Does this sound like a good idea.

I escritura a story (4-fun cause its relaxing 2 me) but right now it seems a little drab and repetitive. I came up with an idea but im not sure if it sounds like a good idea:
(the story is about vampires,1st i ever written)

The vampire turns his wife cause he misses her terribly but, the wife does not feel the same way after she is turned and falls for her husbands maker.

Tell me what u HONESTLY think...i mostly need something to stop this story from sounding so drab and repetitive