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LOOK and every time tu think you're wasting your time, remember this!! Please :)X

I wander around town and see how much has changed. The builders are here all the time, every day. They change this town. It could be for the better but life is changing so much now, it's scaring me. Just yesterday it feels like when I asked if we could watch a video in the VCR but now I'm watching avatar and Alice in Wonderland in IMAX 3D. In a week we could have TVs in our mind.
I feel like I am wasting time, because it is going so quickly. I spend too much time arguing with my brother to notice how much time has passed since I have done something constructive. I write and act because it's my life. They are my feelings spread onto paper and emotions played in my eyes. Emotions I have felt, myself.
I don't want to be stupid. I don't care whether o not I am popular, I just want to be myself, and what goes goes.
The clock ticks, I can hear it in the night,
the constant "tick tick tick". It sounds like every segundo that I waste. I want to live my life. People say I have my whole life to live, but how long is life? tu never really know, for time is against us, and feels like we're using too much, so cuts our time short.
Not for all people.
But it could be anyone.

The clcok ticks on,
Don't stare just leave
Don't waste your time,
For tu never know what life may conceive.
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Twilightkris said:
I think this is amazing its sad but true! Have tu written it? I think tu have a great future as a writer!!!
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yeah I wrote it and thanks! i wanna be an autor so... yeah.
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twistandglue said:
This sumes up my life completaly. I am just wondering around idley with nothing to do.
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shadow-angel said:
WOW!!!! THAT IS SO DEEP!!!! fan me if tu get a chance!!!
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DragonsArt said:
It isn't Anthony Horowitz good but how it's told is R.L Stine good. A lot of people say my friend LostKid should be a writer. I think so too, her frases and stories are good. Could tu try and convince her? She doesn't beliesve us "Lazy Writers"
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boolander25 said:
lol I remember VCRs too! This is great (except tiny spelling errors, sorry!) but I like it. Not the spelling errors, the article, tu know what I mean ;)
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lol I'm British so i spell some things differently.
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maryshen said:
it's a good one. it just makes me forget, 'what was it all about?' and then realized 'Remember This!!'
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writer67 said:
remember to tell your brother tu amor him,for without tu he can not prepare for what is ahead,you are tu with a corazón of a ticking clock, beating proud and strong and ticking with two hands,and any second,you will realise tu are great,time is against us for we never have enough time to do greatness like da vinci o the other greatts wh didnt like to waste time, enjoy the life given, make yourself proud, as tu can never please everyone, please yourself its what ticks and tocks,soon tu will hear the song that was made por another like tu who listened to the same beat, and created twinkle star;-]
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