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posted by alexmswann
It was three o’clock on a Friday and the campana had finally rung for school to be out for the weekend. I hurriedly shoved my libros in my book bag and headed for the door ready to be out of school.
“Oh wait, Alisa could tu come here for a quick second,” my English teacher, Mrs. Thompson asked. I turned around wishing I could be out this school. She was a very tall and light skinned lady, in her mid-thirties. She had long stringy black hair and big brown eyes. tu would probably think she was a retired model. I quickly went to her escritorio trying not to seem I was rushing her.
“Um I just wanted tu to know that I read your essay over George Washington and you’ve really gotten better with your writing. I want tu to keep up the good work, “she said.
“Thank tu and I will,” I laughed.
“Ok, see tu tomorrow”
“Ok, bye Mrs. Thompson.”
I left out the class room and started on my way home. The walk from Hillson High school was not a very long walk at all. It probably was ten minutos at the most. It was a pretty warm día in April. A nice to día to have a picnic o something. Thinking about picnics reminded me of the time Mom and one of her old boyfriends took us on a picnic. Mom has had many boyfriends in her life. Too many to count. She always says one día she’ll find the right person for her. That one día seems like never.
    We lived in a pretty nice neighborhood. Not too much crime and the houses were fairly new. I finally came up to our two story house. It was the white picket fence dream house every woman wanted for her family. It was all brick and had red shutters and a red door, green bushy césped, hierba and a big oak árbol on each side of the yard. Mom always made sure the house was nicely taken cared of since dad wasn’t around anymore to take care of it.
    I walked in the house to find mom in a nice silky looking black dress. She looked like she was rushing to find her other earring. I threw my book bag on the couch.
“And where are tu off to at three o’clock. I thought the dating hora was six,” I jokingly said.
“And Hi to tu too,” she responded. I sat on the sofá and waited for an answer.
“Well I’m actually going on a fecha with a guy named Jared. He’s one of my co-workers at the company and, I really think he’s the one”
“He’s the one just like Chris, David, Ben, oh and that other guy who smelled like shaving cream, Jeff”
“Well that was just a misunderstanding” Mom stood in the entry hall mirror fixing and puffing up her hair. She applied más mascara and eye liner.
“And what am I supposed to eat while tu gone?” I asked.
“There’s chicken and arroz on the stove.” Mom walked around the den.
“I know im forgetting something.”
I thought along with her. “Your purse,” I said
“Yes! Good thinking.” Mom rushed upstairs. I thought to myself what is she getting her self into? The front door rung.
“Could tu get that honey, I think that’s Jared,” Mom hollered from upstairs.
“I guess that’s prince charming,” I dicho to myself. I went and opened the door.
He woke up with a jump.

Dammit. Not again.

He had been dreaming about her. It happened every time he thought he was getting better. It seemed like she didn’t want to be forgotten. She kept finding her way into his mind. He sat up in the dark, shaking. He knew he wouldn’t be able to sleep in the cama for a while again. Too many memories there. Too many thoughts of her wrapped around him under the covers. He couldn’t handle it. Once she got into his head, it took weeks for him to drive her out again.

He went out into the cocina and got some water. Then he stared at his reflection in the window...
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posted by animefangirlz
I was 13 when i had my first love.not my first boyfriend but someone i actually loved.
    
My name is Elisabeth Maddison,but everyone calls me "shinigami" it means " god of death",for my 13th birthday my older cousin Geettto took me to his gig.He plays lead guitarra and vocals for their band. He kept telling me how much they kick butt and all the battle of the bands they won. I just kept walking in the rain as it poured down flooding the sky. We got to the place,it was an old former shed for shipping trucks. The small factory behind it turned into a música store.They give local...
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posted by coriann
The house lights were on bright. It was a lonely brick house, brownish cream and had a red galvenise roof. there was a square arch around the front door. It was big and had a light and a bench on the side. I walked up the one step to the open door. The boy had already run inside. Contrary to the arch, the inside of the house was black and dim and full of decor and dim lights. I should have noticed from looking at the glass louvers.
I saw a Muslim lady in naranja on the phone. She was fair (light brown) and thick. The naranja sari was high up over her knees. "Mam, Mam"
She was laughing, but she...
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posted by noahnstar1616
-The siguiente Day-
I peeked from behind the left corner of the school and saw Cameron carrying Mercury's book towards the school entrance. Perfect. I turned to Zoey and Francine, who were right behind me. "I'm ready. How do I look ?" I had on the outfit Francine picked out for me and the makeup Zoey put on me yesterday. My hair was in a french braid, courtesy of Zoey's mom.

"Beautiful", dicho Francine.

"I'm jealous", dicho Zoey.

