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 A little bit on what Sayuri looks like:)
A little bit on what Sayuri looks like:)
Okay, so here's the third chapter of this! Hope tu all like and PLEASE COMMENT!! ^.^


We immediately arrive in Hollow Bas- I mean, The Radiant Garden.

"Let's go find Leon and everyone," Sora said, and along the way to Merlin's house, we saw just how much this place has improved.
When we came to the house, Sora opened the door and went in before Kairi and I could stop him and tell him to knock first.

"Hey, everybody!" Sora shouted to everyone, and they all jumped.

"Huh? Sora..." Leon mumbled after he jumped.

"Jeez, Sora! Ever heard of knocking?" Yuffie asked him and he smiled sheepishly.

"We're here because King Mickey sent us a message saying tu needed to tell us something...?" I said, stepping in.

Leon nodded. "Right," he spoke, and got up and walked to us.

"The Heartless seem to be... searching for something, at least we think." Leon explained.

"What do tu mean?" Sora asked.

"The Heartless have been poppin' up everywhere, and then they just disappear." Cid told us, sitting at his computer.

Sora and I share a look, understanding that the Heartless must be up to something...

"We think they may be after something," Aerith dicho in a concerned tone. "Something that may have to do with Kingdom Hearts."

We all turn to face her with shock plainly written in our features.

"Are tu serious?" Sora asked, sounding like the most shocked out of all of us.

Aerith nods her head gravely.

"Someone may be controlling them from the shadows," Leon told us, and just then, we see Heartless summon outside the house since we left the door open.

"Heartless!" Sora shouted, running toward them and I follow him.

Once we get outside, we notice that Kairi had followed us too.

"Kairi! It's too dangerous out here, go back inside!" Sora told her, worried.

Kairi shakes her head.

"No, where one goes the others follow, remember Sora?" Kairi dicho stubbornly.

"But..." Sora mutters back, still worried about her safety, but I had a plan.

"She can use this," I offered Kairi the same Keyblade she used in the World That Never Was.

She took it and gazed at it.

"Oh, this is the same one from before..." she murmurs, but then gets in a fighting stance.

"Are tu sure..." Sora still persisted but Kairi just charges at a Heartless and easily takes it out.

"C'mon!" she tells us, turning to look at us.

Sora and I share a look, then shrug, and then charge at the Heartless as well.
We were fighting mainly Shadows, the lowest rank, but then Deserter's showed up and began running everywhere so we had to chase them down.

"There's más over here, Riku!" I heard Sora shout from the Bailey area, where him and Kairi were fighting now.

I jumped to where they were and helped them finish off the last of the Heartless. But then, a Commander heartless appeared in front of us.

And that's when a girl appeared and sliced right through the Heartless with a Keyblade similar to Sora's, only it was black and white. And the girl even reminded me of Sora, only she seemed... different, in a way...

But how can she have a Keyblade? Who IS she?


Sayuri's P.O.V.

They kept staring at me until the spiky, brown-haired boy stepped up.

"Hey, so, um..." He began scratching his head and I noticed that his voice is the one I heard before. "Thanks and all for your help, but who are you?"

I smiled, they seemed like nice people.

"I'm Sayuri, and tu all are...?"

The boy smiled back, probably sensing that I was nice too.

"I'm Sora, and these are my two best friends, Riku and Kairi." He pointed to them each as he dicho their names.

"Hello, it's nice to meet you." I told them and the girl, Kairi, smiled at this.

"Hi, so are tu from around here?" she asked me in a friendly and sweet voice.

"No... I just got here..." I murmured, looking down.

"Why do tu have a Keyblade?" I heard the most softest and husky voice ask and I looked up and met the other boy's - Riku - eyes.

"Riku - hola wait, why do tu have one?" Sora asked me, but I was confused.

"Keyblade? What, tu mean this?" I summoned my Key. "That's what it's called?"

"Yeah, tu mean tu didn't know?" Sora asked me and I shake my head.

"But I would like to know what world I'm in and everything," I dicho to them.

"Then we should head back to Merlin's house, there we can answer your questions," Riku said, keeping his eyes on me as I walked with them back to this 'Merlin's house.'

I walked in after them and saw that there was a small group of people already inside.

"Huh? Who's this?" A petite girl with short black hair came right up to me and she honestly reminded me of a ninja.

"This is Sayuri, we met her at the Bailey," Sora dicho and then the girl smiled at me.

"Hi Sayuri! I'm Yuffie! It's nice to meet ya," she dicho optimistically.

"And I'm Cid, it's a pleasure to meet you, little lady." The guy with blond hair who was sitting at a computer dicho to me.

