posted by mitchie19

8. C O N C E R N E D H E A R T

My vision was black. Just plain black. It’s like I’m falling into a deep dark room where I can’t see but the darkness and falling into nothing. It felt cold. The deep dark room was cold.
I slowly opened my eyes. All I can hear was the sound of the corazón monitor beeping. I was in a hospital. What happened to me?
Beside me, Norah—sleeping with her head tilted down the side of the bed.
“Norah,” I heard me whisper. I felt the IV dripped into my arm.
Norah had awoken. Her arms around me and sobbed. “Thank God, you’re okay,”
I managed to rub her head...

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♥The Girl Who Loves, The Shy Boy, and The 10 rosas Of amor ♥ {Contest Entry =)}

posted by DxCluvr

On a beautiful Friday after noon the students prepaired to leave school for the day.
{In Katherines P.O.V.}
{In the last class}
"Hmmm..."
"Whats wrong Kate?" Asked Krista.
"Nothing..." Replied Katherine.
"I've been your friend since kindergarden... I know when somethings wrong! Now spill it."
"Okay well...I want to tell Chris I amor him but I'm so afraid of what he'll say..."
"Ugh! I've heard so many rumors from his friends and everyone else...he loves tu too!"
"Its a rumor! Sometimes rumors are false!"
"Yes but some are true."
"Yeah SOME. It would be nice if he told me..."
"Ugh fine, i'm not gonna...

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HOW TO MAKE IT THROUGH A GHETTO LIFE

posted by sexiitreysongz

Chapter 2
The siguiente morning I woke up feeling tired and worst than usually. Swollen feet, aching back, I was up all night long treating people who thought they had the flu. I knew I had to get up and go to work, I lived alone for now and somebody has to pay the rent. And right now, it's me. Just as I was about to get up the phone rang. "Hello?", "ohh thank goodness I caught tu before tu left. Listen jasmine, I know tu really need this job to keep your rent up but you've been working yourself crazy down here at this clinic. You’re pregnant and I think tu should really take the día off, stay...

To Live, A Nightmare Indeed: Entry One

posted by AliceKinsley

                                     January 15, 1815

Journal,
    Its cold. My comida is almost gone, I can’t feel my hands. I lost my hat; my ears are frozen. My sisters are dying. Sasha has pneumonia, and Nastea’s lost her capa and shoes. My hair is falling out. I look at the broken down train behind us. Tree’s sleep soundlessly on parte superior, arriba of it. I sit at a árbol trunk, with tu on my lap, and a scrawny pencil in my hand. Nastea sits beside Sasha, feeding her berries and herbs. I hope things get better, Journal. I hope things get better.
    Bye Journal,
        Nadia

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Ode To Distance

posted by Vixie79

In a world of his
she unloads his gun

She and he waits for this
he releases his love

In blue and green orbs
she gives him más and more

A million miles away
A million years girl

In a black woven chest
he digs his nails deep

She trusts in him for what he does
live in a house in the suburbs

He kisses the pain with blood and light
sleeping it off in the morning

A million miles away
A million years girl

In her world of his
she unloads his gun

In a world of his
she covers the sun

A million miles away
A million years
A million years girl

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Are we right for eachother? Chapter 1

posted by jacob_lover5253

My story is about a girl named Karleigh. It's summer time and she is down the shore. Her mom bought a place at a campground outside of sea isle. The campground is called Driftwood. She has been going there since she was 8 1/2. Now she is 13.
******

I woke up to a knock at the front door. Why is kelsey's friend here so early?! "Hello, Leigha. I'll go get kelsey." Leigha came in and sat down while I went to get kelsey. "Kels, wake up!" I said. "Go away, Karleigh." She murmered. "Leigha's here." I yelled walking away. Kelsey jerked up right and flew into the bathroom. Am I allowed to go back to...

DREAMER AND FAITH

posted by juicyjossy9

DREAMER AND FAITH
OR THE CREATION
OF A NEW DAWN

In the beginning, the heavens and the earth were one. The sky was a mass of angry black clouds and the sea was nothing más than a seething, murky swamp. Life as we know it did not exist.

Then one día the clouds began to swirl and grow, thunder crashed and a terrible rain began to fall. It rained night and día for weeks and months, as if it had done so forever.

At last the rain stopped, and the heavens and the earth had separated. From the waters and the mud, the gods began to appear, like young shoots of césped, hierba spinging forth from the earth.

This...

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MY OWN BOOK I HAVE WRITTEN ! chapter 1

posted by house_of_nightx

THE LEGEND OF THE VAMPIRE PRINCESS:
THE LEGEND COMES TO LIFE

CHARPTER1:STARSTRUCK

STAR
16 YEARS LATER

I woke to a brisk summers morning in a small town just outside of New York City in my parents best friend Kachiri and her daughter Quinns apartment.Kachiri has been looking after me since i was a baby since my parents had died in a car accident when i was very younge and i had no other family,Kachiri dicho my parents wanted her to look after me anyway.

As i got out of cama to go downstairs i made my way into my bathroom brushed my hair,cleaned my teeth and examined the sapphire dragon that streached...

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Try My Life (Chapter 3)

posted by mitchie19

3. P H O N E C A l L

The phone rang about 9am I was the one who answered. Norah went to the store to buy groceries and my sister is upstairs still asleep. I picked up the phone, “Hello?” I spoke the word softly. “Mariah? This is your aunt Lourdes How are you?” She dicho happily. I didn’t expect her to call at this moment but I was surprised. “Hi Aunt Lourdes um, I’m fine. Why’d tu call?” is the
why’d-you-call-thing the right thing to say to someone ten times older than me?
She didn’t mind me saying that.
“I told your mom that tu are welcome to stay here for the summer....