"Thanks." I turned back to look at Cameron, who had probably forgot something because he was walking back to his car. "Wish me luck." I rushed towards Cameron. "Hey."

"Hey." He...
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posted by noahnstar1616
-The siguiente Day-
I woke up. The sun was shining in my eyes. I called my nurse and asked if she could close the blinds. She did. I grabbed my cama remote and pressed the button that allows new to sit up. Once that is done, I notice a mesa, tabla with a tray of eggs, baco, and naranja jugo, jugo de on it. I reach for the tray and put it on my lap. I begin to eat. Not bad, but not good either. I grab the televisión remote and turn on the television. I decide to watch Looney Tunes. Then my Grandma walked in.

"Good morning, sweetie." She was carrying a ziploc bag with a bagel inside. "Don't eat that stuff." Shm grabbed...
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posted by noahnstar1616
My world was dark.

The only thing I could see was the events that just took place; me running into the road, me seeing the car, the car crashing into me. It was like someone put my mind on replay.

I opened my eyes. Everything was hazy. Something bright shined in my eyes. It stung. I turned my head. There are flashing lights everywhere. My eyes finally come back to focus.

Police cars. An ambulance. The car that hit me. My towns news station.

"She's waking up", I heard a man's voice say.

"Thank God", I heard Cameron say. I turned to look at him. Then it hit me. That was Cameron who hit me.

I tried...
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posted by tbone_21
okay sooo this chapter is very long... I don't think the others will be quite this long but I wanted to get the descriptions of the characters out of the way, enjoy and comment!
The first thing I was aware of was the smell of a fire, I closed my eyes and inhaled deeply, inhaling my new favorito! smell. I was dancing, I could feel the cool grains of sand between my toes and could tell that the sun had long since sunk below the horizon. My friends and I were canto loudly to a fast paced song our feet pounding madly against the sand.
I didn’t pay attention to any of these things though I just...
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posted by problematic124
*******First of all before I start I would like to thank tu for thanks for the comments. And I forgot to do this for the prologue but this belongs to me it’s my copyrights. Something I came up with. Enjoy!!!!!!!!
Present Time
Chapter 1
New beginnings
"I just don't understand why we didn't stay in Egypt...or England"
"Kyle your stepfather lives here"
"So"
"Were meant to live with him"
"So"
"Kyle"my mom dicho in her warning voice
Exasperated I sighed and held up my hands in surrender.
"Kyle I know it's hard now but you'll get used to it"she dicho gently
"Well will tu at least let me check out that awesome...
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posted by problematic124
Laughing heals the soul. What makes tu laugh? Were all different. As a writer in training I'm experimenting on the"fun factor". Down the page are some funny stuff and I'd like to know which one makes tu laugh the most. If tu found a funny pic please post it and please comentario on the pictures.
Now like I've dicho we all have different tastes and it all is on you. Laughing is a very fun excersise.And these pictures are funny (or at least to me). Hold on to your socks lady and gentlemen it's time to get your laugh on.
Please comment!!!
Now let's have some laughs!
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posted by OfficialKate
 Humphrey sad :(
Humphrey sad :(
Kate: I remember this día like it was yesterday when I was a young pup at lobo school there was a prom I made a huge mistake....

It was a warm spring evening the sunset was beautiful Humphrey looked at all the lobos dancing happily he frowned. He went over to his "date" Josephine. "Jossphine I need tu to dance like you've never danced before I need to let Kate know I'm the one for her!" Josephine frowned and laughed. "Yeah well shes and alpha your an omega." "Well than why am I with you, your an alpha." Humphrey scolded. "We are a fake couple your impressing Kate I'm impressing Skeeter." Josephine...
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posted by Lore_Master
Our hero fell to his knee's "Wha....what....no all my work and research.....gone!" he dicho as he clutched his chest gasping for air, as día turned to night he sat there with an empty feeling eating him from the inside, he looked up at the star's "Why me why do.... why the fuck does this happen to me!!!" the hero yelled as he started pounding the ground violently, his whole body filled with rage and sadness knowing all of his work was just wasted he began to shed tear's it seemed the más he hit the ground the further it plunged him into dark thought's soon thinking of resorting to evil necromancy...
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posted by samuraibond005
Jiko went to a small school in a small town in Missouri where everybody was the same in likes, dislikes, and even very similar in personality, well, everyone but her and her parents. Jiko was just fine for a while, making all A grades in every subject with little effort, but then was the día someone pissed her off. Jiko had carried a cuchillo in her sleeve, something most people there honestly didn't think much of, she wasn't the only one who did it, even some of the teachers, did it, but Jiko did something that most people don't dare to do, she kept a revolver in her backpack. Someone had called...
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posted by AshleyA-Brizzle
Sometimes its Easier to inore the truth

to forget about everything

to sit in a closet and hide forever

Sometimes its Easier, to blame yourself

To think its your falt

To mostrar no emotion

Sometimes It's easier to keep everything inside

to not let anyone know

to hide everything.