"The pleasure's all mine," My 'princess' manners were still with me it seemed as I curtsied to him - a little princess bow.

The woman sitting down at a mesa, tabla who was very beautiful smiled at me.

"I'm Aerith, and the two over there is Leon and Merlin," she pointed out the tall guy with brown hair and then the elderly man wearing a long blue robe.

"So what brings tu to The Radiant Garden?" Leon asked me.

"The Radiant Garden? Um... not sure really, I just ended up here..." I trailed off, wondering what all I should tell these people.

"Well, what world are tu from?" Yuffie asked me.

"Yuffie!" Leon scolded her as if she wasn't suppose to say that.

"I'm from Keylexia," I went ahead and just answered.

They all looked at me with questioning eyes.

"And where is that?" Leon asked for everyone.

"I'm not really... sure..." I murmured, looking away as I became lost in my thoughts.

"Well it must be far away judging from how worn out your dress is," Kairi dicho and I looked down at my dirt-covered, torn white dress.

"Oh, right." I agreed.

The Merlin guy clapped his hands like he just had an idea.

"I know a couple of good hadas who can help tu out and make tu a brand new outfit," he told me but all I could seem to think was fairies?!

"Oh!" Sora suddenly spoke. "You mean Flora, Fauna, and Merryweather, right?" he asked optimistically.

Merlin nodded. "Right tu are, Sora!" Now, dear, are tu ready to go?" He held out his hand.

I wasn't sure on what to do and I saw Kairi nod encourangingly at me and so I stepped adelante, hacia adelante and took Merlin's hand.


Ta-dah! Lol, hope tu liked it!
posted by ace1317
This is the first story i have ever let anybody read before. Some of my friends have told me it was good and i need to publicado it. so here it is i hope tu like it........

I was running through a pitch black tunnel, the cold wind whipping through my jacket. Then an evil voice said. “Run u pathetic, worthless, creature run!!!” then the voice would break out in evil laughter. Something grabbed my legs I fell face first on to the cold hard tile. The creature starting snaking up my body forcing the air from my lungs. I woke up screaming. I ran into the bathroom and splashed water on my face....
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posted by r260897
Zean, the famous estrella of música world came back with his Zeal (his guitar) and his famous UKK band after a live performance. He sat in front of a big mirror removing his make up. His ears were active with the chatter of his mates who were busy in talking about another band. He turned back with a big a smile as if he wanted to say something but he didn’t. he saw a small boy running and then he stood up and ran behind him he ran and ran and ran until he found himself surrounded por white light and some noise in which he could hear “so tu are Zean…. Haaahaaaaa look at him his….” Zean,,...
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posted by Luna-Lacrimosa
Built For Sin
Darkness poured into the hybrid's room, filling the room with great depression. Rain drops made little trails down the window, almost like tears, down the cool glass surface of the window. Luna still needed to respuestas to her questions. Why was she here? What does she need to do? Why did her corazón finally feel warm after what Hades told her about Leon's feelings?! The respuestas never showed up to her, no matter what she thought o did.
A big bewilderment sigh danced in the cool quiet air of the depressed dark room. Luna crashed her head into her hands and grabbed a hold of her hair...
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posted by candlegirlsmile
In a foggy night ,
On a foggy día ,
Following the light ,
Running far away .

There was a little car ,
Driven por two children ,
Made out of plastic and gum ,
With a fake license number .

And the car was the product
Of one’s imagination,
It was the guide through the forest
Of his life’s interpretation.

And the forest was dark
And hunted por lobos ,
Full of tears and pain
And of smiles went to vain.

And this kid was an orphan,
Slowly rushing through life ,
Searching for his mother ,
Waiting to be held tight.

He is lost and scared ,
Yet unstoppable ,
Cause all his life he’s spent
Walking through that forest.

We ain’t all lucky and rich
o have families.
The truth is we only have ourselves,
To make our own journies.

This orphan’s an example
For those who don’t know ,
That that forest is the rode
We all have to go on .
posted by breebree446
 1st Person = I, we, me, us, my, mine, our, ours. 2nd Person = you, your, yours. 3rd Person = he, she, it, they, him, her, it, them, his, her, hers, it, their, theirs.
1st Person = I, we, me, us, my, mine, our, ours. 2nd Person = you, your, yours. 3rd Person = he, she, it, they, him, her, it, them, his, her, hers, it, their, theirs.
First Person

First person escritura is when the characters is speaking directly toward another person(You). tu use words like "I", "Mine", "We", "Us." The character is telling the story to tu themselves.

Second Person

Third person is the exact opposite. Instead of the character talking to you, the narrator is talking about the character. Your main words are "You", and "Your."

