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         Chapter one: unexpected things
“This is so much fun!” Alia screamed with excitement. Alia was flying over the greenest forest she ever seen! It was bigger than her families’ garden. (Alia’s family had a gigantic garden, and a lot of money to purchase plants) She wisped through the green trees feeling the refreshing air flow through her long brown wavy hair, making it a humongous mess. She saw something, a shadowy figure. “What’s that, who are you” Alia yelled. The small shadowy thing came closer. It didn’t reply. “Hello?” she yelled again.
Alia noticed it was just a boy flowing through the sky, like she was. Without even noticing, he bumped into her and they both fell through the trees and hit the forest floor. Alia tore part of her bright blue dress on a árbol branch. “Ow” Alia and the boy dicho at the same time. “Sorry didn’t see tu there, I’m Daniel” he dicho as he stood up and pulled Alia up as well. “It’s all good” She dicho as she looked at her torn dress.
They began walking toward an oversized tree. “Lia, Lia” a colorful loro dicho in the background. It was standing por the tree. It sounded like her mother “Alia Alia, wake up” the loro dicho again. Allia opened up her eyes drowsily. “Sorry to wake tu honey, but I really wanted to introduce your new paino teacher” Alia’s mother said. “What happened to Ms. Harley” She asked with her eyes shut. “She quit and I don’t know why” her mother replied. Alia finally opened her eyes. She looked at her new paino teacher. He looked familiar and looked about her age. He’s brown smooth hair even looked familiar. “Daniel!?” She blurted out. “How do tu know my name I didn’t even introduce myself yet?” Daniel asked with an akward look on his face. “Um… lucky guess” she said.
Alia blushed and then heard the loud door campana ring and she ran downstairs. Daniel followed her. Alia opened their brown over sized door and her best friend Kylie rushed in. “Hi alia!” she dicho happily. “Hi Kylie, why are tu so excited” asked Alia “Sorry to interrupt but, who is this?” asked Daniel as he looked at kylie. “Who’s that?” Kylie shouted. “Ok Daniel meet Kylie my best friend, Kylie meet Daniel my new paino teacher” Alia said. “Oh paino teacher, wait are tu a little young to be a paino teacher?” asked Kylie. “No I’m just a talented música player” Daniel answered. Then the doorway went quiet. Then Alia gestured them both to follow her to her room that was on the 3rd floor of their gigantic 5 story house. “Ugh why couldn’t we take the elevator?” asked Kylie when they finally got to her room. “I don’t know, Sorry Kylie” Alia dicho taking deep breathes.
Just then Alia’s dog came rushing in chasing Kylie’s and Daniel’s dogs’. “Whose dog is that” asked Alia as she pointed to the brown and black puppy. “Um… that’s mine” Daniel confessed. “You have a dog?” Kylie shouted “Yep” Daniel said. “Cool, that kind of yellow-ish colored perrito, cachorro is mine, her name is Rosy” Alia dicho grabbing her. “That’s my dog the light brown and dark brown puppy” Kylie added as she picked her up. Daniel picked his dog up too and the three of them walked into Alia’s huge bedroom. The walls were purple with blue polka-dots and she had a rosado, rosa colored cama and her dog had her own little cama too.
“So…” Daniel dicho breaking the silence. “So.. what?” Alia asked. “I’m sorry but I am a little confused about tu being a paino teacher thing” Kylie dicho as she pointed at Daniel. “Actually I don’t know either, I knew I was a good paino player, but this place drew me in when I figured out tu needed a paino teacher” Daniel replied. “hmm…” Kylie dicho loudly. “Well how did tu and kylie meet?” Daniel asked Alia. “Oh we met at one of Alia’s performances and…” Kylie said. Daniel rudely interrupted. “Wait hold on… performances?” He asked. “Oh, Alia has a great canto voice, and her parents amor when she sings” Kylie dicho “and my parents kind of make me perform but I do amor to sing.”Alia added
“Alia honey, time for breakfast!” Mrs. Penrose, Alia’s mother dicho as she slightly opened her door. “Ok mom” Alia said. She turned toward her new friends. “Let’s go”. “Fine, but can we take the elevator this time?” asked Kylie. “Sure” Alia said. They headed toward the elevator. “Where tu going” dicho a misceláneo voice out of no were. The three friends turned around it was Alia’s older sister Amelia, but they called her Amy for short. She was tall. She had long blond hair like their mom’s.
    “We’re going to breakfast” Alia answered. “Me too” Amy dicho as she rushed toward the elevator. She went in and the doors closed before they could get in. “Well I guess we have to wait, because the other elevators are broken” Kylie dicho as she put her hands on her skinny hips.

