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posted by twilight_james
hehe! edits! tell me if I forget to put ina chapter!
Chapter 5
(Carlisle’s POV)
My son came down to see me. Oh how joyful I was, at first thinking that he was going to try me way of life again. But he came with girl, a vampire from whom I knew from many years ago. Edward introduced her
“Hello, this is-“
“Jane,” I cut him off. “Nice to see tu again” Edward looked mildly amazed. I guessed that Jane had either not told him about the Volturi, o that I used to be a part of it. Probably the former.
“Come in,” I said, breaking the awkward silence. Jane and Edward came and sat down.
“So Carlisle, I see that tu are still a “vegetarian” How do tu do it?” Jane asked
“Well, it’s quite easy really; all tu need is to learn some self-control. Unlike this one here-“I nodded at Edward “he went on a killing spree in the city”
We laughed uncomfortably. The rest of the conversation continued like much like that, but before long, they had to hunt. I advised them to hunt outside of town, as we did not want to attract attention to ourselves. They started to take of, but I knew Jane would not look back, and as they started to leave, I held Edward back. He struggled against my arm, and I was tempted to let him go, but I resisted. I knew, even though my first instinct was to let him go, I had to make sure that he knew.
I flipped Edward onto my back and ran the opposite way. I knew that there was an abandoned castillo now far away from here, but it was far enough that no one could hear him. He was calling for Jane now, with all the strength he could muster, while trying to get off my back.
“Jane, JANE!” he yelled. My corazón wrenched. I was usually the kind one. Usually I wouldn’t even take him away from his mate. But I had to make sure he knew the truth. He cried out again, and I would of cried myself if that was possible, with the amount of pain I was causing my son.

We arrived at the castle, and I put him in a stone room, in the middle of the castillo that wouldn’t fall down. When I put him down he rammed into me, his eyes focused on the door, in essence, focused on the way to Jane. “Jane!” he cried out again, as he tried to get to get past me. His expression was sorrowful: the equivalent of the pain I was causing him was like the Spanish inquisition to a human: twice. I slipped out the room and shut the door just as he rammed into it, causing the whole building to shake. He cried out again: a tortured, pained cry, and this time a string of snarls and growls came as well. I sank down to the ground, ready to kill myself for what I had done to my son.

The growling and snarling finally stopped, and I let myself into the room. I would have been crying, but that wasn’t possible. I pulled up a taburete and sat in the middle of the room, unable to look at Edward, both ashamed at what I had done, and my disgust for what he had become. After a few minutes, he came and put his hand on my shoulder in a comforting gesture. I spoke
“Edward, what have tu done to yourself. Your eyes are a bright red, tu are with a girl from the Volturi, you've killed, what, how many people now? Edward, I would not have changed tu if I thought that tu were going to turn out like this. You've become a monster. I've lost you. And I don't think..." my voice broke off, hardly able to say the words coming, “I don't think that I'll ever find tu again. I brought tu here to tell tu this. Jane would never let me say this”
I stopped looking at him then.
"Edward", I continued, "this girl." My voice broke off then, not sure whether I should tell him the words.
I plowed on. "Remember how I told tu when I changed tu that humans could not know that tu are a vampire. Well this girl is part of the reason. Have you", my voice broke off again. "Have tu ever heard of the Volturi, Edward?"
He shook his head. I was shocked. "Well they are the reason, why humans can't know about us. They have taken on the duty of making sure everyone follows the rules. That translates to punishing transgressors. Edward..." my voice broke of yet again. "Edward, they are the worst of our kind. They are the monsters, not only ending humans lives, but vampiros as well. I believe that they would make up rules just to torture people. This Jane..."I couldn’t think of a word to describe her. “her gift...Well the Volturi keep people for their gifts. Aro, who can see your thoughts, much like you, Edward, Marcus, who sees relationships, and Jane, who.." I wasn’t sure whether I could tell him this. I just gave him a warning. "Well, just don't let her smile at you, okay?" He stood rooted to the ground. I left, and left the door open. He could go back now. He knew.