Third Person

Third person is almost similar to segundo person. The narrator is talking to you, but instead they use words like "He", "She", "It", and "They." Third person libros often have the most detail.

For más detailed descriptions, go to: link
posted by mari_giovani
This is a short story, based on a song. The song's kinda spoilerish so i'm gonna put its link at the end.
Ps: i just finished this so it probably has some typing and pontuaction mistakes...I'll review and editar later! :)

There he was once again, holding his knees in his arms, on the corner of that sofá that he often tries to forget, and across from him, his terapist sat, cleaning her glasses with a tissue as she had his file on her lap, tried to, for the yet unknown, last time, understand and help him.
"So how are tu today, Jason? I'm glad to see that you're looking for the help that tu need."...
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posted by ybet_cullen18
Can tu hear me (OST-Beethoven Virus)

Even though it hurts but a little, tears form
My corazón screams out
If I pass in front of you, beside you
You were my whole world
I want only you
But I can't breathe when I'm in front of you

As if tu weren't my destiny
As if this was just a fleeting moment
Next to you, who just let me go so easily
I go closer to tu step por step
Although I cannot mover at all

You make me restless, tu make me cry
Like a fool, like a child
I want to just laugh it off instead

The closer I get to you
Although I get más scared
I guess I cannot stop this love

Why is it just my amor that is late...
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posted by Kimi4312
heres a song about me and my boyfriend enjoy :)Lyrics:
As a very small girl, I met a boy, hes so sweet,

I was shy and he wasn't, he always watch out,

He never left my side, I never left his side,

Because we're stuck together,

Always be stuck together,

His new girlfriend showed up but I don't like her,

He is blinded por her but I know her amor is a lie,

I seen him being unhappy everyday since she show

But I ask hola wanna hang out at my house,

Then he dicho yeah and we start hanging out,

We are stuck together and always will be,

I have been stuck to his side forever,

Then we been playing video games and laughing,...
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I starred down at the skinny "liar" in my hands.I couldn't be pregnant.Pregnancy test could be wrong right?At that moment I didn't know whether i should scream o pass out."What happened to perfect little Annie?" I thought to myself."The one who had gotten into a ivy league school and would be attending in the fall?Well she was gone now,along with her virginity."
In case tu hadn't figured it out already,I'm Annie,Annie Green and I'm PREGNANT!Shivers went down my spine as the words echoed in my head.This was my fault;and Emett's of course.Emett is the "thing's" father."That's even if I have...
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posted by VAMPirella1997
this my poem...I just wrote it randomly...Don't know if it's any good...what do tu think?

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If tu amor him,
Tell him so.
If tu amor him,
Tell him not to go.

The very worst,
He can do,
The very worst,
He can do is say no.

Don’t hide away,
Wishing all day,
Don’t hide away,
Just come out and say.

“Yes, I amor you,
I’ve told tu so.
And if tu amor me,
Please don’t go.”

“Yes, I amor you,
I’ve told tu so.
And if tu amor me,
Please don’t go.”

“Please, please,
Please don’t go.
Please, please.
Please, please don’t go.”

So, if tu amor him,
Tell him so.
If tu amor him,
Tell him not to go.

The very worst,
He can do,
The very worst,
He can do is say no.
posted by lilacool
Little raindrops shiny,silver,
Dropping silently into the river.
A girl sitting quiet,alone,
Her smile is fading,her hope is gone.
It faded really long ago,
That sounds sad,i know.
She quickly wipes away a tear,
It's her secret so no one can hear.
She secretly cries every night,
It's her fate,so she cant fight.
She touches a raindrop and goes back inside,
She is so lost,she's losing her pride.
All she asks for is a friend,
Someone to be there and understand.
So help her to make her dream come true,
There's always something tu can do.
posted by shomill
He has fuego in his eyes.

Burning, flaming, blazing with his fury,
But not at me,
Never at me,
For I am his love,
The one he holds above
All others. His fury
Is for those who would harm me,
Who would dare to bring amargo, amargos tears to my eyes.
They alone see the full fury of his fire.

He has fuego in his eyes.

They sparkle when he smiles,
Crackling fuego behind dark irises.
They are beautiful because of the firelight behind them.
What is he thinking of as he smiles at me,
The flames in his eyes gleaming brightly?
He's thinking of the thing we both hold dear,
The treasured, precious amor we share.

He has fuego in his...
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posted by T-lover
what I'm escritura isn't exactly an articulo , but I hope tu will enjoy it ^_^ ..

Girl; Do I ever cruzar, cruz you'r mind ?
Boy; No .
Girl; Do tu like me ?
Boy; No .
Girl; Do tu want me ?
Boy; No .
Girl; Would tu cry if I left ?
Boy; No .
Girl; Would tu live for me ?
Boy; No .
Girl; Would tu do anything for me ?
Boy; No .
Girl; Choose me o you'r life ?
Boy; My life .

