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Today is a landmark for Twilight fans because Eclipse, the third installment of the Twilight Series, has finally hit theatres.

I have had the opportunity to see it twice and counting. I have to agree with the critics when I say, “Eclipse was the best ‘Twilight’ yet.” It definitely was. Not only did the cinematography add to the film’s richness, but the elements from the book were captured on film. This film brought the book it was based on to life. This film was the only movie that was successful in that aspect.

All in all, I loved the movie! I thought it stuck very close to the book, way closer than the anterior cine had. Of course I had my quirks though. I will share my positives and my negatives. I will not go through every scene because this would be a really long review if I did. Haha

DIRECTOR:

I felt the need to write a small paragraph about the new director. When Slade was chosen as director, many people were worried, including me. Yes, David Slade brought darkness to the film. However, he brought it to a realistically, dark level. And what I liked about Slade's direction is that he did not try and follow the directors before him. Continuity is there, but he made the movie his own. The film is tainted with his unique touch, and tu can obviously see it in the film. The tone of the movie, the wide-shots, everything is "Slade-copyrighted". We haven't seen these camera movements in the other films before, and I thought Slade did a fantastic job: with the actors, with the cameras, and with the movie.

CINEMATOGRAPHY:

The cinematography was absolutely gorgeous. From the landscapes to the tone of the movie, everything was beautiful. The movie was very visually dynamic and the coloring was incredible. The different angles, whether wide shots o close shots, they fit with the scene they were in. I will go into specifics when I am talking about certain scenes. To envolver, abrigo up this portion of the review, I reiterate what I dicho about him in the paragraph above: David Slade did an amazing job with the camera work. I would even use the word artistic. He had some unique shots, which I am excited to talk about later on.

****Obviously, Spoilers from here on out****

SCENES:

I would give a play por play review, but I am afraid I would mess up the order of scenes, so I will review them in the order in which I loved the most. This is very hard for me to do considering I have many favorito! scenes in this movie :) I can say that two and three are tied. I can’t decide which one I like better!

1)Edward Proposing to Bella. This scene was absolutely beautiful. I loved how similar Edward’s bedroom in Twilight and Edward’s bedroom in Eclipse were. They were two completely different houses in two completely different locations and I was very impressed. The color of his room, the golden glow fit the scene so well. It added intimacy. This scene was all about them. When Edward gave Bella the corazón charm, I do wish it was longer, and I do wish the whole “I thought it was a good representation” talk was in there, but the scene is amazing nonetheless. I will not gush about the kissing/leg hitch in this scene too much, but I must comentario that it was insanely…passionate. The emotion in the scene was building and flowing and that’s one element that I loved. Of course, Sia’s My Love song placement was perfect and fit hand in hand with this scene and helped the crescendo of emotions. The camera movements flowed and intertwined with the melodies. It was like having an instrumental song with the scene. I would not have had any other song playing during this scene. I wish this scene was longer, but maybe that’s just me being greedy. :)

I loved how Edward explained how he’s from a different era. I amor how he told her the steps in which he would have made her his if they were living in his time. “I would have courted you. We would have taken chaperoned strolls and had ice té on the porch. I may have stolen a kiss o two. But only after asking your father’s permission… I would have gotten down on one knee and would have presented tu with a ring…” I absolutely loved that. And after Bella accepted Edward’s proposal, she jumped into his arms and he spun her around and embraced her…I could not have asked for a better and más touching proposal.

2)Edward and Bella’s First Scene in the Meadow. I’m going to start sounding like a broken record, but the way this scene was shot was remarkable! The lighting, the ethereal feel of it, the magic of the meadow…it was the meadow from the book. The interaction between Edward and Bella in this scene was such an improvement from the anterior films. People seem to forget that Edward and Bella have light moments in the books, but this scene shows, they most certainly have fun at times :) Edward playfully whispering in her ear, breathing around her neck, playing with her hair… he was the Edward from the books. tu feel the closeness, the connection, the amor between them. Nothing heavy in this scene.

