Serie Crepúsculo Article: Moonlight chapter 2

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posted by Rob_patt_fan

He got ready in a segundo and we were at my house's door. We got in his Volvo and he started driving with a crazy speed he always drove.

-Can tu please drive slower?!

He chuckled and increased his speed.

-I dicho slower... not faster!

Once he saw my red face he decreased his speed and that was the moment I felt relaxed.

-Why are tu angry today, love?

I turned my head to the window and preferred to say nothing, but I heard his whisper while he said: If I could read her damn mind, Everything would have been easier!

We were both angry now but after five minutos of silence he got my hand in his' and rubbed it.

-I'm sorry Bella!

When he noticed that I wasn't talking he said:

-forgive me, okay?

I nodded but in fact I was really mad. He parked his car in the parking lot, I got my bag and he came closer to me. Everyone was staring at us as usual and I got even más mad when I spotted a girl whose face was not familiar to me, Was staring to Edward. Every time we walked in public Edward was laughing and I knew that it was because of the thoughts of other people. Some times I wished He could read my mind in times that I admired him and dicho I amor tu in my brain.

-You should hear all these! It's so funny!

I faked a smile but my smile didn't last even a moment. We went in the biology class where the new girl was sitting in the first row. I got red once again but I controlled myself and sat on the chair which I always sat on.

- I bet I'll get 100 out of 100 from this one!

Edward dicho while he was looking in my eyes.

-Now who's a GEEK?

We gave the test and as always, Edward gave his paper sooner than anyone. I gave my paper after Jessica and after fifteen minutes, the campana rang. After gym, which was the last period's class, Edward, Alice and I came out of the class. I told Alice to come with us but she winked at me and got closer to the car which Rosalie, Jasper and Emmet were sitting in it.

-Let's get something to eat...

I looked at Edward's golden eyes which were shining and said:

-Edward... remember... tu don't eat! And I'm not hungry!

He looked at me with sadness and said:

-Can we at least go somewhere to talk?!

I nodded and He turned on his car. He was nervous and I could tell it from the speed he was driving. It was very fast but I didn't tell anything. He got into jungle. I was tired and scared at that time. why jungle?! pregunta filled my whole brain and I couldn't stop thinking about it.

He turned off the car near a cliff and Got out himself. I opened the door and got off the car.

KerryL1986, groovychicklisa and 13 others like this

GWENxTRENT I like it... but I'm also writing a story call moonlight, I already posted the 1st chapter so don't think I stole the title

Rob_patt_fan Hey... thanks for all your comments for the first chapter... Hope you like this one too! Plz comment! :D

joe-edwardfan wow goli ur gr8 plz tell me what will happen nxt! and i published night falls nxt chapter too yell me wat you think!

jordie4fun i love it ur so good

Emmett4ever WAt is he gonna say My god you making it good keep going

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teamalice_0 AWESOMENESS!

ashesandwine Love it:) I think that says everything:D

arianaggs i don't like them fighting and i hope that make up !!!!

lysolwipe I don't like it don't call it Moonlight, other people are writing stuff called Moonlight and your's sucks.

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The Other Way (Edward's POV of Bella Choosing Jacob)

posted by CharmedVamp101

"Bella, I"... I didn't know what to say. In that moment, my no longer beating corazón was torn in two. It was like she tore it from my chest, stuck it in her mouth, chewed it up and spit it out on my feet. I couldn't believe she chose that dog over me. But it was her decision. I looked down, I knew this was coming, I could see it in her eyes.
"Bella, if that's what tu want, I'll leave now."
"Of course it's what I want, tu left, I tried to deal with it, but now I realize that Jake is the one that I want."
"Yeah bloodsucker, I was always better for her."
I turned and started walking, but I just...

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New Story - Chapter Ten

posted by dinosteph

hola guys. I just wanted to let everyone know that I really enjoy that tu guys enjoy the story this far. I'm also wondering if tu think it's going a little slow. I tend to explain things a lot, when it comes to scenes and other characters. I'm trying to include everyone in the family, so you're not wondering where everyone is.

I watched him, laying beside me, not moving. It had been a little over an hora and I couldn't ignore the noises coming from my stomach anymore.