The big, silvery elevator finally came up. The three people jumped in and their perros followed them. “Ok the cocina is on the segundo floor” Alia told Daniel. Daniel went toward the big brown buttons. “Ok” Daniel dicho “Wait, what’s this button?” he asked as his figure went toward it. “No don’t push it!” Alia and Kylie dicho in unison. But it was too late. Daniel pressed the button and the elevator went downward. Kylie and Alia glared at Daniel. The elevator was still moving down rapidly. “Sorry” Daniel said. The elevator finally came to a halt.
posted by breebree446
 Although JP doesn't really describe his characters that much, he gives enough about Iggy to know he's blind, a pyro, and has fresa blonde hair!
Although JP doesn't really describe his characters that much, he gives enough about Iggy to know he's blind, a pyro, and has strawberry blonde hair!
So, we have the plot line and idea prepared. But what about the thing that makes it all come to life? The characters. This is a little articulo on character development.

Appearence!

tu know the old saying, "Appearence is everything."? Well, it's not! But it IS important when writing. As tu go along, think about what your character looks like. What's thier hair color? What kind of body type do they have. What's thier eye color. I'll admit i'm not a big fan of the "Hi. My name is _____ I have brown hair and blue eyes." What I do is describe the characters subtly. Like if one character describes...
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posted by Twilightluv3r
For the past three weeks Taylor and I haven't been getting along so well. All we do is argue about every little thing. Most of the time it's because we never have time to spend with each other.
He's still acting, but he's only getting small parts, so he thought he needed to practice his acting. It was so hard trying to be a bestfriend on his schedule, so we decided to distance ourselves, a little, for a week. The first two days were like hell. I did't want to talk to anyone except for Taylor. I would have talked to Amy, but she was sick.
But then everything turned around when Mark and I started...
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posted by odekanmi
I told someone once,
"You are alone".
The person refused to agree,
"Why?",
"What for?",
"Why should i be told I'm alone"
Those were the words most probably flowing through the fellas mind at the time,
Think of it,
Stop,
Take a deep breath,
Think again,
Who were tu with the last second?,
You, yourself and you,right?,
Look around you,
Are tu sure this is where tu want to be?,
I look,
Right now,
And,you know what I see?,
No one.
Nada Nada person,
Well that's my own language, forget it.
There's no one there,
But I do what I do best,
Suffer in silence.
posted by deathchick9
Syayuki Kimihiro,is a normal Japaneses high school girl trying to find her place and make friends,but when she was 5 she was taken from her home,she has many nightmares about this event even after 11 years,These nightmares consist of demons monsters and gargoyles.Her family says that it's normal sines she was found unconscious with no memories of this horrible event,now she has episodes where she has excruciating chest pain till she falls unconscious.Her mother being a doctor was able to make a vaccine for her but it only works for one day.Suddenly four new students appear making her episodes and nightmares worse.As if that's not bad enough now there are strange marks on her left wrist that hurt like hell.Do these new students have something to do with it and why is the leader constantly flirting with her?
o was someone threatening me? Signs of threats weren’t the ones I had.
Maybe just warnings.
    “Glorious, Have tu ever, had signs before? tu know, like something warning tu not to go on o go some place?” I asked myself. I shivered in the coldness of my room. I liked it cold.
    “I don’t understand you,” a voice rang to my left. There, in the middle of my doorway, stood Looi, my older brother. He was leaning on the door frame.
    “Hey, do tu mind? I’m getting ready. Don’t tu have your own bathroom?” I asked...
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posted by InnocentNoMore
Feel like falling,
    but sure to stand fast.
Feel like letting go,
    but afraid of the rash,
Feel like giving up,
    but afraid to sleep,
Want to jump,
    but afraid to of falling off way to deep.
Sometimes life takes me in weird directions,
    but knowing me, its all imperfections.
Sometimes emotions nube every single thought,
    and knowing my actions, I’m here to rot.
Forever will my mistakes continue to haunt me,
    standing here, I now see.
What if things could be different siguiente time?
    Would it then, take a lifetime?
posted by amethyst44
The one thing that never freaked me out before was when the teacher got mad at us, especially Mr. Donnahue. But watching him shred up each and every paper that he touched on that dumb escritorio of his...well...it made me shiver a bit.
That's when I saw it; my paper, neatly written in my cursive writting, only with rosado, rosa gel pen instead of the standard pencil. Under my desk, I crossed my fingers, hoping, waiting, praying. I shut my eyes.
Then I heard it; riiiiiip.
I opened my eyes, blinking as I followed Mr. Donnahue's hands, which held my torn paper, throw the scraps over the edge and into the trash...
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(Before tu read this, remember that this character is a student at a sailing school, and can fly.)

