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posted by BiteMeCullen107
“Somebody turn the lights on, Somebody tell me what’s wrong I’d be lying if I told tu losing tu was something I could handle…” I had been driving for about two and a half hours the highways were clear I had the windows all the way done canto along with my I-pod.
In a matter of segundos I could see cars slowing down on the highway in Kansas and as the cars started to stop I could see a long line of cars in front of me. I can’t believe this I was finally going to make it to the siguiente state before the traffic started happening.
“Whoa” I jumped at the vibrating in my right pants pocket. I couldn’t get my phone out of my pocket fast enough. ‘Good I really need to get a ring tone and get rid of the vibrating.” I told myself as I struggled to get the phone out of my pocket. “Ha, Got it.” before answering my cell I looked at the name and it was my best friend Katelyn.
“Hey what’s up? I haven’t heard from tu in a long, long time.” I didn’t really have any time to say any thing ells before she interrupted me. “Your going to need to come inicial in a couple months.” I was confused and a little scared. “Why is everything ok?” I could hear she had a smile on her face know. “Oh ya everything’s great because Joe purposed to me last night when we were at the beach.” I was out of my asiento jumping with joy I couldn’t believe it.
I’ve been friends with Kate since we were in fists grade. Her and Joe had been dating since they were freshman in high school and they would always say that they were going to get married after they got out of high school and well all thought they were joking but I guess not.
“I can’t believe it.” “Why we always told tu guys it would happen.” I was almost in tears. “Now tu just have to find some one.” I was laughing to myself at that. “Ya okay and how many guys did I fecha in high school? One, and that didn’t work out because I was to much into my work so I don’t know.” “Okay I amor tu Anna but lighten up, hola I have to go I’ll call tu later k?” “K Bye.” “Bye”
An hora later I moved about half a mile it was getting tiring I was about to grab a couple of clothes and things I needed and stuff them into my an empty suitcase and walk the rest of the way to the motel. But just as I was about to I could see the front of the line and it was starting to mover faster. I could see the cops at the parte superior, arriba of the line flagging his hands to go forward.
I was just about to pass the cop and mover adelante, hacia adelante when I saw him. I never really saw him I saw him in my flash back it was guy at the end of the woods. But he seemed más real. He had short straight black hair that pushed to one side that was partly covering his eyes. He looked really pale, he had dark circles around his eyes. He was wearing a long black chaqueta and a pare of black jeans with nice shoes. I couldn’t see his camisa, camiseta because his chaqueta was buttoned up.
I stopped to get up but the officer put his hand on my door and told me that I had to get back in. I sat back down and looked back at the edge of the forest, he was know where in site. I started to pull away and once again I was back on my way to LA.
    How was it that it was baking hot out and there was know clouds in site so the sun was beating down on everything. So how is it that he was wearing a chaqueta and long pants? I was starting to get confused and I was trying to focus on other things but it was hard to we all tu could think about was this guy that was not only hunting tu in your flash back vision but in real life. I was asking my self so many questions. Like do I really know him but don’t remember, were is he from, why is he hunting me, should I tell any one; is any of this even real? He was so handsome, no he was beautiful.
    I finally just let it go and moved on with it. I couldn’t believe my best friend was getting married. Okay I need to change the station I’m tiered of listening to the same thing over and over. I pressed the button over and over and just stopped not finding a good station. “Now playing The Click Five, Kidnap My Heart. kiss 108 tu number one station for everything. “Hey girl what’s tu name? I think I caught tu looking my way…” I looked down at the station and was shocked I loved this group when I was thirteen but then Eric went solo and I stayed with him but I still like the group with out him just not as much. God I remember when Taking 5 came out on the TV and I tapped it and then watched it over and over again and my parents got pissed that I was hogging the living room TV so they bought it for me. I wonder if I still have, If I packed it. “You’ve got to hold me tighter cause I’m a fighter…” I stared canto along with the radio.
    
