Writting part 30 on my spot! ^_^
[i]Jacob's POV [i]
I still can't believe this... Bella? Why would for any reason she would do that? I know that she like "mind controlled" but still!!!
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Then we saw a small red house. The Volturi can't fit in there! It's too small. Edward knocked on the door and the door opened. I looked around, the place was old, but fully decorated with picture frames, red flags, and some maps of the world. This place is larger than what it looked like outside.
In the end of the hall there were three chairs, thrones I guess. I couldn't reconize who was in the center o who was at his left hand. But on his right hand was.... Bella.....
Bella didn't look like herself. Just like Edward said, she was paler than usual, even más white than before. Her eyes were red. She also wore a dark cloak. When she saw us, her facial expression didn't change. It was still cold, hard, still, and was very emotionless. She stood up.
" Ah Edward, tu followed my directions. tu are a very good listener I see." she dicho while grinning.
I flinched, her voice sounded different. She usually had a high-pitched voice, full of happiness. But now, her voice is dark and was very evil-like.
" tu wanted to meet Renesmee again. So, she's right here. Jacob is also here."
She laughed lightly. "Right, I did say to bring Jacob didn't I? But I didn't say to bring the pack. Did I not?"
Edward thought about each word he said. " I thought más company might be better for all of us."
"Well, the más the merrier. Now my sweet daughter, come up here." she ordered.
Nessie looked at her dad and me with panic. We both nodded. She sighed and went up to her.
" Ah Renesmee, it's nice to see tu again. Now, I need tu to make a choice, do tu want to stay with your father in a trash house, o with me, here in a comfort of everything tu need. If tu ask the gaurds what tu want, they'll bring anything."
I stepped towards Nessie.
"STAY OUT OF THIS MONGREL!!!" she yelled at me.
"IT'S HER CHOICE, NOT YOURS."
I stepped away. "Now pick. Where would tu stay?"
" I want to stay with daddy." she dicho while her voice was trembling. Bella frowned.
" Well, now that was a bad choice darling." She pushed Renesmee to the ground with alot of force. Now Bella was laughing. She's crazy! Edward helped Renesmee up. " Are tu ok?" he whispered.
" I'm fine." she said.
" Stop actuación like tu amor her Edward. Renesmee, your father never loved you. He only kept tu because I told him so when I was still pregnant. I on the other hand, actually amor you. I let tu live, I gave tu my love, I gave tu anything tu want. Your dad is tricking you. He hates YOU! And THIS! THIS IS HOW tu REPAY ME FOR LETTING tu LIVE?!?!?! THAT'S IT!!!!! I REGRET LETTING tu LIVE!! GAURDS!!!!! KILL MY DAUGHTER!!!!!!!"
" STOP!!!!" yelled por the person at the door.
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[i]Jacob's POV [i]
I still can't believe this... Bella? Why would for any reason she would do that? I know that she like "mind controlled" but still!!!
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Then we saw a small red house. The Volturi can't fit in there! It's too small. Edward knocked on the door and the door opened. I looked around, the place was old, but fully decorated with picture frames, red flags, and some maps of the world. This place is larger than what it looked like outside.
In the end of the hall there were three chairs, thrones I guess. I couldn't reconize who was in the center o who was at his left hand. But on his right hand was.... Bella.....
Bella didn't look like herself. Just like Edward said, she was paler than usual, even más white than before. Her eyes were red. She also wore a dark cloak. When she saw us, her facial expression didn't change. It was still cold, hard, still, and was very emotionless. She stood up.
" Ah Edward, tu followed my directions. tu are a very good listener I see." she dicho while grinning.
I flinched, her voice sounded different. She usually had a high-pitched voice, full of happiness. But now, her voice is dark and was very evil-like.
" tu wanted to meet Renesmee again. So, she's right here. Jacob is also here."
She laughed lightly. "Right, I did say to bring Jacob didn't I? But I didn't say to bring the pack. Did I not?"
Edward thought about each word he said. " I thought más company might be better for all of us."
"Well, the más the merrier. Now my sweet daughter, come up here." she ordered.
Nessie looked at her dad and me with panic. We both nodded. She sighed and went up to her.
" Ah Renesmee, it's nice to see tu again. Now, I need tu to make a choice, do tu want to stay with your father in a trash house, o with me, here in a comfort of everything tu need. If tu ask the gaurds what tu want, they'll bring anything."
I stepped towards Nessie.
"STAY OUT OF THIS MONGREL!!!" she yelled at me.
"IT'S HER CHOICE, NOT YOURS."
I stepped away. "Now pick. Where would tu stay?"
" I want to stay with daddy." she dicho while her voice was trembling. Bella frowned.
" Well, now that was a bad choice darling." She pushed Renesmee to the ground with alot of force. Now Bella was laughing. She's crazy! Edward helped Renesmee up. " Are tu ok?" he whispered.
" I'm fine." she said.
" Stop actuación like tu amor her Edward. Renesmee, your father never loved you. He only kept tu because I told him so when I was still pregnant. I on the other hand, actually amor you. I let tu live, I gave tu my love, I gave tu anything tu want. Your dad is tricking you. He hates YOU! And THIS! THIS IS HOW tu REPAY ME FOR LETTING tu LIVE?!?!?! THAT'S IT!!!!! I REGRET LETTING tu LIVE!! GAURDS!!!!! KILL MY DAUGHTER!!!!!!!"