3)Edward vs. Victoria/Riley. What else can I say other than epic? David Slade dicho in an interview that he wanted Edward to be dark. He wanted to mostrar the audience a dark Edward. He succeeded. “You won’t get another chance like this again! tu want her! tu want me to feel the pain tu felt when I killed James! When I tore him to pieces. When I turned him into ash. When I turned him into nothing.” He was taunting her. He was playing on her feelings, her motivation. Once she set off, he crouched and they fought. Once he went for the kill, he bit her neck, then beheaded her. It’s one of my favorito! scenes because it shows that Edward is capable of fighting too. And that he’s más than capable of doing anything for Bella, even if it means him risking his life for her. However, the addition they made, Bella cutting herself with a rock, I loved it. Because… nothing says “I amor you” más than having the will to risk your life for a person. Upon lectura the script, I was a little wary. I did not know if that idea was so great, but it turned out well. I have nothing bad to say about this scene.

And small apoyar to Xavier Samuels. He played Riley really well, especially since the character is small. He made me feel… bad for Riley throughout the movie. And applauds Bryce Dallas Howard. The task of continuing Victoria must have been daunting to her. She knows the fan base and how hardcore they can be at times. People doubted her ability. I did not like that Rachelle was replaced, but I was positive Bryce would do a great job. And she did. The book says Victoria was feline like. A sweet, soft voice. Like a child. They both had great chemistry and they took their characters and embodied them. Give Bryce Dallas Howard a chance. She’s not half bad.

4)The Tent Scene. A lot of Edward and Bella fans will tell tu they hated this part in the book. Of course I am not too fond of Jacob’s fantasía thoughts, nor do I amor the idea that Edward is just sitting there, feeling completely helpless. Well, I am one of the few that loved this chapter. The movie wasn’t nearly as specific as the book, but the scene played out well. In this scene, Edward’s thoughts are revealed to the audience like in the book. The conversation vaguely mentions Edward’s reason for leaving [in New Moon]. I do wish they had más of the “four options” speech though. And it’s revealed that Edward would let Bella go if she were to choose someone else. The reason why I amor this scene so much is because Edward never had a chance to explain himself in New Moon. He did in the book, but not in the movie, unfortunately. But, we see what he went through. Rob played this really well. tu could see all the emotions on his face. He was completely disgusted with what he is. He was disgusted that he could not do anything to help Bella because of what he was. Rob did an excellent job with this.

And another reason why I absolutely love this scene is that it shows how much of a man Edward is. He stays classy. Jacob asks Edward “How did tu cope?” Edward respuestas “There are no words. But I wouldn’t wish it on anyone, Jacob.” Also, Jacob asks Edward “Would tu try and kill me?” Edward respuestas “That’s an intriguing idea…but no. I could not hurt her like that.” I amor that the audience can finally catch a glimpse of who Edward is and that he solely lives for Bella. How he would do anything for her, how he wants her to stay human and have a human life. She’s his “reason for existing”. In the other movies, Edward has dicho he wants her to stay human, but this scene, there’s an undeniable honesty there. tu cannot doubt him.

The scene in the movie compared to the book? Similar. The gist of the chapter wrapped into five minutes. I would have liked más conversation between them like in the book, but we cannot have everything. :)

5)Fight Training. This scene was so fun to watch. It changed a little from the book though. It was supposed to be dark, however, I liked the change they made. I think if they put darker tones in this scene, it would not have been so great. We can actually see what they are doing. I liked Jasper demonstrating how to fight. He would fight Emmett, and then give a tip. In Emmett’s case, “Never lose focus.” Edward vs. Carlisle was adorable. I loved their relationship in the book so much and I loved that we got to see it on screen. When they were fighting, Edward was… smiling. He was “fighting with dad” and I thought it added to their father-son relationship rather well. Once Edward smashed Carlisle to the ground, which looked amazing por the way, Jasper gave another tip, “Never turn your back on your enemy.” Rosalie vs. Jasper was cute since it was playful “sibling rivalry”. I loved how Rosalie smiled when she was on the ground. And Alice vs. Jasper, I am glad Alice and Jasper fans got a couple of cute moments between them. I loved how they showed Alice. She was cunning, but playful. Like she should be. Again, I do wish this scene was longer, but that’s just me being greedy again :)