I woke up. It was cloudy. The green sea went into ginormus waves the size of sharks. I went outside.
My barco was shaking in the weather, and it was all wet. I sailed it anyways. I grabbed the steer, raised the anchor, and went out.
    The sea was hard on me. The waves pulled my white, small, wooden barco up and down the great seas. I felt great. I felt brave. I felt calm.
    Rain started to fall down as the clouds got darker. It was amazing. The wind blew...
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posted by TeamRosalieHale
21: Every Famous Last Word

IT continued to follow the trail of the carriage-leaving Canada, coming back to the states, through Montana, North Dakota, Minnesota. IT sensed the trail went different from north but IT was not entirely sure which way.
Master watched and occasionally offered praise to IT, always reminding IT to get the blonde, alive, bringing her to master. Along the way, IT killed a stray vampire here o there, master smiling the whole time at the mess.
Oblivious to the danger that was closing in fast, the carriage marched on to Ohio, darkness had settled in, Tristan was sound...
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posted by TeamRosalieHale
20: amor Remains the Same

It was early morning the siguiente day; Tristan had woken shortly before the sun, though he appeared quite different from the golden-haired blue eyed god Rosalie had seen: his hair was dark brown, his eyes a hazel color with a tad of green. “Today, I’m going to visit two of the ones I changed oh about seven, eight years ago. Then, we will head home, east through Indiana, Ohio, West Virginia, then south to home. Sound good?”
“I feel the need to hunt” David said, bookless for the first time.
Tristan nodded. “Very well. You’ll probably be back before we are.”...
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posted by TeamRosalieHale
10: Hero

por then, the two had stopped fighting, though Alice was still fuming, not that Rosalie could really blame her. Once again, Alice was unsure what came next: half of her wanted to just run and run until she had left it all behind and the other wanted to stay though this was mostly to see what Rosalie meant por Jack meaning so much to her.
Tristan, Jack, Michael and David waited inside the carriage. Tristan was in no hurry and Jack would have jumped off and followed Rosalie in a second. That kiss had sealed the deal and answered the pregunta that had plagued him so many years: had she...
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"this cant be!" Vanessa screamed.it was so loud,the walls began to shake.

"Vanessa,"her mom said."Come down! tu need to learn to use tu powers,and to control them.

"bu,bu,bu------This is all a dream!yeah,in a second,ill wake up,and not be a vampire."

She blinked 3 times,but she was still there.Not in bed.

"but,but,but,but,vampires aren't real!"

"thats what i thought,too.But,its true,its all true.You are a vampire,Vanessa,and tu cannot tell anybody,ok?"her mom dicho with wide eyes.

"ok,"vanessa said."i understand. but really,she didt.



the siguiente day,Vanessa didnt want to go to school.This was becuase...
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posted by Fangirl99
Izzy POV

It was about 12:01. I was going out to howl at the moon. When i walked outside, i saw a note. Iread it aloud.
Meet me in the woods at midnight.
love,
Your secret admirer
me:Wow,i have a secret admirer. maybe its owen. No wait, cody! no no, JUSTIN!!! o trent. What about Geoff?
I wondered all the way there. then, i tripped on a leg.
me:AHHH!
duncan: hola there babe.
izzy: what? oh, hi duncan. now, whos the secre admirer?
duncan: your looking at him.
me*laughs*okay, okay. tu got me. now, who is it?
duncan:me.
me:oh, really?duncan: uhu!
3rd person
izzy: oh, okay then are tu sure?
duncan; yes babe.
izzy: okay then
duncan: so,
izzy: tu wanna make out.
duncan:okay
*2 hours later*
*2 más hours alter*
izzy: okay well that was fun
duncan: yeah, uh, so, see tu later.
izzy:okay
duncan: yeah.cool. okay then, bye!
izzy: bye.
*15 min later*
both: I amor U! *start making out*
posted by Free_Spirit
me: sorry the name is kinda weird. Okay well i wrote this for english class, and my teacher didn't have enough room to write a proper comentario just that it was very busy. so um yeah tell me what tu think. Please i honestly don't mind the harsh truth. Okay here we go.
ps.Its about ancient greece, and sorry if the names are to weird