He went back to Italy the following night.
Chapter 6
(Edwards POV)

I wondered if Jane was really as evil as Carlisle had implied. She seemed to be the only good thing in, oh what did Carlisle call it, the Volturi. I couldn’t deny that what he dicho was true; it explained the whole thing with Aro perfectly. As I was pondering this, she came down the hall, a fresh meal in hand. We fed, but I could sense that she was disturbed about something. She guarded her thoughts, so eventually I had to take a break from hunting and ask her.
“Jane, what’s wrong”
“Nothing!” she replied a little too quickly.
I pressed on. “Jane, I know something’s up. Tell me what it is. Please.”
“Well,” she hesitated.
“Yes?”
“It’s kind of about…Well what did Carlisle tell tu when he took tu away?”
“When?” I asked, stalling for time as I tried to come up with a good story.
She let out an exasperated sigh. “Edward, tu know exactly what I’m talking about. Just tell me”
“Okay well...” I was still trying to come up with a story. Suddenly it hit me “He just wanted to know whether we were planning to stay near him for a while o if we were going”
Jane laughed, a silvery, tinkering sound like bells, but immediately cut it off. In that segundo though, she left her thoughts unguarded, and I knew my worst fears had been confirmed.

She thought that he told me about the Volturi

What was so bad and secret about the Volturi? I resolved to find out, though I didn’t need to. No, shortly after this, they came for me.
posted by scarlet13
Thank tu to the people who comentó on my last fan fiction even if there werent alot of you, come on people if tu dont comentario I cant get ideas and I need idea's!!!

"EDWARD!!!" I screamed and started to run towards him but he was being pulled into the forest, so I pushed my self to run faster, as I got to the forest edge some one wrapped their arms around me, to restrict me and then they whispered into my ear....

" My cousin wouldnt want tu to get hurt now would he, not after all the planning it took to get everything ready for you, and dont even try to scream for him because if tu dont...
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posted by bubble_babe
(heehee Ho NO)

I walked down the calle well in the middle. I was going up into the woods to find a nice hole to die in. all i did to día was save this small pretty girl from gitting hit my a truck and all her husben did was yell at me saying it was stupied and i could have killed myslef. He cared about me más than his wife. shure she was walking rather fast, but still a nice thank tu would have been nice. i finley came across the woods. without thinking i walking right into the woods.
After i was far into the woods where noone could find o see me, i reached into my pocket and pulled out...
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posted by renesmeblack
Hey! Sorry this took so long! I was working on two other stories in my spare time, not to mention going to a wedding. I hope tu are all still reading. Sorry!
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End of Chapter 9

"I heard we needed a doctor," Carlisle dicho as he entered. "Lucky enough Alice caught me while I was in North America."
Searching through his thoughts, he was half wondering how I can stand breathing in this room. I was even surprised. I haven't hunted for six weeks. And yet I was breathing, no attention towards my thirst, at all.
"This will take a little while. Jacob, please take Edward out if you're...
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posted by scarlet13
Sorry for the wait everyone I've not had time lately, but I hope tu like this and please comment!!



I frozein my asiento ( a habit I picked up from the cullens) and stopped breathing for a few segundos and then I let the air escape my lungs all at once, realization hit, I was dreaming.
I had to be because he would never come back for a petty human like me.
I stood up takig another deep breath and turned to my dream character. The rest of my dreams hadn'y done him justice, he was breath-takingly beautiful.I felt something cold and wet slide down my face, I wiped it away in a hurry and looked at the...
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hola guys. just letting tu know that i felt really ill last night so its kind of a mericle (see i cant even spell right) that i managed to come in to school today, espesally to post this articulo and to get my £30 for EMA. but i managed it. because i felt and still feel ill/weird, i havent managed to put as much detail into the story as i wanted to so ill change a few things around on monday probably. but anyway heres the siguiente part.

part 6

“Hello?” I asked.

“Mom? Where’s Alice? I knew I dialled the wrong number.” Reneesmee dicho when I froze.

“Reneesmee, oh god where are you?” I asked...
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Kellan Lutz opened up about the upcoming Twilight movies! He talks about his favorito! scene in New Moon, one of his first memories getting recognized por fans and more!