6)Graduation. This might be surprising, but I really enjoyed the graduation scene. From Jessica’s speech to the after party, I really enjoyed it. I appreciated the fact that during the graduation ceremony, it focused on Bella, Charlie, Edward, and Carlisle and Esme. When we see Bella accept her diploma, and Charlie stands up and claps… it makes my corazón melt. tu can see how proud he is of her, almost on the brink of tears. And Carlisle and Esme share a smile of appreciation for each other during the speech after we see Edward. I think the reason why I amor this particular section of the scene is because I graduated this year, and it brought me back to that. I was in tears in this scene. “This isn’t the time to make hard and fast decisions. It’s the time to make mistakes. Take the wrong train and get stuck somewhere chill. Fall in love…a lot. Major in philosophy ‘cause there’s no way to make a career out of that. Change your mind. Then change it again, because nothing is permanent…”

The after party, when the Cullens, Jacob, Embry, and Quil were gathered in a room talking about teaming up to save Forks, I liked what Jacob had to say at the end. “Bella…this is was we do. tu should be happy. This is what tu wanted. Us… working together.” Something along those lines. In the movie, Jacob lost his edginess. I specifically remember in the book, Jacob sounded cocky and had an “it’s stupid for tu to worry” attitude, but this line sufficed I guess.

7)“Something's Wrong." This is such a little scene, but I amor this scene. Bella returns inicial from seeing Jacob for the first time. Once inside, there is a knock on the door. Edward appears and he begins to tell her how worried he was and how close he was to breaking the treaty… then he stops. He has this look on his face. A look of fear. He runs up to Bella’s room and touches her dream catcher. “Edward, what’s wrong?” The way he says, “someone’s been in here” is so chilling. I do not know what it is. It is how I imagined it in the book. There is nothing más mostrando in his eyes other than fear and concern for Bella’s safety. Not a big scene, but it spoke volume.

8)The Clearing. I loved the scene where Bella and Edward, Jasper, and Jacob were gathered in the clearing talking about scents. I thought it was cute. All the bantering. When Jacob picks Bella up and Edward plainly says, “Run.” más chills.

9)Victoria On the Treaty. The reason why I amor this scene so much is the Cullens’ desire to catch Victoria to save Bella. tu can hear it in their voice. When they are chasing her and she nears the Treaty line, Esme shouts “She’ll get away!” I loved that. I do not know what it was. Just the fact that she was so desperate to catch Victoria and that unknown fierceness. We have never seen that in Esme before. It was a nice touch.

POSITIVES:

--Eclipse. The ‘Eclipse’ título screen. I really have nothing más to say other than absolutely beautiful.

--The Make-Up. It is so much better in this film. Edward does not look old. He looks so young. He actually looks like a seventeen año old, which is a good thing! Since there are a lot of close ups, I am glad we could not see the powder on his face.

--Seth Clearwater. The boy is too cute. Even though he had a minimal character, I loved his character just like in the book. I did miss him and Edward’s friendship. I really liked that in the book. I also missed their fist bomba when they killed Riley and Victoria, but he was adorable nonetheless and it was nice to see him on screen.

--The Wolves. Their characters were shown through the wolves. tu could actually tell which lobo was which. The actors’ features were resembled in the CGI wolves. Big thumbs up to the art and graphics department.

--The Ice/White Granite Effect. In New Moon, we see the vampiros being torn apart and they were like stone. In Eclipse, we see plenty of vampiros being torn apart, but they were like ice o white granite. I really liked that. It showed how hard and cold the vampiros are.

--The Sets. David Slade dicho he was dado pretty much free reigns about the set as far as continuity. I think he did a great job recreating Bella’s room and Edward’s room, let alone the Cullen’s whole house, especially the stairs to his room. I thought the resemblance between the Twilight house to the Eclipse house was amazing. It looked the same! Such a beautiful house.

NEGATIVES:

--The Wigs. My goodness, some of them were just awful. Bella’s wig was okay in some scenes, but in certain scenes, it was very distracting. The parte superior, arriba of her head would be flat at times. Jasper’s wig… he always ends up with bad hair in the movies. However, during his flashback, we see him riding in the desert… his wig looked amazing there because of his hat. Victoria’s wig was pretty obvious, but it did not take away anything from Bryce’s performance.

--The Jacob/Bella Kiss. Before tu all say anything, I did not write this off as negative because I amor Edward and Bella. I put this in the “negatives” because it seemed awkward. I am sure it was for the actors, but the awkwardness was just leaking off the screen. I did not feel anything. Nothing like I did in the book. I was angry when I read the book. I was angry at Bella, but in the movie, I was not angry at her, I was just irritated that the kiss was going on for so long. Lol. The scenery was beautiful, but I felt the kiss to be awkward. tu can disagree, but I did not feel the passion the book described. Jacob did not grab her violently. I thought the kiss would have been más heated. I was prepared for it. But it turns out, I did not need to be.