    Hours later I found a motel, it was nice not like a hotel but the best one I’ve seen since I left home. I spent about two hours searching threw my boxes and found a bunch of my videos and dragged it into the room. I rummaged threw it and found a bunch of videos that had been tapped when I lived with my grandparents in Missouri. So I popped one in that dicho lake party. I grabbed some pop-corn and watched it. I was laughing my head off but as my grandma turned the camera to sit down she faced it towards the forest and I could swear I saw someone there. I jumped when I saw it making the pop-corn fly every where. I crawled to the TV thinking about rewinding it and a couple minuets later I decided to do it. When I came to the point I paused it.
    When I paused it I just stared at it terrified. It was the same guy the exact same guy the clothes were the same he didn’t look younger then when I saw him today, if I really saw him if it wasn’t just my imagination playing around with me.
    I was just staring at the paused TV screen when I jumped as my phone vibrated in my pants pocket.
    “Hello.” I dicho still fixed on the TV screen I was más concerned with the fact that a guy - that I could swear is real – is fallowing me around the US.
    “How is everything going so far, your father and I haven’t heard from tu in a long time? Oh and I don’t know if tu know but Katelyn is getting married.” I was still staring at the paused TV screen. “Ya I know.” I shook my self back to the real world. ‘Umm every thing’s going great I stopped to she Grandma and Grandpa yesterday and I saw Mitch I caught up with him, Grandpa made his famous Zucchini Salad. Nothing ells has really been going on.” I was still caught up in the picture on my screen but I was trying to focus on the conversation I was having with my mother. “Okay well do tu want to speak to your father?” “I would amor to but I’m sort of in the middle of something right now, I’ll call tu tomorrow if I have time okay tell dad I amor him okay bye.” And I hung up.
    That night it took me forever to fall asleep, I looked over at my clock and it dicho one thirty and so I got up and grabbed my I-pod and collapsed on to my cama I plugged myself in searching for something to listen to “Artists, A*Teens, Aaron Carter, All American Rejects, All Time Low, Backstreet Boys, Beyonce, Boys like Girls, Carrie Underwood, ha here it is The Click Five how about Just The Girl.” I have to stop talking to myself,
    I listened to The Click Five and some of Eric Dill’s new songs and I started to fall asleep. Not a good idea.
    I was back at the lake but know one was there but me. I walked along the dock and stuck my feet into the opposite side of the lake that tu swim in. I stated humming a song, then I heard some leaves ruffle on the ground and turned towards the apuntalar, costa and I saw him again at the end of the forest I turned my head back out towards the lake and looked down at the water trying to catch my breath and then I saw his reflection in the water. There he was looking down at me. I was about to jump into the water an swim away when I started asking myself preguntas but the one that stood out the most was how did he get over here so fast.
    I don’t know how o when but I was standing up know looking down at my wet feet. He put his hand under my chin and lifted my head up, I could see his eyes know they were gorgeous, they were a light blue. Almost like the sky was today. I wasn’t thinking now, I was just blank then he was gone. I just sat down on the dock and stuck my feet into the water again. Something tickled the bottom of my feet but I didn’t think twice about it I just stayed there and then something grabbed my ankle and dragged me down I was know fighting for my lungs to meet the air but it wasn’t happening I couldn’t take it. I was being dragged down deeper then the deepest part of the lake went. I just started breathing because I needed the air but all I was breathing was the cold water, not fresh water but salt water.
    I woke up screaming for air. I sat up in the cama for a couple minutos just breathing. “It was just a dream Anna don’t worry.” I told myself. I was sweating and I was really cold. I turned my head and my clock dicho two thirty.
    I figured I wouldn’t really get any más sleep with the dream, nightmare I had just had. So I got up and grabbed some clothes for the día and my I-pod and boom-box. I turned on my favorito! and put the ducha, ducha de on hot. I was now shivering I could feel it moving down my spine and it was irritating because it wouldn’t go away. After and hora it was fading and I got out and brushed my teeth and put my hair up into two French braids. I put on my jean shorts and a t-shirt and a hoodie. I grabbed my box of videos and my little bag and stuffed then into the car and started for Colorado.
    Today I couldn’t put my windows down because it was raining and hailing and then sunny and then did it all again.
    After three o four hours of driving I stopped at a Dunkin Donates and grabbed two fresa donates and a large coffee. I sat down and watched the local news on the flat screen they had hanged on the wall. “Today’s going to be a rainy, hail, sunny día tomorrow will be sunny and in the nineties,” the weather man dicho over and over again until it was branded in are brains.
    They talked about a car crash that had killed two teenagers because of drunk driving, there was also a wild fuego that had taken out three neighborhoods. There was some news about the president and what he was doing wrong and what he was doing right. But what really caught my ear was that there was a kid at the high school that had a gun and was holding kids hostage. His name was Billy Carter.
    I was done eating but I stayed to watch the news. An hora later they had every kid out of the school but the ten that he was keeping. There were two kids that he had shot and they were rushed to the hospital. a half and hora later a cop caught him in the window and he was shot.
    They didn’t tell us if he had died o not so I got into my car and started driving to a grocery store. I picked up a six pack of water bottles and some easy to make comida and some snacks. I turned on the radio when an akon song was interrupted “Billy Carter was shot this morning and was killed. He died on his hospital bed.” I didn’t listen to the rest I changed the station.
    I know how his family’s felling right know. One of my friends in my high school had depression and did the same thing though he wasn’t shot they were in wood working class and he turned his back for a segundo and some kid stabbed him in the back he didn’t even make it to the hospital he died right there. I remember what he dicho to me he told me to never let any one push me around and that if I want something bad enough I needed to go for it.
    I still hate that people say he was a bad person but he wasn’t he was a good person he just had a hard time with life and he made a bad decision and died for it. God I didn’t go to school for a week every thing I did made me think of him. But I finally went to school and when people started picking on me I fired back and that’s how I got a good job at such a young age.
    This was an easy ride to California today the highway was clear know one was on it just me and a couple of other cars. So por the end of the día I was Nevada. por tomorrow I was going to be in California and I was going to be three days early. That gave me time to do other things like comprar o find placed I liked check out the playa I was so excited.
Disclaimer: *I'm only on Season 3 Episode 16 & I have not read the books!*