On filming New Moon:
"I'm done with New Moon. It was really easy to work on with [Director] Chris Weitz. It all starts with the director, and he really moves the tempo with shooting. And he's just so mellow and relaxed that it trickled down to the crew. And they were really prepared and it trickled down to the actors, who were really comfortable. And since Twilight was really accepted por the fans, it really allowed us to feel comfortable...
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I wanna stay mysterious and unpredictable just like Edward!

1. Was it difficult to get the role of Edward in Twilight?
‘More then 5000 actors did auditions for the role as Edward, so it wasn’t easy that’s for sure. But once I did the screentest with Kristen everything went so fast. Because I admire her for years I was really nervious when I was standing in front of her.
Later I heard that she, just because I was mostrando my vulnerable side, concidered me allot to play the role.’

2. tu 2 have a fantastic chemistry together, is there something más between tu and Kristen?Kristen is very...
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posted by edwardcullen865
"Edward..Jacob asked Nessie to marry him and she dicho yes she unsure how tu would take it. she is going to tell him what we dicho now ..."
" WHAT? HIS HE MAD SHE IS ONLY SIXTEEN!!!"
"now Edward I'm not thrilled she is getting married either but she is and it is her choice not ours and tu promised not to be mad."
"that was before i found out my daughter my only daughter was getting taken away from me."
"Edward she isn't going anywhere. she is still going to live near us just not with us anymore."
"I'm fine." he kept saying it. then i think i heard him say i'll kill you,but i wasn't sure till i looked...
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posted by edwardcullen865
" my love, Nessie is with Jacob as normal and Mason is with Esme . we are going to pick Mason up right now " Edward answered .
" well , okay i just don't like being away from him for so long ."
"it only been a día Bella ."
" i know but it seems longer than that."
We arrived at the Cullen's house a few segundos later.I Walked through the back door while Edward followed . I walked straight to Esme to get Mason.Esme turned to face me . I looked down at her arms for Mason , but he was not there . i started to get worried.
" Where is Mason? " i asked Esme with a little worry in my tone.i knew she...
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posted by Bella_Swan3
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6) Please do not post artículos on my spot unless it is a review, but tu are free to add questions, picks, pictures, foros topics, videos(if tu find anything that's relevant), enlaces o examen questions.

Thank tu once again to everyone who ever comentó and rated Sunrise. I amor tu people!
posted by Bella_Swan3
-Renesmee-

I terminate the call, and scream at the parte superior, arriba of my lungs. It takes Carlisle and Rosalie thirty two segundos to reach me. The other Cullens are out hunting.

I find I can only speak in short bursts, so I focus only on Carlisle's voice, asking me what happened. I try to answer, but then, oh joy, más pain.

* * *

I've been in labour for the past eight hours now. Imagine, just for a moment, that Rosalie is capable of PMS. And that simultaneously, someone's hidden her hair products, her iPod, her BMW, and her laptop. I was currently in a mood that would make that look like a kitten having a tantrum.

I broke Jacob's wrist por accident.
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posted by Twilight597
eek! i havent written this in 2 months! because i had MAJOR writers block. i asked my friend on this other website and she gave me some ideas. i finally got it done. i might take a break from this story because its hard, and i want ot post this story i've had for a while, like it was my first one i wrote, i stopped at like chapter 9 becasue i had writers block, its called Zodiac Pendant, and im going to post it today also. Dreamnapped is almost done too. im not escritura friends Dont Let friends Scoop Poop anymore, well i will but not now, i will wait until im done with another one and The Supernatural...
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posted by TwilightHearts
I have made a religion for all dedicated twilight fans, i am the first to join, i have followed these simple rules for three weeks and hope tu will join. Iff tu want to, repeat the words at the bottom of the page.
Here are the simple rules:

1) Do not say Volturi in a bad way (They are royalty)

2) Do not assosciate 'Fangs' with 'Vampires'

3) Name a child o pet after a Twilight character (or middle name)

4) Do not celebrate Halloween

5) Wear something to represent your amor for twilight, E.G: Bracelet, Earrings, Necklace, Pin, Bag.... And wear it EVERYDAY. (not at sleep)

Words To registrarse yourself:



"...
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Bella's Pov.