--Angry Edward. I did not know where to put this, so I put it in the ‘negatives’ just because I would miss the change. I liked the change; however, I am also sad that he was not as calm as in the books. In the books, when Bella calls him up and tells him about Jacob’s forced kiss, he arrives at her house and checks her hand first. Then he walks up to Jacob and calmly threatens him. In a way, it could have been más chilling. I did miss that, but this way worked too.

--Angry Bella. I wish Bella became más irritated with Jacob. It seemed that she did not really lash out at him as much as in the book. I missed her asking Edward to kill Jacob, however, Edward, being the gentleman that he is, would say it would bother her in the morning. I wish they showed más of that, más of Bella’s disgust when Jacob kissed her the first time.

--The Last Scene. A big problem. In Breaking Dawn, after Bella has become a vampire, she says that she knows it was her destiny to be with Edward and to become a vampire. In Breaking Dawn. Not in Eclipse. When Bella is talking to Edward in their meadow in the last scene in the movie, Bella says that it was not just a choice between Edward and Jacob, but between who she is and who she should be. “I’ve always felt…out of step. Literally, stumbling through life. I’ve never felt normal. But now I know. I’m not normal. And I don’t want to be. I’ve faced death and lost and pain in your world. But I’ve also never felt stronger, más real… más myself. Because it’s my world, too, Edward. It’s where I belong.” And then says “You’re saying… that it’s not all about me.” Bella smiling, simply says “Sorry. No.” It has everything to do with him.

Page 267 of Eclipse says that “Forever means nothing without you.” The quote I provided from the movie, where Bella is talking about not fitting in, it is sounding like she just wants to be a vampire with powers. It comes off as shallow and superficial and completely and entirely out of canon. During Eclipse promotion, Kristen had dicho that the ending scene was to mostrar that Bella is also choosing for herself. She is not just running off with the guy. She is choosing to be with Edward and choosing, for herself, to be a vampire. And I do not get that. This had the potential to ruin the entire movie for me because this is what the movie, the book is about. Bella’s immortality and her conscious decision to be with Edward. Solely for Edward. Being with Edward means becoming a vampire, and she is willing to make that sacrifice because she loves him that much. Forever means nothing without him.

ACTORS:

--Kristen Stewart. All in all, I think she did an okay job. I do wish she had más enthusiasm in certain scenes. However, I think she portrayed Bella well in this movie. Better than the anterior movies. I like what Kristen brings to Bella. And that is inner will power and strength. We all know Bella is motivated and has a strong will in the books, but I amor that Kristen enforces that a little more. She does not make Bella as weak as she is in the book. She evens out the field. In the books, tu can tell Bella is completely different and out of sync with everyone. But in the movies, it is más believable.

--Robert Pattinson. I amor how Rob plays Edward. Even though Edward in the libros and the cine are a little different, the scripts change the character, not Rob. But I amor how Rob plays Edward. Just like the book describes Edward, “the emotions flash across his face”… tu can see that when Rob plays him. I appreciate that. Rob understands his character. He understands that Edward is flawed. He understands that Edward can be over-protective, but he also understands that he only acts that way to keep her alive. That her “existence is everything”. He knows that Bella is the only person he wishes, he needs to protect. He comprehends that even though Edward is one hundred years old, long past human, Bella brings out the human in him. Bella brings out the 17 año old in him. He grasps the fact that even though Edward is disgusted por himself and what he is, maybe he has been too hard on himself. Because, how could someone like Bella be capable of loving someone like him if he was truly the despicable creature he thought he was? Rob knows that Edward accepts the fact that he is a vampire, but he also accepts the fact that Bella loves him because he chooses to be better. To become the best he can be.