The Vampire Diaries is my guilty pleasure. It's painfully corny, overly cliche and not to mention has some less than perfect actuación but for some reason; I'm addicted. I have all this pent up frustration about the situation between the three main characters so I've finally broke down and decided I need to talk about it. This is a little overview as to how I feel about each character.

Let's start with Elena:

I can't stand Elena, no matter how hard I try, I just can't. I have sympathy for her because she has suffered...
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The lingering light was obliterated por the rapidly falling night. The once salmón and purple sky transformed into a vast expanse of jet-black that engulfed the town. A canopy of luminous stars materialized amongst the ocean of blackness. Some were dull, merely flickering into existence every now and then, but there was an adequate amount of shimmering stars to illuminate the dark, moonless night. The lake glistened, mirroring the dazzling assemblage of glittering stars and the luminescence from the moon. The faint wind brushed against the water's surface, the ripples ruffled the stillness of...
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posted by CupcakeMal714
I read this and had to pass it on.
my name is sarah
i am three
my eyes are swollen
i cannot see
i must be stupid
i must be bad
what else could have made
my daddy so mad
i wish i were better
i wish i werent ugly
then maybe my mommy
would still wanna hug me
i cant do a wrong
i can't speak at all
or else i locked up
all día long
when i wake up
im all alone
the house is dark
my folks arent home
when my mommy does come home
i try to be nice
so maybe i'll just get
one wipping tonight
i just heard a car
my daddy is back
from charlie's bar
i heard him curse
my name is called
i press myself
against the wall
i try to hide
from his evil...
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posted by MagicalMadness
I've always wanted to be a mermaid! I recently found this spell and I've already got some of the side effects! I know that not all spells work for everybody but I hope this one works for you;)
First the side effects: (are some of the side effects I got)
-dizziness
-headache
-itchy legs and back
-singing a lot
-crossing legs a lot

What tu will need:
-cup/bowl
-water(warm o cold doesn't matter)
-salt
-tea spoon
-belief that the spell will work
-10 pm-11
-a symbol (necklace, bracelet)

What tu need to do:
1.fill the cup/bowl halfway with water
2.put a té spoon of salt into the water and stir
3.drop your...
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A Screenwriting Dialogue Master Class & más - Full Interview with William C. Martell at Story Expo via FilmCourage.com.
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posted by hgfan5602
When will this end?
Mass shootings
Terrorist attacks
Police brutality

They say it's just a gun control problem
They say it cannot be fixed
I say the problem is deeper
I say there is hope

When will this end?
Income inequality
Veterans living on the streets, penniless,
Dying por their own hands everyday.