"ESME!!!!!!!" As I ran over towards her.

"Uh...where am I?" Esme dicho wearily.

"Bella?"

"Jasper?"

"Hey Bella, I um...am sorry for causing tu all this trouble. I didn't mean to.
I did feel sad that, I never got to marry you. That's whay I didn't come to your
party. Then, Esme came. Something really strange happened. She turned
purple and then, she was in a cloak. Then, she put me under a spell to follow'
whatever she says. I tried to stop her, but it was too late. She told me that
I would regret asking tu out for the rest of my-"

"MOMMY!!!!!" Renesmee shouted.

"It's always my ple-MOM!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?"

"We have to get her to Carisle. I will explain what I told Bella," Jasper dicho calmly.

Suddenly, everyone took three steps away from Jasper.

"It's okay guys. He's back to normal," I said.

Edward replied sharply, "Well how can we prove it!?"

"I will mostrar you."

Then, Jasper hugged Edward.
posted by Natalia94
----------Edward and his family leave Forks because he believes he is endangering Bella's life. Bella falls into a deep depression, until she develops a strong friendship with werewolf Jacob Black. Jacob and the other lobos in his tribe must protect her from Victoria, a vampire seeking to avenge her mate James' death por killing Bella. A misunderstanding occurs, and Edward believes Bella is dead. Edward decides to commit suicide in Volterra, Italy, but he is stopped por Bella and Alice, Edward's sister. They meet with the Volturi, a powerful coven of vampires, and are released on the condition...
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posted by MiaCullen_x
Chapter 2 - Dangerous
"Hey...I'm Jason..." he smiled. He looked vaguley familiar.
"I'm Renesmee... Do I know you? I'm sorry, I don't mean to be rude.." I mumbled whilst trying to pick up his scent. It was sweet. Sickly sweet. There was just one explanation for his scent. He's a vampire.
Someone hissed. I looked around and realised it must have been me, because Jason and I were the only ones left in the parking lot.
"Renesmee..." he started. The way he dicho my name made my insides melt. "D tu need a lift home?" For a second, I was totally lost in his eyes. I felt as I could see all the way to his...
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Bella's POV

I pointed the lightning bolts at him and the it made a HUGE explosion. My lightning bolts knocked down the WHOLE house into rubble! I put a Physical Barrier around Edward and me. It's Renata's gift. Edward and I were fine. But I doubt that Royce survived. I see some remains that were already burining in the fuego that were caused por my lightning bolts. About 10 minutos later, I decided to use my power over the element of water to brush over the fire. The house was completely burned down.

Edward started talking.
" Um..... Bella? HOW THE HELL DID tu DO THAT!?!?!?!?"
I made a guilty...
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 The dress Bella wore under the Volturi capa
The dress Bella wore under the Volturi Cloak
Edward's POV

" Carlisle was right." I dicho to myself. I turned my back on Bella and when I was about to reach the door, Bella caught me and turn around.
" Bella, my love, please escape the spell!"
" I am fine." she told me with a hard tone.
" How can I know for sure that tu are awake?" I ask.

She sighed, and looked around the whole room, checked all the windows, to see if anyone was watching. She sighed. She took out her volturi capa and she was wearing a dress under it. A very beautiful dress that for sure she wouldn't wear except if she was forced por Alice.
" You're beautiful." I told her....
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Bella's POV

How could I even think about killing my own daughter!?! What kind of monster would destroy that ángel face!?!
Renesmee came up the steps and jumped into my arms.
" Mom, I'm so happy that you're ok!"
I gave her a hug.
" Yes, I'm fine. Before when I dicho your dad didn't amor you, that's completely untrue. Your dad and I amor tu very much." I promised her.
"I amor tu mom." Renesmee dicho while hugging me. That thawed me out.
" I amor tu too." I told her sweetly.

"Bravo!" Royce dicho sarcasticly while clapping. "I see that there's alot of amor in the room, but I didn't come here to...
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