--Taylor Lautner. Taylor’s portrayal of Jacob is lighter in the movie than it is in the books. I appreciate his enthusiasm and his amor for Jacob, but sometimes, Jacob’s other qualities need to be shown. During New Moon promotion, Taylor had been speaking about Jacob’s pre-transformation/post-transformation side, but I have yet to see a massive difference between the two. In the books, tu can tell Jacob is different. He is a lot rougher and más edgy. In the movies, we hardly see his ignorance. It’s part of his character, and I am disappointed that we do not see it. During the scenes where Jacob is trying to convince Bella to choose him, the scene in the garage, his actuación is awkward. Dramatic pauses and he do not mix well. I do like how he dicho “He probably can’t even kiss tu without hurting you. Feel that? Flesh and blood and warmth.” Despite what ‘team’ I am on, Taylor did act that one line pretty well. Other than that, I could not help but feel awkwardness leaking off the screen.

Now, we have finally reached the end of the review. It ended up being longer than I originally thought. I restate what I dicho at the beginning of the review, over all, I loved the movie. The movie had the corazón the book did. The feelings, the magic was captured in the film. David Slade recently dicho in an mtv interview, “You can have the best actors in the world and the best cinematographers in the world. But if tu don’t have a solid story, then tu don’t have a film.” And he is absolutely right. Without a solid story, the film would be dead. I very much like David Slade and have grown to amor him and what he has done for the Twilight fans por blessing us with a movie such as this one. I really respect him as a director and I hope everyone shares my thoughts regarding him. He knows his stuff. Aspiring film directors should take notes from him and what he says. Because a lot of what he says rings true.

I hoped tu liked my review :) comentarios are welcome!
posted by Bella_Swan3
-Renesmee-

Renee almost touched me, then seemed to think better of it.

"Sit down," Renee whispered again, gesturing towards the porch swing. I sat, she sat.

"But Bella... died... " Renee whispered.

Lovely. So THAT was what this woman believed.

"She died. I saw her. Dead. Almost eighteen years ago. She was a victim of hit and run," Renee said, sounding panicked, as if she were only trying to convince herself.

I decided to play along, it was convenient. For my family.

"I was born a few months before that. She didn't want tu to know," I lied easily.

"And the rest of the Cullens?" Renee whispered,...
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Hi! This is my first time writting for the Twilight Saga so please comentario and tu can also add suggestions. I'm only 13 years old so PLEASE be merciful if this is horrible.

Bella's POV

It has been two years since my marriage with Edward, the birth of Renesmee, and my transformation as being a vampire. Things were normal and the amor between Edward and me hasn't change. Renesmee looks about 10 years old and is still growing fast. Things were getting too dreamlike, things were too perfect....

I feel like my brain is going to explode! I have nothing to do these days except to study for finals at...
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posted by Bella_Swan3
-Renesmee-

"Jacksonville?" I asked Jake.
"Bella wants tu to meet Renee," Jake said.
"Who's that?" I had no idea who this Renee person was.
"Bella's mother. Your grandmother. Up till now, she had no idea tu even existed."

I was speechless.

"Why am I meeting her then?" I managed to say. "She'll get mad at Bella for leaving her out of the life of her grandchild."

"Bella didn't want to leave her out of your life any longer." Jake said, pulling into the driveway of a small white house with faded yellow trimming and pale green shutters.

* * *

I was nervously biting my lip, my hands were clasped in...
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posted by Bella_Swan3
-Alice-

Edward and I were playing chess, hilariously fun, when I saw an image that did not involve chess pieces. I stiffened; then relaxed. So they liked Isle Renesmee. Good. It WAS my idea, after all.

And suddenly, I saw something that did not make me smile. I sighed and flicked my king over. It wasn't worth it.

* * *

Edward was the only one who would play chess with me anymore, mainly because it was fair.

I was a little depressed that there wasn't any wedding to be planned, and I didn't have any new project planned. Then, it hit me. RENESMEE'S CLOSET! Well, I'd already stocked her new house's (Esme had dado them their own house, she'd designed it and everything) mega-sized walk in closet and helped furnish the house, but I could always remodel her closet to look like a boutique!

I smiled in anticipation. I had to go call Esme!
After Bella married the vampire Edward, she became pregnant with their daughter. Sam, after finding out about this, decided to lead an unprovoked attack to kill Bella and the baby. Jacob and Seth, however, refused to follow Sam on this, and broke away from the pack to aid the Cullens. Leah, despite her dislike of vampires, decides to registrarse them so that she can protect her brother and get away from Sam. Her choice actually hurts Sam, who sends a messenger to try to persuade her to come back to his pack. She wants to remain in Jacob's pack until she can stop being a werewolf, and despite the initial...
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posted by _madz_
okay, here is the siguiente one. its short, im sorry ive got exams but i couldn't leave tu with nothing.
enjoy!