They say this world can change for the better
But nothing has changed...
And I truly do fear
Nothing ever will

When will amor start?
The día we offer a hand to the fallen
Instead of cringing back in shock
And running away

When will our world change?
The día we amor too much to kill
The día others' pain is our pain
The día we act instead of just talking about it

"It's impossible"
"We're too broken to be mended"
"It's a hopeless battle"
I say, let us try.
posted by NagisaTomoya
Remember to please post feedback in the comments!


The día tu Slipped Away: Middle
    I do not know what caused me to do it. I stood with my son in my arms, holding his head to my chest as embers flew and people scurried to put out the fuego I caused. I had lit Euphoria’s house on fire. No one needed it anymore, for I was taking Thomas to Yun Gong and Euphoria was… Well, tu know. I watch embers float por and one lands of my pale cheek, burning it ever so slightly. It was only más pain to feel. Thomas was     shaking as if he was cold, though the...
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posted by jedigirl
"Caleb? How? What are? Your a dimension jumper?" I ask, finally able to complete a sentence.
"Yeah I am. How are tu even here? Your not suppose to know yet," He stares at me.
"Same as tu apparently. Dimension jumping?" I guess.
"Yeah, I got that, but how are tu even in here. No one jumps in o out of here. tu have to be brought."
"So I've been told." I say. He looks at me. "And what do tu mean I'm not suppose to know?" I eye him accusingly. He looks guilty, like he just gave away a secret.
"You weren't supposed to know I can jump until later. Like Two years from now. When tu found out you...
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posted by jedigirl
I pull up to our house with dad right behind me. He rushes me into the house like we're being followed.
"Don't worry Kodi. We'll fix this," He tells me.
"I don't want this fixed Dad! I want answers. I'm tried of lying to myself. Telling myself that they're just daydreams, when clearly they're not! Don't keep me ignorant anymore. Please," I plead. For years I had been complacent about his silence, but not anymore, because now I have information and I will use it.
"Sweetheart, tu not knowing is the safest place to be right now. Until tu have full control."
"Control of what Dad? I can't control...
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         Chapter one: unexpected things
“This is so much fun!” Alia screamed with excitement. Alia was flying over the greenest forest she ever seen! It was bigger than her families’ garden. (Alia’s family had a gigantic garden, and a lot of money to purchase plants) She wisped through the green trees feeling the refreshing air flow through her long brown wavy hair, making it a humongous mess. She saw something, a shadowy figure. “What’s that, who are you” Alia yelled. The small shadowy thing came closer. It didn’t reply. “Hello?”...
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posted by Abyssail
A shapeless void. Interrupted only por the occasional shooting star. Every now and then tu can see colour flare into existence but as soon as tu notice it, it vanishes and the void returns. Sparks. Vessels. Charges and Impulses. Back and forth and back and forth across the void. Basic, baseless functions repeated to death and beyond. The system is all they know, all they're aware of. Incapable of comprehending the couture of convalescence conveyed about their crafted construction. Barricades exist, of course. Occasionally one of the roads will shut down and the vessels will be stuck in a “traffic...
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This is just the first 2 chapters; I don't know what I'm going to do with it much, but I want to get opinions on what I have so far. Thank you.

"How much longer?" Rena whined, her head on her desk. Her voice was just a raspy whisper, quiet enough to not draw the attention of Frau Abendroth, our study hall supervisor and Rena's German teacher. I looked at my cellphone.

"Three más minutes," I whispered.

"Kill me," she muttered.

"Halt deine verdammte Mündung," Frau Abendroth grumbled from her desk, not taking her eyes away from the magazine she was reading. Rena looked up and glared at her. I held...
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posted by gerybarzaka
Hello! This is my first post on this page, but I wanted to share a short story I wrote. I hope tu like it!