“Edward?” I whispered, tapping his arm lightly, unsure if I should bother him o not. I watched as he closed his eyes, lines...

meeting emmet(rose's story)

posted by twilight0girl

a hunt to remenber
today, the sun was shing bright,so today were staying inicial to hunt.it was just a normal day.at least thats what i thought.just as i was just about to pounce on a mountain lion,i heard a screech of pain and terror."edward!"i called."what!whats wrong!"he shouted"did tu hear that,someone's screaming."his expresion changed from concern to concentration."edward,edward"i said"shhh,im concentrating."on what?"i hear it now,"he dicho "im going to check it out."what!why does edward get to check every thing out?!"no!i'll do it."i blurted."o.k if tu say so."i started running to the...

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Unchained Melody: Chapter One

posted by SaraE

This is my first Twilight fan fiction. I started escritura it a bit after I read Eclipse. So it's set after that, and does not mesh with Breaking Dawn. Anyway, I got the idea while listening to the song Unchained Melody, hence the title, and started escritura it. I'm looking for a beta reader, btw! Feedback is much appreciated.

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Unchained Melody

“Cold feet?” I heard his voice whisper into my ear. I would have jumped o screamed if it wasn’t for the fact I seem to be in a catatonic state. I knew it was Jacob’s voice, but I couldn’t see him. Even if he were to walk up in front of my wide...

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Dreamnapped-Chapter Two The Party

posted by Twilight597

Chapter Two-The Party

    Charlie and I ate at the lodge than we left to Edward’s house. Edward was waiting on the porch. Charlie left and Edward and I went inside. The inside of the Cullen’s house looked like a dance club, but so much better. Alice must have gone way overboard again. It was almost eight o’clock, so guest should be joining us soon.
    Jess, Angela, Mike, Ben, Lauren, and Eric were the first to come. I found out I barely knew anybody here.
    “The mutt is still not here, but I cant see anything” Alice said...

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Kayla, Chapter 13

posted by twilight-7

Chapter 13 Guys, I wrote as fast as I could.

Jacob’s eyes refused to open. My eyes filled with moisture and tears rolled down my cheeks. I had probably killed him. I had my mind focused on his so I would be able to hear even the faintest of his thoughts, so that I would know he was ok. I was going to call Charlie but I realised that Jacob didn’t need the police. He needed a doctor. And what doctor could get here in less than three minutes?
I patted myself down, searching for my cell phone. I knew I had it when I left the house today so I must have on me somewhere. I found it in my jean pocket....

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Aura--Chapter 8--Return

posted by mikaela_isabela

hola guys, this is a loooooooong chapter, i had a lot of inspiration...so enjoi!

As we pulled into out drive-way, I was pretty much on the edge of my seat.
We were finally home, and I needed to see Bella. Carlisle could feel my tension.
“Edward, there’s no point going to her now, she’ll be fast asleep. It’s almost 7 in the morning.”
You’ll need to give her sometime, Edward. Let her cool off. Esme, always the logical thinker. But she has had over three months to cool off, and if I don’t see her now, I might just explode.
As soon as the car pulled to a stop, Alice said, “Have fun…”...

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Why I don't think Dakota Fanning is the right choice to play Jane.

posted by kitkat211

Let me start off por saying that I think Dakota Fanning is a fabulous actress. That being dicho here are my reason why I don't think she would make the best Jane. Their are a bunch a little problems and one big problem with her playing Jane. The big problem for me is her age. Dakota Fanning was born on Febuary 23 1994. That would put her at 15 years old when she starts filming in March. Thats only 4 years younger the Kristen(Bella) who was born in 1990 and only 2 years younger the Taylor(jacob) who was born in 1992. Jane is ONLY surpost be 12-13 years old and NO WHERE near Bella's age.

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Moonlight - Chapter Six

posted by Twilight_F

Here is the long awaited Chapter six....well not very long awaited...but here it is!!!! I got my ideas from the Twilight libros so there are connections. Please READ, RATE AND COMMENT!!!! ENJOY!!!!!

CHAPTER 6

This chapter is a flashback from the time when Bella’s parents died. Bella’s mum’s POV. (Renée’s POV)

It was raining heavily as Charlie, Bella and I were coming back from a supper. Bella was sleeping deeply in the back seat. When suddenly a flash of lightening came down from the sky. I heard a CRACK and in front of us fell a huge tree. Charlie braked vigorously. But it wasn’t enough....

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Moonlight - Chapter One

posted by Twilight_F

This is my first one so please read and comment. I got my ideas from the Twilight Saga. Hope tu like it and if tu do I will do more!! Sorry it's quiet short but I want to make apuntalar, costa people like it first.