I reached out to gently brush her pouting bottom lip.
“Bella, tu seem to be under a misapprehension.” I couldn’t believe she didn’t understand. I suppose she wouldn’t if she thought I didn’t want her. I closed my eyes, shaking my head back and forth, a slight smile on my lips. How to make her see?
“I thought I’d explained it clearly before. Bella,” just speaking her name brought me so much pleasure. “I can’t live in a world where tu don’t exist.”
The frown on...
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 this is her most of the time on the floor crying
this is her most of the time on the floor crying
Book Two
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Renesmee

CONTENTS
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Preface
1.    Lifeless Days
2.    Who Am I Fooling
3.    A Good Distraction
4.    I Hate This Part
5.    Flirting with fire
6.    A Hope For Peace
7.    No Where To Run
8.    A Long Open Road
9.    Walking On Another Thin Line
10.    Look At This Photograph
11.    In Another Life
12.    Washington’s siguiente parte superior, arriba Model
13.    Fly...
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posted by Bella_Swan3
-Renesmee-

Once we hit the highway, I am just about to shake Jacob until he tells me where we're going. Not that I'd be able to mover him. But where's the harm in trying to find out?

"Where are we going?" I ask him, for the third time.
"You know it's pointless, right?"
"Just checking," I smile. "I was hoping you'd just give in peacefully."
"Not a chance."

Eventually, after eight hours, we reach the airport.

Jacpb makes sure I don't hear o see where we're going, and once we both board the plane, I am so tired, I just rest my head on his shoulder, and the siguiente thing I know, someone is shaking my shoulder....
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posted by just_bella
hola all!! Just thought I would let everyone know that I started my own fanpop site to post my stories on. This will be the last one I put up here...unless the other site doesn't get enough people. If tu go to the buscar and put in just bella you'll find it. Everyone is welcome to come!! Thank tu to everybody for all the support!!!

End of Part 31

"We must leave and sooner rather then later." Edward dicho as he started shifting his weight between his legs.

"I'm so sorry Ben, I would amor to give tu más respuestas but they are right. We need to be going. Please don't tell anyone tu saw us, that...
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Chapter 40: Captivity Loves Company (Nessie's POV)

Jane kept shooting Amore and I the dirtiest looks. She was jealous because we were Aro’s new pets, I was confident that he wouldn’t hurt us. We were too valuable to him. I worried for Nahuel though; they kept him locked up since he had already betrayed them once por trying to warn us. Amore was terrified and cried tearlessly most of the time. I touched her hand, “Stay strong, my sister. We will be alright.” She looked at me worriedly and held my hand tighter, “I want to go home.” I made sure not to have these silent conversations...
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Chapter 39: If I jumped of a cliff, would tu do it too? (Jacob’s POV)

I had been confident up until we got upstairs. I looked at Seth and Leah and for a fleeting moment I was terrified that I might actually kill them. Instead of focusing on the fear and uncertainty I focused my thoughts on Renesmee. She needed me, the sooner I changed Seth and Leah the sooner we would be able to save her and Amore, and the sooner that I would have her in my arms again. Carlisle eyed me nervously, I felt horrible for what I was putting him through. I looked to Bella for guidance and she nodded, “I believe...
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posted by just_bella
hola all!! I couldn't get on line yesterday...something about someone cutting a Ethernet cable o something. SO I'm going to try to get up a few stories tonight. :)

End of Chapter 23

"I'll do everything that can be done, but prepare Carlisle; the odds aren't good." I whispered.

"Alice, so help me if anything happens to you..I will go to hell and back to bring tu back." He snarled.

"I've thought about that already Jazz." I dicho as I laughed.

"Promise me tu will come inicial to me when this is done. Promise we will never be apart again." He dicho sadly.

