I sat on the floor, looking outside. It was snowing, and tu could see icicles hanging from the parte superior, arriba of the window. It was so cold in the room I could see my breath.
I looked around the empty room; I was alone. In that moment I felt if nothing were inside me. As if, something had devoured my soul. I was resigned, and nothing seemed to phase me.
Suddenly, lightning flashed, and hail came down. Making pops as it hit the roof. Black clouds filled the sky, making for an ominous feel. I stood, and went to the window, to find the snow gone.
The rain started pouring down, and wind began to blow. I saw big waves in the distance. A hurricane was starting. The roof started to fold in. A mist came through the cracks.
Then, the roof caved in. A fuego started to blaze through the empty room. After a moment, the fuego ceased; the house looked demolished. Charred remains laid on the ground.
I was now standing outside, it was around twilight. Graves surrounded me; most of them were worn down from the elements. One of the graves I was studying had ‘Anozi’ written on the front. My corazón contracted.
As I lost my breath, the earth began to shake. Two tectonic plates crashed, sending a volcán to appear ten feet from me. It erupted, magma on the ground. Before the lava touched my feet, the volcán disappeared.
A labyrinth appeared where the volcán had set only a moment ago. A picture of a key hung on an outside wall. The key was hidden in the labyrinth.
Nightfall came. I laid down on the cold ground, and watched the sky. The moon was full, and bright. A comet streaked across the sky.
The comet gave me such an overwhelming feeling. Like life, it streaked across the sky so fast, and then it ends as soon as it comes.
The end was near, and I knew it. Why should I wait now? I picked up the cuchillo lying beside of me. I examined it’s sharp, silver blade. Then I jammed the cuchillo into my chest. It pierced my heart.
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I awoke breathing hard. It was only a dream.
I looked around the empty room; I was alone. In that moment I felt if nothing were inside me. As if, something had devoured my soul. I was resigned, and nothing seemed to phase me.
Suddenly, lightning flashed, and hail came down. Making pops as it hit the roof. Black clouds filled the sky, making for an ominous feel. I stood, and went to the window, to find the snow gone.
The rain started pouring down, and wind began to blow. I saw big waves in the distance. A hurricane was starting. The roof started to fold in. A mist came through the cracks.
Then, the roof caved in. A fuego started to blaze through the empty room. After a moment, the fuego ceased; the house looked demolished. Charred remains laid on the ground.
I was now standing outside, it was around twilight. Graves surrounded me; most of them were worn down from the elements. One of the graves I was studying had ‘Anozi’ written on the front. My corazón contracted.
As I lost my breath, the earth began to shake. Two tectonic plates crashed, sending a volcán to appear ten feet from me. It erupted, magma on the ground. Before the lava touched my feet, the volcán disappeared.
A labyrinth appeared where the volcán had set only a moment ago. A picture of a key hung on an outside wall. The key was hidden in the labyrinth.
Nightfall came. I laid down on the cold ground, and watched the sky. The moon was full, and bright. A comet streaked across the sky.
The comet gave me such an overwhelming feeling. Like life, it streaked across the sky so fast, and then it ends as soon as it comes.
The end was near, and I knew it. Why should I wait now? I picked up the cuchillo lying beside of me. I examined it’s sharp, silver blade. Then I jammed the cuchillo into my chest. It pierced my heart.
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I awoke breathing hard. It was only a dream.
She fell to the floor and wept, and the jar shook
The día ended on a cold note for the cold night
He had her corazón sealed in a jar, fragile and trapped
Until he had his moment and let go
With little strength, she had saved it and ran
She had ran until the darkness was unbearable,
As she wept, the jar shivered in her arms
Her dark blue eyes were drenched
And her mind was a dark, narrow corridor.
Her heat prolonged in entrapment,
Torturing her unknowingly with each eternity-like moment.
