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What should happen next?

Okey, the main character has just movedto a new school, and her first hora teacher had picked someone to help her around the school, and she flirts around with him a bit. Not all like "OMG your sooooo sexy!!" but kinda like joking around and stuff, and she really doesnt quite realize she flirting with him. And now they're on their way to lunch, and he's going to introduce her to his friends, and I dont know what the conversation on their way to lunch should be about. So far, ive gotten down this:

On our way to lunch, which was after third period, Dante and I were still in good moods. Maybe the inscence that Fernando had been burning was accually a drug, and we had gotten higher than kites off of it. But that wasn’t likely. Not likely at all.
“Oh, Dahlia, sit with me at lunch,” Dante dicho in a bright and cheery voice “I want to introduce tu to my friends. You’ll like them. They’re your style.”
“Well if they’re like you, then I definitely will.”







And then my mind goes blank. any suggestions?
 OneFoggyNight posted hace más de un año
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ashesandwine said:
"He looked at me and started to laugh! His laugher was so happy, making me want to registrarse him.
"Thank you, I guess!" He dicho between laughs. "I guess they are. I've known them since first grade, they are más like family..."
"That's amazing. I miss my friends, it broke my corazón to leave and I still think of them everyday!" Only me could turn a happy situation into a sad one, but to my surprise he looked at me with a smile that litted up his face and said:
"Lucky you... tu have us to entertain you!"
He finished his sentence and I realized that we were just arriving at the cafeteria.
We picked our lunchs and headed to the mesa, tabla were his friends were sitted..."


This is just an idea, altought I hope this helps:) tu don't have to use it or, if tu do, tu can change it to your taste:D
Nice to help:)
Lots of love
Ashes...
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oooooooooooooh thats an awesome idea!
OneFoggyNight posted hace más de un año
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Thanks:) but that's just my opinion...There can be others:P
ashesandwine posted hace más de un año
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I like this idea más than mine!
lilacool posted hace más de un año
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LOL!!! eheh! Glad tu liked it! Whenever tu need something just ask:D
ashesandwine posted hace más de un año
sagigrrl1097 said:
He should laugh and tell her that they'll definitely like her because of her humor, and then she should flirt with him more...but my mind draws a blank right then, so it's up to tu what happens then!
Hope this helped!
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ooooooooh so insparational!
OneFoggyNight posted hace más de un año
1-2vampire said:
"Did I just say that? I look at him and he's smiling. Oh, thank god.
'Thanks, hey, when Miss (Mr o mrs)name put me in charge of looking after tu I was thinking, oh, no. But now you're not so bad, Dahila.' he said, grinning at me. I smile back.
'Well, thanks. You've helped me fit in great. I didn't think I would.' I said, grinning. (or cafeteria whatver)
'Yeah, well, you'll like my friends, they're like family to me. There's name and name more names oh, but I think you'll like name here we are, come on.' We had come to the doors with the big sign saying "Cafeteria" he opened the door for me and I smiled and ducked under his arm, looking around the cafeteria."


soz im not so good :S xD
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hm..thats not exactly what happened with the whole in charge thingy but.... xD awesome!
OneFoggyNight posted hace más de un año
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This is cool:D
ashesandwine posted hace más de un año
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hehe lol soz :S didnt really noe tu noe hehe soz agen :)
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lilacool said:
They shud keep talking,and then Dante shud say something like: I hop ur boyfriend dont mind me saying,but ur pretty.And Dahlia shud blush and say she doesnt hav a boyfriend.
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not exactly matching my characters' personalities with this book, but I will most definatly use this in another book!! ^-^
OneFoggyNight posted hace más de un año
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