"Yes, I promise. Just one thing Jasper." I said...
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posted by lovethecullens
Chapter 35: Fork’s Most Wanted
When Jake and I walked into the room the first thing that I noticed was that Seth was holding a sobbing girl. I didn’t recognize her, until she held her head up. I gasped. It was the girl that Sienna always drew. She looked at me, “Nessie?” She asked. I had to look closely but I knew it was Sienna there was something about the shape of her eyes that had remained the same even though absolutely everything else about her appearance had been radically altered. I ran up to her and hugged her. “The girl in your drawings-” I stuttered, she smiled slightly...
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Chapter 34: The First Night of Forever (Amore’s POV)
It was so odd to be up all night long not even so much as be sleepy por morning. Aunt Bella and Uncle Edward returned after a few hours and informed me that they found Seth and spoke with him and he had headed inicial agreeing to come and see me in the morning. I drew all night long. At first I could only draw myself with the mystery guy and then it started to freak me out so I forced myself to focus on other things. I drew my mother as she sat and watched TV. I saved it for a present for my father for the siguiente holiday. I had to say it was pretty...
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posted by dinosteph
Sorry, sorry, sorry, sorry, can I say sorry some more. I have been crazy busy, traveling back and forth back inicial now that school is out. This is a really short chapter that I wrote while I was on the bus, hopefully I can accomplish some more.

And also, I am still trying to find the siguiente chapter in my untitled story, it's kicking around here someplace.

Enjoy!!



From the Beginning:
link




I grabbed a piece of newspaper, wrapping it around another glass and placed it into the box beside me. I was supposed to head over to the main house but with the conversation I just had with Jake, I didn't feel like...
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posted by AliceHaleCullen
10 Ways to Annoy Jacob Black

10. Never use English around him – instead, bark.

9. Call him a el espacio heater.

8. Tell him that perros make good pets, not good partners.

7. Ask him if he has RSVPed to the wedding yet.

6. Inform him that real men sparkle.

5. Walk up to him and claim tu have imprinted. Say tu amor him and demand his paw in marriage.

4. Tell him that even though he may run at a boiling 108.9 degrees, Bella doesn’t find him hot.

3. Inquire as to how Leah is… and if he dreams about Sam the way Leah dreams about Bella.

2. Ask him if he likes to do things… doggy style.

And the Number One way to annoy Jacob Black?

1. Make him a day-by-day flip calendar, counting down the amount of time Bella will remain human.
posted by just_bella
This story is getting so fun/addicting to write!! I might have to do another tonight..let's see how this one goes first :)

End of Chapter 21

"He made up his mind as soon as your 'friend' confirmed that it was too late to save you." I said.

"But he...he left! He didn't want me anymore! What difference does it make now? He knew I would die sometime!" She yelled.

"I don't think he ever planned to outlive tu por long." I dicho quietly.

"How dare he!" She screamed as she jumped to her feet.

As she rose, Jacob stood up too, putting himself between Bella and I as if he were going to protect her from...
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Chapter 32: The Truth is often Hard to Take

My new parents and I drove my new grandfather’s Mercedes to my memorial. It was so odd, although I had driven down the same streets in Forks all of my life this was the first time that I truly saw them. My human eyes hadn’t taken in all of the details and I was itching to draw them. I sighed. “What’s wrong, love?” Rosalie asked with her eyes on me in the rearview mirror “I just wish that I had my sketchbook,.” She looked at me sadly, knowing that it was too much of a risk to go to my house and get it. Emmett looked back at me, “On...
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posted by lovethecullens
Chapter 30: It All Comes Together

“Wait Alice,” Rosalie interjected. She turned to me her brow furrowed in concern, “we need to go talk for a moment.” She took my hand and led me down the hallway to her room. We sat down on the cama that she never used, and she looked at me carefully. “I support your decision fully, but I want to know why tu are so determined to go to your memorial service.” I looked at her blankly I couldn’t find the words to explain it. I needed closure. I needed to see if my father and sister even cared enough to mostrar up, although part of me knew that they wouldn’t....
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the letter of Bella for Edward is the picture :D Oh before I forget take your handkerchief in your hand :s it's going to be wet

Bella's pov

When finally arrived home, for the first time this car ride took so long. We both walked out of the car and went inside. Mason ran towards his room and closed his door. I walked gently into the living room and laid my libros on the table.
I went to the bedroom, bathroom and even the cocina but Edward wasn’t here.
Again I took a deep breath and walked towards Mason’s room.
“Mason, I’m going to hunt, be back later” I dicho calm
“Okay Mommie, see ya...
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