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I found this and I wondered what everyone would think. Do tu agree o disagree?

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Carlisle's History-- It's clear that the Cullens operate with a different set of rules than most vampires. However, without knowing that it took two centuries of "torturous effort" for the clan's patriarch to perfect his self-control, o that now, nearly 300 years later, he's developed an immunity to the scent of human blood, tu can't really grasp the struggle that the relatively young Edward faces each time he's near Bella. o for that matter, the way his actions put the entire Cullen coven at risk.

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Alice and Bella's Friendship-- In the rush to tighten the plot timeline, moviegoers miss out on the development of a very real bond that develops between Bella and Alice. And, in fact, the countless hours Alice spends at Bella's house endear her to Charlie. While Twilight doesn't suffer greatly from this omission, it's going to require some serious backtracking for the now greenlit New Moon.

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Jasper's Power-- Here is an omission that did a great disservice to moviegoers. Not sure which one Jasper Hale was? He was the vampire brother that looked deranged, o at least constipated, every time his face graced the screen. It would have taken, what, a minuto to explain that Jasper has the ability to manipulate the emotions of those around him? One minuto to explain the reason behind all those crazy, intense looks he was continually throwing off.

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The Courting Process-- In the book, Bella and Edward's relationship is built over a series of months and hundreds of small conversations and tender interactions. On the screen? They went from animosity to inseparable in what felt like 12-seconds-flat, leaving the impression that this was just a bad case of perrito, cachorro amor (or lust).

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Bella's Cooking-- In an attempt to introduce local color -- with the added bonus of a cameo opportunity for Stephenie Meyer -- Bella and Charlie were often seen at a cena, comedor in the movie. In the book, Bella spends a great deal of time cooking for her father. In both versions, it's clear that Charlie's culinary skills are seriously lacking. What's missing from the movie, though, is Bella's responsible nature and deliberate attempt to build a relationship with her father. Two of the qualities that make it clear she's not the stereotypical selfish teenager.

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Meadow Scene-- Considered por many Twi-Hards to be the defining moment in the Bella and Edward relationship, the scene was not surprisingly shortened in the film. But the setup was also changed. Rather than sharing his favorito! (and hard to find) spot with Bella on a long weekend hike, Edward simply dragged her what appeared to be a few hundred yards from school. Hardly the intimate, trusting gesture of the book. And setting up a serious plot hurdle for New Moon.

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Nomadic Vampire Attacks-- Victoria, James, and Laurent didn't appear until the end of the book. In the movie, they began preying on the locals from the get-go. Sure, the grisly murders added suspense to the movie. But their established dining habits detracted from the threat facing Bella alone after the nomads caught a whiff of her at the baseball game.

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Prom Scene-- In the book, Bella is tricked into attending the prom with Edward. Alice lures Bella to the Cullen house, where she spends hours doing her hair and makeup. The unsuspecting Bella goes along with the events only because she's secretly hoping it's preparation for being turned into a vampire. And perhaps it's just us, but we seriously missed Bella describing the event as playing "Guinea Pig Barbie."

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Blood-Typing Lab-- One of the funnier scenes in the book takes place in biology. Edward (not surprisingly) skips out of class the día they are to do blood-typing. Bella, who it turns out can smell blood in a way uncommon for humans (and perhaps an important piece of foreshadowing) passes out. Knowing Bella's aversion to blood makes an interesting counterpoint to her amor for a vampire.

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Bella's Sleep Talking-- Edward can read humans' minds -- with the solitary exception of Bella's. When he discovers that she talks in her sleep, he starts hanging out in her bedroom at night long before she is aware of his presence. Without knowing his motivation for watching her sleep, the movie Edward comes off as stalkerish. Very creepy, in a way probably not intended.

* Don't get me wrong I am going to amor the movie either way and can't comentario because it's not out here yet, but would amor to know what tu all think. :-)
Hello, My Name Is: Death
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[THREE]
    I followed him into the lab room, and realized Tabra and the body was gone. There was a note in his place. I walked to it, picked it up, and read it out loud.
    "I called 911. They are on their way to help tu guys out. Jerek, tu need to tell them about the phone call, that's all. I'll meet tu back at headquarters, Cyd, put this note in your pocket once tu have read it. Bye."
    "Now, we wait." Jerek said, and a tear slipped from his eyes,...
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[TWENTY-SEVEN]
    When we woke up, we ate breakfast, and we all talked to Shropee about what's to come of this cult. She was happy to give us information, and I was glad she had some information so we knew más about these cult people. I wonder if they figured out Tabra wasn't an investigator yet....
    "What's the info?" I asked.
    "This information tu speak of, is highly dangerous. Just kidding, but I do have a few good things and a few bad. I looked...
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13 Honey Moon part 2

WARNING: This chapter will make tu melt, I know this because it is my fantasía with Kellan Lutz. Enjoy :)


Emmett smiles at tu and gets the suitcases out of the back asiento and tosses them on the the patio above tu guys.