Finally, she ceased her overwhelming emotions,
Now silent and pondering
Distracted, the jar fell, and shattered at her feet
He’s gone. He’s gone! The words danced in her mind.
Her corazón was free, and she was free
She got to her feet, no longer stumbling
And the shattered jar crunched under her feet
There was no más pain.
~~~~~~~~
...Yeah, I know it kinda sucks. Like I said, first attempt. :/
The día ended on a cold note for the cold night
He had her corazón sealed in a jar, fragile and trapped
Until he had his moment and let go
With little strength, she had saved it and ran
She had ran until the darkness was unbearable,
As she wept, the jar shivered in her arms
Her dark blue eyes were drenched
And her mind was a dark, narrow corridor.
Her heat prolonged in entrapment,
Torturing her unknowingly with each eternity-like moment.
Finally, she ceased her overwhelming emotions,
Now silent and pondering
Distracted, the jar fell, and shattered at her feet
He’s gone. He’s gone! The words danced in her mind.
Her corazón was free, and she was free
She got to her feet, no longer stumbling
And the shattered jar crunched under her feet
There was no más pain.
~~~~~~~~
...Yeah, I know it kinda sucks. Like I said, first attempt. :/
Ok, so I just want to write a little summary to my story that I want to write called A Place of Our Own I'm basically escritura this to see if people will like it, and if they do, I'll write more. :)
So anyways, it's about a Hollie, 17 año old girl who has an alcoholic mother and a step father who abuses her as well as her 12 año old sister, Amy. Hollie's been in a 3 año on/off relationship with a heroin addicted boyfriend, Danny. When a close call puts Danny in the hospital, he promises Hollie that he'll quit and they'll find a better life. This causes Hollie to realize that she needs to leave inicial and find help herself.
So yeah, if tu liked this, please comentario and there WILL be more. Thanks. :)
So anyways, it's about a Hollie, 17 año old girl who has an alcoholic mother and a step father who abuses her as well as her 12 año old sister, Amy. Hollie's been in a 3 año on/off relationship with a heroin addicted boyfriend, Danny. When a close call puts Danny in the hospital, he promises Hollie that he'll quit and they'll find a better life. This causes Hollie to realize that she needs to leave inicial and find help herself.
So yeah, if tu liked this, please comentario and there WILL be more. Thanks. :)
~ Chapter 1: Dreams
Love. Unconditional and pure amor was there, found in their hearts. Feelings, pure and strong lived from día to day.
But the days were cold. Cold wind froze their dreams.
A child was born.
Dreams, spreading its roots, now slowly fade.
But still live and last in the hearts of the dreamers.
A child wasn't a part of a dream, though.
It wasn't. But amor was still there, although destroyed por many issues, it started fading slowly like a smothered flame.
Mother's eyes was full of hope and corazón full of love, so pure, so gentle.
She knew. Life won't be leche and honey, though she must be strong.
Looking at her baby girl, happy and sad in the same time, so many thoughts were flying through her head.
So many questions, perhaps a small dose of regret.
She felt sadness inside.
amor was still there, that pure amor that kept them alive, though these dreams they both had were somehow far and unreal.
A flame of amor was still burning...
Love. Unconditional and pure amor was there, found in their hearts. Feelings, pure and strong lived from día to day.
But the days were cold. Cold wind froze their dreams.
A child was born.
Dreams, spreading its roots, now slowly fade.
But still live and last in the hearts of the dreamers.
A child wasn't a part of a dream, though.
It wasn't. But amor was still there, although destroyed por many issues, it started fading slowly like a smothered flame.
Mother's eyes was full of hope and corazón full of love, so pure, so gentle.
She knew. Life won't be leche and honey, though she must be strong.
Looking at her baby girl, happy and sad in the same time, so many thoughts were flying through her head.
So many questions, perhaps a small dose of regret.
She felt sadness inside.
amor was still there, that pure amor that kept them alive, though these dreams they both had were somehow far and unreal.
A flame of amor was still burning...