They say that when tu hit the bottom there is nowhere to go but up. I didn’t believe that. I was standing on solid rock and no one could convince me that it gets better. My dream of becoming a writer was shattered into little pieces. My corazón with it. I lost everything. I could barely make enough money to eat, let alone pay my rent. There was no passion in my life. My grandfather had left me everything he had and I wasted it. All of it. I was living in a lousy one room apartment. All...
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posted by E-Scope90
Okay, this is my oversized story. I just really hope tu enjoy. I originally publicado this last year, but for some reason, it got deleted. So I'm re-posting it. Enjoy.

The Streets of Manhattan
9:36 AM
I was running away. Running away from it all. I just couldn't stand it anymore. All the abuse, the fights....I couldn't take it.

I was literally running away from these guys. They were trying to rape me. They were chasing me with actual knives. I knew I wasn't going to survive. I was running in heels...I wasn't going to live. I wasn't going to live!

"Get away from me, tu ra-"
I tripped onto the streets....
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posted by misscrazel
If I put: **** it means they dicho a cuss word I don't feel comfortable writing.




Brianna was running through the woods, branches whipping her face. She glanced behind her. A young woman with long black hair was pursuing her. She shot an arrow at the woman but she dodged and it flew right passed her. The woman grabbed her hair and pulled her closer.

"You can't get away can tu Blondie?" she asked. her breath stank of pescado and blood.

Brianna struggled to get away.

"Your a tough one aren't you?" she asked, "Well I'll spare your mother if tu stop it."

"I don't believe you," dicho Brianna.

"Well than,"...
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posted by JellyPopper
WARNING MAY BE INNAPROPRIATE FOR KIDS UNDER 10 don't worry not real :P Chance Manner was a college student who was sent to an asylum for attempting to bite a mans leg off after using basalts without anyone knowing he took them. He has only tried once to grow big finger nails and slit his own neck open. So they put him in a más extreme room where someone has recently escaped. there was a rip on the side of the muro of foam, he found it and there was a hole that let underground then back up to the outside world. He made it outside and the world just got a whole lot más dangerous. His first...
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posted by Rae-Ash
It’s the color of you
tu always wore it
It’s the color we shared
As we hid form them

With it we showed our true selves,
Though no one cared
Our naranja book bags
Saved us from some pain

We protected each other
But it wasn’t enough
We were like two naranja crayons
When everyone else was green

Then tu left me alone,
All I had was our color orange
As they hit me
I took peace in knowing
tu were in the naranja field in the sky
tu always dicho was there.

The naranja of the sun set
Is your smile
Even though tu left too soon

Orange…

Now it’s my color
My way of remembering you
Now I am the lone naranja in the rainbow
Without tu here


I protect my own
Though I wish tu were here

Now naranja is my color
A color for tu bravery
A color for my survival

naranja will forever be our color
Even though death took tu away

Forever naranja for you,
Sweet Cassidy.
posted by StarWarrior
CHAPTER ONE
    “I’ve got it!” Shade squeaked.
    “Hurry!” esmeralda barked, trying to keep up with him.
    “Corner it there, quick!” Kitmira barked.
    Shade turned the rabbit toward the thick thorn bushes. It was getting tired. Shade pounced; he landed perfectly on its back.
    “Bite it!” Neko commanded.
    Emerald lunged adelante, hacia adelante and sunk her teeth into its neck.
    “Good catch!” Mamma called.
    “Did we hunt...
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posted by LaDispute
She was obsessed with the idea that tragedy is beauty and death is immortality.

He would watch her when she opened her mouth in class, watch the way she flashed smiles when she spoke. He swore to commit the crinkles at the corners of her eyes to memory, the freckled valleys lit up por her eyes.

He soon found that he could be the cause of those valleys, a Creator building up his own world from the base of her narrow satisfaction. She soon found that his convictions in tandem with hers had the power to endlessly pursue the edge of the universe in its expansion.

And when they first kissed that cold...
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posted by darkling_menace
(I have thought of a bunch of characters over the years, but since I suck at making stories for them to be in, I can only make the character itself with a bit of back story. Today is going to be the first día that I'll be posting these characters on here, since this is the escritura club, and I don't want my mind to be cluttered with character ideas. This character came to me when I was rethinking an idea for an old character.)

Darcel was once the leader of a tribe of ancient humans in what is now known as modern England, he was a sorcerer who used his magic as an advantage over everyone else,...
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