I sighed and leaned back against the wall, my hands were trembling, making it that much harder to read my book. Usually poesía calmed me down, but today was an exception. The sun was glinting through the clouds. Today was the día the Mykene men came to take me to Lukae...my...
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 "I could see the sorrow in his perfect blue eyes,something was wrong."
"I could see the sorrow in his perfect blue eyes,something was wrong."
Leonardo.....Leonardo....Leonardo.I just couldn't help but melt like an ice cream cone a on a Texas summer day, as I dicho his name over and over.He was just perfect.But I still had my worries about Lulu.Leo still hasn't explained the hug to me.But I don't want to be pushy with Leo.I wasn't exactly with Leo(yet) but we were actuación like it.I didn't want to ask him,I wanted him to ask me.But I could tell he didn't want to break the ice.He knew I liked him but he still so nervous(it was so cute to me).I just wished he would ask already,what was holding him back from me?I certainly wasn't,so what...
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I was completely dreading the fact that I had another seven más hours until I had to face Joel for the first time since that rain incident.I was looking up at Juan's guesthouse bedroom ceiling.It was completely pitch black but yet to me,it dicho so much.It dicho how my corazón felt and how drained my brain was.The black ceiling stated exactly what I wanted to happen,for it to just stay night forever.Why did I have to go to school tomorrow?Why did I have to see that jerk and his perky,little,annoying girlfriend?I just want to stay here in this bed.

I sadly had three classes with Joel and two with...
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 "Jaslene's Dream"
"Jaslene's Dream"
"I don't feel like going anywhere at the moment Juaney."
The día after everything had happened with Joel was when the fact that he really was gone set in.I began my grieving I guess tu could say.I was now really hungry for anything I could find and very moody.I could tell my mood swings were definitely getting on Juan's nerves;but Juan wouldn't leave.Juan thought I was going to do something crazy as soon as he left my side so no matter what I did o what I said,Juan wasn't leaving.
I enjoyed having his company but at the same time,I just wanted to cry and be corazón broken just for today,but with...
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posted by viju
I'm talking to my friend,
She is my BFF,
And boy, are we having some fun.
We IM back and forth,
We sit on the front porch.
We talk about things on our minds.
We both hate the principal,
The staff and the admin.
At are very sucky school.
We talk about boys,
All our pets and our toys,
And what we wanna do in life.

(Chorus)
She's my BFF,
Well we hold some bets.
We smile while playing sports,
Our favorito! things are cool shorts.
We talk back and forth
We talk on that porch.
We are bestest friends,
And that will never end.

We struggle through stupid tests,
But we always try our best.
We eat at the lunch table,
We all tell...
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posted by TeanRose424
have tu noticed when tu fall in amor it feels like your flying? I have. It the most wonderful feeling in the world. But when do tu feel it? Do tu feel it when tu fall in love, o when tu just are overfilled with joy?






Have tu ever felt it? o have tu felt anything close to it? What does it mean? Does it mean that tu have to fly away from it before your amor hurts you? o does it mean that your body enjoys the joy filling your body?





Tell me what tu think...
posted by ashesandwine
I'm not sure if I'll keep this going but if I do, I'll post it on my spot and here:) I still remember posting my first story here! I after sent it to my spot where it's still going, but this was the first place and I thank tu all for receiving it:) Thanks! So I hope tu like this one too:)


"I amor you..." Was the last thing I heard from him, as the blade went through his throat in one gracious move. That was it... All that I had ever fought for, all that I knew and loved, lost in one single move! I was lost in the darkness, trap in the sorrow and blood...
"I'm sorry..." Was the last thing...
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