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just a twist in twilight chapter 4

posted by mia1emmett

Chapter 4
When I woke up I was in an un-familiar place I Jumped from where I was laying down and walked down a flight of stairs
To a room full of people who were pale, I saw Edward and Bella so I
Thought this must be something that Bella knows about. I walked down the
Stairs and demanded I know what was going on, this pale man with blonde
Hair who looked so young came up to me and told me that Bella had come
To save me from losing my life and that Edward brought tu here. I
Started asking questions:
"Why are tu guys so pale?"
"Well we are vampiros like you"
"But I am not as pale as you, and YOU...

4

amor Kills chapter 16

posted by hannah_vampire

I started to wake up and open my eyes to see Tilly, 'Hey sorry bout that, Tyler should have been más aware but he is stupid oh damm his going to kill me'. I sat there puzzled 'Umm what do tu mean' she laughed and sat down beside me 'WE can hear each others thoughts except yours only your soul mate can do that but hola it seems like tu have to of them'.

She walked out and I rubbed my eye's and looked at my phone it dicho One new message, I opened it and it was from Oni: hola your dads coming out today so maybe tu should go back inicial with him if tu know what I mean but tu can stay if tu want...

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How to make it through a ghetto life

posted by sexiitreysongz

CHAPTER 1
10 years hace I lost both my parents in a car crash. I've been living on my own for about 8 years, I lived with my grandmother for a while untill I got a job and found an apartment for real cheep. I never realized what it was like to lose your parents and feel this bad. I never knew my self would be in this postion. Alone, no true family, a baby on the way. How do these girls deal with kind of stuff. They act like everything is so easy,and they have nothing to worry about. Maybe becasue they have moms and grandmothers to help them out. I have no body. My grandmother kicked me out after...

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amor kills Chapter 15

posted by hannah_vampire

Its pretty Long thxs for the comentarios :)

I woke up to the sound of my phone ringing, I looked at the screen and I saw melissa.baker :) and no this was not Damons sister it was the melissa I got drunk with.

'Hey mel whats up?' I hearded her laugh, 'Finally were have tu been it's like tu had dropped off the face of earth'. I laughed and started to walk to the mirror, 'Melissa tu have no idea and It's good to hear tu other then the same people all the time and if your gonna ask if I can come out no I cant visting my dad and I have shit to work out, so i better go amor ya mwaa', She laughed...

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Angie's life

posted by PrinceLover1999

Angie hears her mom and stepdad fights. She sits there and cries..and hope it's over. Then she hears a loud gun pow!! She hurrys to the living room and see's her mom laying on the floor..with blood all over. She cries over her mom's bloody body...her mom looked at her and whisperd "help". She called the police and after she hung up. Her stepdad beat her..then rapped her. Then the police busted in. Her mom fighting for breath. Angie to weak to get up yelled "Help, please help" They came to resuce her, too. After her and her mom recoverd. The mom found a new guy. He only beated the daughter...everytime...

The bridge in the park

posted by inexplicable

I ran against the wind which came contrary to me.
I ran against the wind which approached me till I adhered to the parapet panting. Hardly anybody was más in the park although it was rather warmly and still not at all so dark. The sun just set and the water under me turned orange-red now. I needed a while, before I came to the quiet, then I did not oso, oso de it any más and the tears forced her way. I knew that she lied. I knew that this not corresponded to the truth what she had dicho to me. I did not have any proof for it but I could feel that there was something wrong. I did not want any more....

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Endless Pain: Chapter Three

posted by MileySelena982

*Note; This is a variation of RachelGal97’s Endless Pain. Same names; just a different plot. Please comentario and tell me if tu like and what’s your favorito! part*

Endless Pain: Chapter Three

“Are tu sure it was David?” Mom asked as she comforted Selena on the couch.

“I’m positive.” Selena replied. “I’d know that face from anywhere. And… if I was never his girlfriend, he never would have gone to that jewelry store, and he never would have died!”

Mom didn’t reply. She knew her daughter was feeling guilty, and nothing could help it. Instead she said, “But, sweetie, he loved...

Try My Life (Chapter 2)

posted by mitchie19

2. B I G D A Y

One, two, three, go! I breathed. My right leg went first up the stairs and then my left leg.
This is it, this is really it. I squealed nervously. “Marhion Angeles Pearson, daughter of Mr. and Mrs. Pearson” the school directress announced. I went up the stage. The audience clapped.
I felt like a estrella on a rise.
I saw Riley on the crowd, my eyes glued to him. Ah! I tripped. The audience gasp some stood up to see if I’m okay some of them laughed and snickered. pato, drake Cell, the school news anchor video taped my clumsiness, he smiled. I quickly stood up. My cheeks were red, I...

Yeah, Me; The Nerd: Chapter one.

posted by cute20k

Dizzy:

As I weaved through the crowded hallways, I focussed on the rhythm of my footsteps. I was lost. It was as if I was a new student o something. Now that Annabella was gone, the hallways made me dizzy with fear. When you're with your best friend, nothing matters. When tu know you'll never see her again, not even a faint light of happiness appears at the end of the freight tunnel.
I'm still me, I reminded myself. But who was I? Before knew it, a bib of tears flooded down my chest. I hear red-headed Abigail whisper to Elisa. Faint words saying, 'They're actually crying?' I wished those...