" STOP!!!!" yelled por the person at the door.
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Preface.
The reason i left was to save my family. The one I cant live without. But i wish they were here. To hold my hand. Promise me everything will be ok. But i push that thought to the back of my mind when i hear the approaching footsteps. I stand there. Alone. Preparing myself for terror that i am about to face. If i could cry, tears would be running down my face. But when the hunters prepare to attack. I crouch forward, my lips pull back over my teeth. I let out a deep growl which was cut short. My head snapped up to the sound i heard behind me.
Preface.
The reason i left was to save my family. The one I cant live without. But i wish they were here. To hold my hand. Promise me everything will be ok. But i push that thought to the back of my mind when i hear the approaching footsteps. I stand there. Alone. Preparing myself for terror that i am about to face. If i could cry, tears would be running down my face. But when the hunters prepare to attack. I crouch forward, my lips pull back over my teeth. I let out a deep growl which was cut short. My head snapped up to the sound i heard behind me.
edwards pov
' rachell u look beautifull i dicho ' then she blushed ' i amor u' i dicho scared a little for her reaction she looked at me and dicho 'i amor tu two ' ' do u mind missing school today ' sure no prob ' what do u want to do edward ' well i wanna take u to this medow remeber how i dicho i needed to tell u somthing ' yes ' well it is time ' ok ' dont be scared ' ok ' do u trust me ' yes ' ok well lets go 5 minutos later we r here so i want u to close ur eyes and hop on my bac ok ' ok y ' ull see w.e and she climed on ur eyes closed yes y r u so cold ull figure it out ' ok ' then we were there and i took her off my back and dicho stand over there ok she said.
' rachell u look beautifull i dicho ' then she blushed ' i amor u' i dicho scared a little for her reaction she looked at me and dicho 'i amor tu two ' ' do u mind missing school today ' sure no prob ' what do u want to do edward ' well i wanna take u to this medow remeber how i dicho i needed to tell u somthing ' yes ' well it is time ' ok ' dont be scared ' ok ' do u trust me ' yes ' ok well lets go 5 minutos later we r here so i want u to close ur eyes and hop on my bac ok ' ok y ' ull see w.e and she climed on ur eyes closed yes y r u so cold ull figure it out ' ok ' then we were there and i took her off my back and dicho stand over there ok she said.
bella: edward we need to talk.................................................
edward: go ahead we have got all the time in the world.
bella: ok but i don't think your gunna like it.
edward: whats wrong
bella: its nothing really but i do have to say i don't amor tu and i never have. the only reason why i married tu was cuz tu have lots of money and cuz i wanted to be a vampire. now i have got that i don't need tu anymore.
Edward: don't leave me.
bella: i have to cuz jacobs waiting for me in the car.
edward: thats my car
bella: buy a new one
bella: i am also taking renesmee with me. goodby edward. and thanks for the car
edward:noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo. not the car
bella: hu hum i dicho goodbuy edward
edward: o sorry goodbuy bella.
and so bella, renesmee and jacob lived happily ever after
edward: go ahead we have got all the time in the world.
bella: ok but i don't think your gunna like it.
edward: whats wrong
bella: its nothing really but i do have to say i don't amor tu and i never have. the only reason why i married tu was cuz tu have lots of money and cuz i wanted to be a vampire. now i have got that i don't need tu anymore.
Edward: don't leave me.
bella: i have to cuz jacobs waiting for me in the car.
edward: thats my car
bella: buy a new one
bella: i am also taking renesmee with me. goodby edward. and thanks for the car
edward:noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo. not the car
bella: hu hum i dicho goodbuy edward
edward: o sorry goodbuy bella.
and so bella, renesmee and jacob lived happily ever after
10. Take her credit cards and shopping vouchers, hold them above your head and tell her to “jump for it”.
9. Tell her if she was just a few centimetres shorter she could legally be a midget.
8. Wear the trashiest possible clothing whenever tu can.
7. Tie her up in a straightjacket. When she protests, tell her she needs to go back to the loony bin.
6. When tu go into the sun with her, fall into a twitching heap on the ground and moan “I’m melting.”
5. Pelt her with cloves of garlic.
4. When she gets a vision, ask if her “spidey senses” are tingling.
3. Trip her up and ask if she saw it coming.
2. Ask her what tu will be doing in five minutos every ten minutes.
And the Number One way to annoy Alice Cullen?
1. correo electrónico her dozens of application forms for the position of speaker on psychic hotlines.
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9. Tell her if she was just a few centimetres shorter she could legally be a midget.
8. Wear the trashiest possible clothing whenever tu can.
7. Tie her up in a straightjacket. When she protests, tell her she needs to go back to the loony bin.
6. When tu go into the sun with her, fall into a twitching heap on the ground and moan “I’m melting.”
5. Pelt her with cloves of garlic.
4. When she gets a vision, ask if her “spidey senses” are tingling.
3. Trip her up and ask if she saw it coming.
2. Ask her what tu will be doing in five minutos every ten minutes.
And the Number One way to annoy Alice Cullen?
1. correo electrónico her dozens of application forms for the position of speaker on psychic hotlines.
Source: link