This is coninuing from the last article, i try and keep u all happy por doing a little bit off chapter one, this is the third part of chapter one out of 6.
thx for the support, i just started an hora hace and now, i cant seem to stop typing! heeheehee. i was planing to use this rough draft as a base line for my real book, but i cant get my book published until i am older so i thought may aswell let them see the rough copy. its not as good as my real copy, soo sorry. enjoy x







I woke up in a room, not my room, but someone else’s. I groaned, my body was stiff and very sore.
“She‘s finally waking.” I didn’t recognise the voice, but it was a girls.
“We can finally get going.” another voice, male this time.
“Shut up, Emmet.” I recognised this voice it was Erik.
“Erik.” I groaned.
“I‘m here.” he stroked my hair.
I tried to open my eyes, but I was too sore. It seemed that I was lying on a mattress, it was very comfortable. The thick heavy blanket was to thick for my liking, I was sweating already. I tried to find Erik’s hand, but instead of finding his hand, I felt something cold, rough, hard and it was shaped like a gun!
I gasped and put my hand under the blanket.
“Aw, frig sake Emmet, tu could of put that somewhere else.” Erik complained and moved away from me. I kept my eyes closed hoping that maybe it wasn’t a gun. I felt someone stroking my hair again, must be Erik. I was quiet for a long time. The hand that was stroking my hair, was now stroking my face, neck and arms.
“When will that girl wake up Erik. Look at the time.”
“She’ll wake up when she’s ready, Victoria.” Erik replied softly.
“Yeah well, I’m ready to go.” The girl named Victoria dicho harshly.
“well go, we’ll meet tu later.”
I heard the shuffle of footsteps fade away. I lay there maybe for about an hora and then I heard Erik sigh.
“Come on Mel, wake up.”
I opened my eyes slowly, still feeling really sore. I was in a dark room, Erik’s face was right in front of me smiling. He stroked my cheek. “Hello.” he whispered.
I tried to get up, but I couldn’t. so I gave up.
“Where, where am I?” I asked.
My eyes scanned the dark room. I could see everything even though it was very dark. There was another cama beside mine, a wardrobe in the corner. Their was a rocking chair beside the window and It was night time.
“Mel, I’m afraid I’ve done something.”
I turned at looked at Erik. “Yeah, tu have. Why on earth did tu write that letter? What did it mean that, I’m leaving? ”
“Look, Mel you’re the one. I can feel it. I amor tu and I want tu to come and live with me. But I have done something else.” he took my hand, and somehow I was standing up. We went to the far wall. It was smooth and it was a dark purple colour.
“I want tu to climb up this wall.” He stroked the wall.
“You what?” I shrieked.
“Look, watch me.”
I could see Erik, smiling. And then he was climbing the wall. He was climbing a wall, using his hands and feet. When he reached the top, he jumped down.
“How did tu do that?” I asked. Stroking the wall.
“I am a vampire.”
I didn’t believe him at first but then I was able to do all these cool things and I realised I was a vampire to. I fainted when I understood what was going on. The siguiente día we went
to the airport. I got out of the car, and went to the boot. Erik kindly packed my clothes and some of my beloved items. I took out my two blue suitcases and set them on the suitcase trolleys. Erik set his suitcases on mine and started pushing the trolley towards the doors.
“Where‘ re we going?” I asked. He didn’t exactly tell me where we were going but, there’s no point going back to my mum because I am a completely different person even though I feel the same inside, on the outside, I have changed so much. I have become really beautiful, my skin is as white as the colour it’s self. My voice has become más softer, which was hard to believe, how a dangerous, evil, sick vampire could be soft and sweet. I can climb walls, run really fast and I can lure humans to me. I am very strong. I can read peoples mind, but I need to be touching them, to be able to get into their heads. I can torture humans and vampiros using my mind. It is cool being a vampire, having lots of cool features, but the down side is, not ever being able to be with my family and I have to suck humans blood. I shivered at the thought.
“Where are going to Alaska.” Erik answered.
I put my arm around his waist and set my head on his shoulder. I may as well get used to being kind with Erik, he did say I was the one he wanted and that he loved me. He put his arm over my shoulder. I helped him steer the trolley. We were sitting on the airplane, I was sitting beside Erik. I was pretty tried and I decided maybe I needed some sleep. It was 11pm after all, the great thing is vampiros can sleep and go out in the sunlight.
I yawned. “I‘m gonna go to sleep.” I warned Erik.
He stoked my cheeks. “You do look tired.”
“Hmm,” I yawned again. I set my head on his shoulder and he wrapped his arms around me. That’s how my new life began.





Three days later...
I woke up from the dream. That was how I became an vampire, and I would never forget it. Erik was awake looking down at me, smiling. I felt sick, how could this guy o should I say vampire, smile at me, after what he has done to me. That reminded me, he never did tell me how I was turned into a vampire.
I sat up, Erik sat beside me and took my hand. “How did I become a vampire?” I asked.
He laughed. I looked at him, giving him a dirty look. “I don’t find it funny, Erik.” I folded my arms.
“Sorry. Okay, well all I had to do was…”
“Was?”
“Suck your blood.” he looked down playing with the nightgown I was wearing.
“Well, I know that, but how did tu suck my blood exactly?” I asked.
“Well, the only way we can suck out your blood is por scraping the left side of your neck and sucking all the blood out, until tu are free from it, then I have to lick tu scar and cut open the right side of my neck and pore a few drops into your neck.”
I didn’t understand one thing he said, but I didn’t bother asking him to explain it again. I put my hand up to the left side of my neck.




to be continued.......