You-Emmett what are tu doing?

He comes over to tu in .10 and picks tu up bridal style.

Emmett-I'm carrying my bride to the bedroom, that what a husband is supposed to do to his brand new Bride.

You-Oh well take me away handsome.

you giggle and Emmett opens the door, and carries tu upstairs, he gently places tu on the cama and he goes to the patio and rings...
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Chapter 3.

"Emmett, why wouldn't I believe you?" tu ask "because what tu know is why we happen to be around." tu look at him confused. "what do tu mean....we..?" tu say. "___, no matter what I tell you, tu must have an open mind." "I will, just tell me, tu can tell me anything Emmett." He looks at tu and then closes his eyes. "___, my family and I are different, and what we areyou wont believe me until I mostrar you." He opens his eyes. "What is it?" he looks at you. "My family and I are....Vampires." "what do tu mean, Vampires...?" tu ask with no expression. "Vampires as in, blood drinking...
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[SEVENTEEN]
(ATTENTION: THIS PART IS IN TABRA's POINT OF VIEW! THANK U, tu NOW MAY CONTINUE READING!!)
    I put on my disguise and got out of the van, walking up to the two guards with a clip-board in my hand, and a pen in the other.
    "You there, stop!" One of the guards said.
    "I'm sorry to stun tu guys," I dicho in my best southern accent. "I just got a phone call a while back and heard ya'll got some bugs in there."
    "We do?"...
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 Made this...hope tu like...:)
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Bella’s P.O.V:
Edward towed me up to his bedroom and lay me on the bed, “I missed you.” He said. “I missed you, too.” He smiled. “Can I make up for that, love?” I nodded, “Yes. What were tu thinking?” “This.” He tore my camisa, camiseta off and kissed me fiercely. “I amor you.” He said. “Mmmhmm.” He kissed me more.
About nine hours later, when I fell asleep. I felt him stroking my hair and besar me gently. I must’ve smiled in my sleep because I heard Edward chuckle.
In the morning I realized Edward had dressed me in his clothes and his underwear. The only thing of mine...
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While I was proofreading this chapter, it made me cry...lol. Enjoy! :]
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Gone for Good
“What are tu doing here, if tu don’t mind my asking?” Carlisle was not about to let him come close to Summer o Chloe without intense interrogation. “I had to come see whether tu have some beautiful girls of mine.” Summer’s head spun in circles; how come Manda hadn’t seen Aro coming? She hoped her friend was seguro from the Volturi. Chloe was the only one incredibly pleased to hear her father’s voice. She would have called out to him, but her...
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Hi again everyone! I honestly like this chapter because it's one of the turning points in Cold Roses. I hope tu all enjoy it as much as I do! Thankies for lectura :D amor each of tu guys <333
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Unexpected Reunion
Summer drifted off to sleep eventually, the tears remaining in her eyes. She never wanted to hurt anyone, particularly not Jake. She woke up four hours later, unable to sleep much longer. She rolled to her other side and faced her already waking daughter. Chloe’s eyes were bright and shining at her mother, “Good morning, mommy!”...
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[SEVEN]
(ATTENTION: THE FOLLOWING PART OF THIS CHAPTER IS IN HAUS'S POINT OF VIEW, THANKS, AND tu MAY NOW CONTINUE READING)
    I didn't bite him, oh no, not my Jerek. I kissed his neck, and then his lips.
    "Get off of me!" He said, and spat más blood my way. This time, I licked it off of his lips. "Seriously! You're sick!"
    "I'm thirsty, get over it." I said, and sat close enough to him to where if he tried to make a run for it, I could sustain him....
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[THREE]
    LATER THAT NIGHT: I had some helado with Tabra, and we talked about things we used to do.
    "Remember when we played the PS2?" He asked and I laughed.
    "I kicked your butt in Crash Bandacoot !" I dicho and he laughed.
    "I know, I sucked at that game!" He said.
    "Yea, that's why I made tu play it with me." I laughed and he did too.
    "Really?" He asked, and I nodded and took...
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    I yelped and jerked. I then screamed and I woke up. Jerek was sitting up siguiente to me, holding my hands down so I didn't lash out. He looked at me once I opened my eyes.
    "Are tu okay?" Jerek asked me, looking worried.
    "Yea, I'm fine. I just had a nightmare." I said.
    "We'll try to go back to sleep okay? It's only six a.m." Jerek dicho and I laid back down siguiente to him.
    "Do tu think the others heard...
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[EIGHTEEN]
    THE siguiente DAY: Jerek and I woke up, ate breakfast, showered seperately, and got ready to train. I was ready for the training, but I didn't quite know what we were going to use to train with since the basement is already full with the bunkers, the kitchen, Shropee's hospital room, the little meeting room, and Jerek's room. Upstairs is full too, unless there is a HUGE room that lets us all train.
    "Jerek, where is the training room?" I asked and he told me...
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    "Alright, let's begin." Jerek dicho and started the topic of discussion for the meeting. "You all remember Haus, and his grip of terror over us all. But here we are today, The Alliance, forming against him, for one día he shall fall, and we shall win. That day, is sneaking up on us fast. We need to be ready. We need to be quick, agile, ready to kill at will. I don't know how much of an army, o how many people Haus has under his Death Clan of the Fallen, but I will tell tu that...
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[THREE]
    "Seriously?" I asked him.
    "Well, seeing how I still need to heal, yea."
    "Oh yea," I wondered what would happen if we were running from the cops and I thought that we would be caught. For one thing, having a wounded man named Tabra, would probably be hard to run from cops in. I could probably make it, but Tabra probably couldn't. And I can't, I won't, let this happen to us, o him.
    "So, how long do tu think it'll take...
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I didn’t know what was happening, who was this guy I got the feel that I know him for a long time. I started walking to the door when the campana rang, and as I was crossing the door Julius passed por me real quick.
“I don’t know nothing about this guy, but I have to find out as soon is possible” I dicho to my self. I started walking to my siguiente class, and for my surprise he was there too, so I asiento siguiente to him again and………….
“Hello my name is Rennesme Cullen” I dicho to him, very polite
“Hi I’m Julius” he dicho as he turn around to my direction and meet with my eyes, he was...
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    And then she dropped to the floor. I heard a gunshot and saw Tabra standing behind her lifeless body.
    That's when the others marched in. I grabbed my gun, and we started shooting at the people that came in.
    Finally, in the end, they were all gone.
    "You really think tu can kill me!?" A voice said, and we turned to see Haus holding a sword from the wall. He was drooling blood, and he looked . "You can't kill me!" He then thrusted...
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    I jumped up and whipped out my gun, aimed it for Haus' chest and fired twice. Haus went down in a second.
    "Let's go!" I dicho and Rick jumped into the room, brandishing his knives.
    Tabra grabbed his arm, twisted it around and snapped it. Clean break, sounded like, if not, good! He deserved the suffering. Rick went down on one knee, and I shot at him, the bullet entered his skull. He's a goner.
    A chick walked in then, carrying a whip and slung it at Tabra. It wrapped around his neck and she started to pull.
    "Let him go!" I shouted and shot at her, she got hit in the leg.
    "You bitch!" She said, released Tabra and slashed her whip at me.
    It knocked the gun out of my hand.
    "Let's do this," She dropped her whip and walked towards me.
    "First class whore!" I spat and she gasped.
    "I'll kill tu for that."
    Uh-oh!
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Ok heres Heidi's Past part 5. Please comment.XXX