To me, Its easier to say something

To talk

to cry

Its easier to Feel Emotions

Anger, rage, Sadness,

but not fear

Fear is my enemey

He wants to take over my mind

Keep me locked up inside.

I'm tired of being scared

I'm tired of being locked in my own world

I'm tired of being a prisoner.

I will not be afraid,

I will not Let him Win
posted by para-scence
"Do tu have asthma?" the gym teacher asked me. My thoughts flickered to Emery. He had asthma, right? Breathlessly, I nodded. "Go get your inhaler. Emery, go with her." Emery helped get me up, and we went inside, as I was taking my last breaths.

"Give me.." I rasped. "Your inhaler."

"What?" Emery asked, unbelieving.

"Get me your inhaler," I dicho through my teeth. My head started to spin. Quickly, Emery ran into the boys' locker room. A couple moments later, he returned with his inhaler, and handed it to me. I pumped some of it into my mouth, and thankfully it helped a bit. I sat there on the floor...
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posted by para-scence
"Shelby? Are tu ok? Kirsten dicho you've been actuación weird lately..." Paige said, coming into my room. I laid back on my bed, closing my eyes so she couldn't see them.

"I'm fine," I sighed. "Just leave me alone." There was a long silence.

"...Has school gotten better?" I nodded, más than necessary. "Make any new friends?"

"Yep..." I said, opening my eyes. I stared at the ceiling, then closed them again and sighed. A fuego started to burn in my chest. Why couldn't she just leave me alone? She was nosy and bossy.

"Have tu done your chores yet?"

"No!" I whined. I pushed my palms against my eyes,...
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posted by para-scence
"I think it's working," Carissa smiled at me. I sat between her and Rigby on the bench. Already, I felt great. My corazón was racing, and I almost couldn't sit still. After a few moments though, my eyes started to hurt. "They're just dilating," Carissa told me. "Here." She took off her sunglasses and handed them to me. I noticed her eyes seemed sunken in, and there were gray circles underneath her eyes. She blew her cigarette smoke in my direction.

"Thanks," I dicho energetically. My mind was racing, I could barely spit out the words.

"Just don't tell anyone," Jordan dicho on the other side of...
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posted by RiverIce
I sit there in my seat
when the teacher sees me
I stare at her
"do your work,"
she says.
I look at her with anger
I look at my math page
The problems stare at me
the campana rings
"Ahhh!" I yell in anger.
people stare at me
I stare at them back.
they run out of the class room
I sit there until the teacher finally sees me.
"you may be dismissed," she says.
I still sit there.
"go," she says.
I stare at her.
She stares at me.
We stare.
"go... don't make me send tu to detention,"
I stare at her
she looks at me.
"Ok, tu asked for it, Richard, Detention,"
I get up.
Still staring.
I leave and walk to the office.
I stare at the...
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posted by Insight357
“Hey, bitches!” Espen laughed throwing open the door. His blonde hair fell into his eyes. “Come on in,” he stepped aside and let us all pass. One por one, we all trailed into the crowded, alcohol smelling living room.
    Music was softly playing behind everyone’s chatter. Boys and girls danced with and groped one another. In a corner, some students I recognized sat in a group smoking. A few boys stood in the kitchen, cups of liquor in their hands.
    “Tatum, Nia, and I are going with Shayde and Lear to pick a game, tu coming?” Celeste asked...
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posted by nick_cross
The Exiled
Story setting:
Era: future
Character setting: witch and wizards, vampires, werewolves, phoenix man, humans
Setting: earth, United States
World setting: future, world war??, nations combine to make 3 empires: wizard empire, empire of man, world empire.
PROLOGUE:
For centuries we lived harmoniously; we had two different worlds. Two very different worlds. Their world was lived freely and without secrecy. In our world, that’s what it was all about, secrecy. Don’t make too much noise, don’t seem so noticeable, and most important, under no circumstances, don’t ever get caught. For a while...
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posted by Seastar4374
I don't know what to think of waking up practicially every hora except for this: 'Why the hell does this happen?!' I was seariously exhausted and I hardly slept. Apperiently the twins are hourly alarm clocks o something because thats what it feels like. Once they fell asleep once again I got my chance. I layed down on the sofá and yawned. I only had 12 hours of sleep,oh an hourly basis one hora per every two. I finally fell asleep yet again. They were quiet for two hours this time up until the boy started crying. I groaned and stood up exuhausted. I walk to him. "Whtas wrong baby? Huh?"...
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