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Umm so i have this assignment..
okay well i've got a religion assignment where i have to mostrar an artistic interpretation of Jesus. Now i chose to do the sea and do a bunch of short poems...um yeah if tu could like help me, that'd be great, if youu think i'm going in the right direction, if its a tota piece of crap..okay.
ps. I REALLY need help with my ending, it sounds really bad to me
To feel the sand
The sun on your back
It’s a no man’s land
With no fear of attack
No chains of society
The sea frees all
Lose all your anxiety
And watch as the waves fall
God’s segundo heaven under the sun
Surrounding all people being
The sea will be undone
For those people foreseeing
The sea without God’s sight
ps. I REALLY need help with my ending, it sounds really bad to me
To feel the sand
The sun on your back
It’s a no man’s land
With no fear of attack
No chains of society
The sea frees all
Lose all your anxiety
And watch as the waves fall
God’s segundo heaven under the sun
Surrounding all people being
The sea will be undone
For those people foreseeing
The sea without God’s sight
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