The girl runs away in shock and pain and the boy runs after her and says ....

*The reason tu never cruzar, cruz my mind is because tu are always on my mind .
*The reason why I don't like tu is because I amor tu .
*The reason I don't want tu is because I need tu .
*The reason I wouldn't cry if tu left is because I would die if tu left .
*The reason I wouldn't live for tu is because I would die for tu .
*The reason why I'm not willing to do tu anything for tu is because I would do everything for tu .
*The reason I chose my life is because tu are my life .
posted by Bella_Swan3
Taylor had never shadow-walked with no destination in mind. Shadow walking was something she was slightly afraid to do. It made her feel unbalanced, as if she had been dado too much control. Like standing on the edge of a cliff, the wind pushing tu to jump, and some part of tu secretly wanting to succumb to it's persuasive power.

She opened her eyes to the flat, glassy expanse of water in front of her. The tiny sliver of the moon was distorted por the waves.

Granted, shadow walking allowed her to appear wherever she wanted, but to her, it also served as a constant reminder that she was not...
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slowly climbing

inch por inch

bringing me closer

to my doom

mariposas of

anticipation

flutter nervously

in my stomach

knuckles whiten

jaws clench

what have I

gotten myself into

the suspense

is killing me

I'm going to hate it

I'm going to amor it

I might lose my lunch

but I don't care

heaven help me

here it comes...

...

I hold my breath...

...

and then
I scream
my stomach
drops
my breath
is stolen
my heart
is pounding
adrenaline
courses
through
my veins
amid screams
of sweet terror
I fling up
my hands
and ride on
the wings
of Thrill!
posted by gossipgirlxoxo
I walked in and saw Dawn and Thor. I walked over and gave them both a look. “Where are mom and dad” I asked looking around the house. Dawn smile. “Still in Australia” I looked at Dawn with a confused smile. “Well then what’s going on” I asked. I was angry at Thor and Dawn and not because of Liz o that mom and dad were still in Australia, but because they weren’t telling me anything. “Well?” I asked. Thor looked at me but he didn’t smile he just stared at me. “We were told to go home, we don’t know anything” he dicho in a almeja voice. I heard a bang, I turned and saw...
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posted by CheeryDavis
Hi, so this is my first story put on here! It's in poem style so i thought what the heno, hay i'll post it! so here it is:

the sky turns black and gray
all the color withers away
but in your arms i will stay
come what may

the lights could dim
the sky could fall
the world could stand still
but your arms are all i can feel
and in them i will stay
come what may

the waves come crashing
pulling me into the deep
but your arms are all i can feel washing over me
and as tu pull me up and hold me close
i know that tu will never let go
in your arms i will stay come what may

the sky shines bright for the first time is...
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posted by iluvtheshow
I remember the día I fell in love.
Not just simple love.
No, this was head over heels, I'd die for tu love.
I remember where I fell in love.
A small middle school in a small town.
A place tu could easily miss.
I remember the my matchmaker.
A short women, but with más fuego then tu could ever imagine.
más passion for what she does then I had ever seen.
I remember my girlfriends who were with me.
My athletic, sassy, fun-loving chicks.
My flirting consultants.
I remember him.
Good God, he was beautiful.
Yes, I remember the día I fell in love.
True Love.
Head over heels love.
With..................
Basketball.

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This is dedicated to my first real baloncesto coach. She taught me not just how to play basketball, but how to be part of a team. I have so much respect for her and I know I should thank her everyday for helping me fall in love. For Coach Joy.
posted by CullensFinest13
tu hurt me I hope tu die I cant belive I trusted tu I cant belive I loved tu I cant belive I stayed up and worried that tu wouldnt call. I cant belive that i loved tu i trusted tu and cared for you. im tired of tu its time i let tu go but your always there tu wont leave me alone...its time for tu to leave so never come back walk out of my life i am going to lock my door and never let tu back in stay out so i can be happy tu need tu need to die let me live my own life tu shouldnt be controlling me anymore im not property im a human and i dont belong to the likes of you, tu were...
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posted by vampiress015
I presuming we all joined this spot 'cos we amor to write, right? If so then tu all know what I'm talking about when I say that we all amor our main characters and sometimes want to make them the best people in the world.

B-O-R-I-N-G

Yes, we want to make our main character gets the best out of the story, since it's their story. But if they're the best people in the world it doesn't really make them believable and then the reader just doesn't care about them (which is hard to understand cos we as the writer amor em, but unfortunantley it's true)

So here is my step-by-step guide to make sure that...
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