I had been in pain for so long. Let it be over soon I thought to myself. The coldness has disappeared almost as soon as it had arrived. I could feel the fuego racing nothingness towards me heart, my body was failing to it. This wasn’t right. This couldn’t be death, so what was it. It got to the point where the fuego got to my corazón and it felt like my corazón was taking off, then nothing. I couldn’t even hear my own heartbeat anymore, o even feel my heart. My senses were sharper; my instincts told me I was alone. I didn’t like to be alone....
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posted by twilight-7
Kayla’s POV


“Cheat!” Emmett shouted, throwing the controller down. He was careful not to throw it so hard that it might break.
“No I didn’t!” I shouted back. “You’re a sore loser!”
He stood up and I stood up. We narrowed our eyes.
“Let’s settle this,” he said. “One on one. Outside.”
“You’re on.”
“I don’t think so,” Rosalie, who had been watching us play the game, stood up and squeezed herself between us.
“Rose, don’t get involved,” Emmett said, trying to push her away.
“She’s pregnant, tu idiot,” she smacked him across the head. “Sit down.”...
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 Nessie Black
Nessie Black
I sat at the computer, typing an correo electrónico to my worried parents. Ever since I moved Micah and I to Colorado four years ago, they have been going crazy. They come down and visit whenever they can, but since the sun is out all the time, that is rare.

"Mommy," I hear Micah's little voice from the kitchen. He has grown so much in the past few years. Since he was premature, I thought he would be pretty tiny, but he has grown big like Jacob.

"What Micah?" I look at the door frame and see him sanding there with his thumb in his mouth.

He sighs and looks up sadly at me.

I stand and walk over to him....
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