I was cold and wet as I scurried away from the oso, oso de that was meters from me. But this oso, oso de was oblivious to the fact that I might be his supper. I was crawling on my hands and knees, trying to get away from this creature. But in my blind panic, I slipped and snapped a branch that I was leaning on for support.
A sudden wave of reality hit me. I was going to die. This...

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Forks, Chapter 2, New Kids

posted by doyouknow

Never in a million years would I have thought I would warm to Forks. The rain and the cold didn’t bother me anymore, but maybe that was because Jacob was always unseasonably warm.
It’s been two months since I first arrived here, and I was settling down quite well. I had made a couple of new friends in school; Jessica, Mike, Eric, Tyler and Angela were becoming quite good friends at this point. Although I got the impression that Mike and Eric wanted a little bit more. That didn’t bother me though, I already had a boyfriend. Ever since that first día Jacob and I had been inseparable. Charlie...

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Emmett and Rosalie ch.2 Alice, Jasper, and gulp Edward

posted by twerdx24x1

There was a light tapping on the front door.....

Carlisle was already at the door waiting for them to come in. Emmett and I were in the living room and Esme was in her office upstairs, and Edward had gone hunting. Carlisle opens the door in 8 tenths of a second. I got up because there was a new smell, something like lilacs, and another más chesnut flavor. I went to the door and i saw this short girl who looked to be at least 17 and a male who looked to be like 19, they were there at the door with huge smiles on their faces, but their eyes were not oro like ours, they were a deep burgundy.
They...

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Robert Pattinson one word......Hair

posted by kiki15

Robert Pattinson has a hair cut

I really don't think anything is wrong with it. I think he looks great both ways. I hope people don't get mad at him o anything because after all it is his hair. haha :) He also did a great job in Twilight considering how much pressure fans can put on actors. Team Edward!!! Not to betray what i just dicho but I also think that they should keep Jacob for the part in New Moon Taylor did a good job in the movie as well and i think that it is really unfair to just cut him out of the series like that. I also think that the actor considering the part is very arrogant on how he is más buff than...

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Sunbreak 3. There Are 4565 Cracks In My Ceiling. Jacob.

posted by mrsblack_1089

ATTENTION TEAM EDWARDS lectura THIS: Do NOT let the chapter heading affect your descision to read this. I know how some of tu felt about the POV of Jacob in BD, but just read this like tu would if it was Edward's POV. Thanks! Enjoy!

I tried again to picture what my life had been like without Renesmee, and came up mostly blank. All I could remember was that I had spent it mostly with Bella. Before Bella, I couldn't remember at all. Then every detail with Nessie was crystal clear. I could remember every expression on her face since she had been born.
It wasn't natural to be away from our imprinted...

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Vampire Confusion

posted by vampiress015

I was just thinking about Twilight-as always, and well I'm a little stuck, and I need your help.

So Vampires, Blood-Suckers, Leeches, whatever tu wanna call 'em, they're amazing, right? But then again they have their faults: they have a thirst that water won't solve, they have to keep moving around so they don't attract attention etc etc.
But then I thought about this one, I was answering a pick about Rosalie (good pick btw teNaxx, there's a apoyo coming your way) and I kinda voiced my opinion about her mostrando everyone that being a vampire isn't that great. At the time I was thinking about her...

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my twilight fantasía

posted by luvrofedward

Image Credit: -vintage-aerith @ deviantart.com

here is my twilight fantasía life......
it is SERIOUS fantasy, its also SUPER long(I am NOT exaggerating so if tu are doing something important, tu should wait to read this some other time), some of the parts of the story are not in relation to twilight at all, while others are, so if i get something different than the book, its probably on purpose, and I’m not wrong, I’m just making stuff up!
also it is in a first-person story-thingy so if tu get lost, sorry! AND it is my first story-thingy(haha) so dont sue me if its THAT bad. just tell me where i can improve! comentario PLEAZ!

My name is...

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Who is Who : Jane(Hannah Dakota Fanning)

posted by Alice_Cullen_

The Character

Name: Jane

Type: Vampire

Special Ability: Creates Mental Illusions of Pain

About Them: Jane is a vampire in coven known as the Volturi who reside in Volterra, Italy. They are regarded as "royalty" por other vampiros because they have lived for well over three thousand years and act as police, enforcing the rule that the existence of vampiros be kept a secret from humans. They often send others to travel from Volterra to prevent overzealous covens and renegade vampiros from exposing their species. They are guarded por several powerful vampiros who have been collected for their powers...