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posted by twilight-7
Guys, I know these are coming out like nearly weeks apart but you'll happy to know that my last exam is tomorrow and I can dedicate like the siguiente 10 o so weeks dedicated to escritura only for tu guys. Woop! I would also like to thank tu for being so patient tu are all wonderful!
So here it is, Chapter 27.

Kayla’s POV

I woke up to darkness. At first I was scared. The darkness meant the cell and the cell meant Loren had kidnapped me and the kidnapping meant I was going to die. So I screamed. I screamed because of all the fear and anger in me. I had thought I had escaped. That I was free from any torture Loren had planned for me. Not to mention that my escape meant Loren was dead and that he couldn’t hurt me o Charlie anymore. Even though he had managed to hurt Charlie in the process of my escape but that hadn’t mattered because I healed him. It wasn’t until I felt cold hands on my arms that I realised I wasn’t in the cell.
“Sshh, Kayla,” a voice so familiar to me I knew my escape wasn’t a dream. “You’re seguro at home.”
I shut my mouth and saw that if I had dado me eyes time to adjust I would have realised that I was at home. I was in my own bedroom. The window was open and uncovered so moonlight streamed into my room and a cold breeze blew in.
“I thought...it was dark when I opened my eyes...I thought I was...”
Edward pulled me gently onto his lap and I laid my head on his shoulder. He stroked my hair to comfort me.
“I know what tu thought,” he said, a slight hardness to his voice. “Do not think that again, Kayla, because tu won’t be going back to that place. I will be here to protect you.”
I also knew what he was thinking. He blamed himself for what happened to me. He thought it was his entire fault that I was kidnapped and kept in that dark cell.
“Edward,” I said, quietly. “This isn’t your fault.”
“What isn’t?” he asked even though he knew.
“My kidnapping,” I explained. “It wasn’t your fault. Loren would have gotten me some other way.”
Edward didn’t say anything which told me he was still blaming himself.
I sighed. He leaves me alone for one moment and anything that happens to me in that one moment is entirely his fault. That is what he thinks. That is what he is thinking.
“If I hadn’t left tu alone,” he said. “The Shadow Hunters wouldn’t have taken you.”
So that’s what had taken me. Whatever had grabbed me knocked me out before I could see what they were. I didn’t know they could take people too.
“They would have gotten me some other way, Edward. They are experts at getting what they want. That’s why Loren and everyone have them.”
“But if I hadn’t left tu alone,” he insisted.
I pushed away from Edward to look up at him. I had to get him to believe it wasn’t his fault o he would be tearing himself up for all of eternity.
“Even if tu hadn’t left me alone they would have taken me,” I said. “The whole commotion of graduation is what Loren wanted. tu could have turned away for a segundo and they would have grabbed me. On my way to the bathroom they would have grabbed me. Getting into my túnica, albornoz at school they would have kidnapped me. Lots of opportunities, it just so happened they kidnapped me when tu left me. Do not feel any ounce of guilt. It was not your fault.”
Edward was now arguing in his mind about what I told him. He agreed with everything I dicho but he was still trying to find something that was his fault. He wasn’t doing it purposely he just wanted to make sure that anything he did didn’t go unpunished.
“See?” I said. “Nothing was your fault.”
He pulled me back to his chest.
“It might not be my fault but I still feel I am to blame,” he replied. “I should have found tu faster.”
“Edward, if tu keep on blaming yourself I will blame tu for the suicide I am about to commit because of your continued self blaming.”
I heard a quite chuckle and knew he wasn’t as totally depressed as I thought.
“Why would I be?” he asked. I looked up at him and saw his oro eyes sparkle. “You are here in my arms, I cannot be any happier.”
I smiled and reached up to kiss his lips. His arms tightened around me but did not hurt me. I could feel the longing he had for me. To him, it felt like I had been gone for seventy years not just seven days and it had hurt him más deeply than I had ever imagined my absence could cause. I had felt pain being away from him, I had felt my corazón ripping open and a hole created that only he could fill. I had never thought that I would make such an impact on him. I knew he loved me but feeling all the pain and agony and hurt he had felt over the past seven days I realised just how much he loved me. It went deeper than love. It was like I was his soul mate and he was mine. It was like we were destined to be. I couldn’t explain it; it was like I just knew.
He pulled away from me and looked deep into my eyes. Without words o even thoughts he told me that he knew exactly what I meant. He kissed my forehead and I laid my head on his shoulder again.
“Sleep,” he whispered. “That horrid place can’t have been too comfortable for you.”
“But I don’t want to sleep,” I said. “I want to be awake. I’ve just got back.”
“I know,” he replied. “But you’ll enjoy it más when you’re fully awake and rested. Sleep, my love.”
He began to hum that lullaby I’d heard him hum before to help me sleep. I listened to it for a while. It was very beautiful and I wondered if he’d composed it himself.
“What is that?” I asked, my voice sleepy. My eyes were closed thanks to the lullaby.
“A lullaby,” he said, a smile in his voice.
“Did tu write it?”
“I did.”
“It’s very beautiful.” I was struggling to focus on sentences and words as I was drifting further and further into sleep.
“My inspiration was you,” I thought I heard him say before I fell asleep.



I opened my eyes to find sunlight blazing in my room. I stretched my arms out and realised that Edward wasn’t siguiente to me. I didn’t panic as this wasn’t unusual. I hardly woke to Edward still lying siguiente to me. He had to run all the way inicial to change and come back, making it look like he actually did go inicial and stay there, not sneaking upstairs and spending all night with me. I smiled, wondering what Charlie’s reaction would be if he ever found out what Edward did.
I sat up and looked at the clock siguiente to my bed. It was after one in the afternoon. I slept late. I got out of cama and found that I wasn’t wearing what I had on before. I had still been in my graduation dress when I escaped. Now I was wearing pyjamas. Someone must have changed me after I fell asleep on Charlie. I walked out of my room determined to have a ducha, ducha de before going downstairs. After my long hot ducha, ducha de in which I used nearly half a bottle of ducha, ducha de gel and shampoo to get rid of all the dirt, I got dressed in jeans and a t-shirt. Wearing a dress for seven days really changes your
dress style. I tied my hair back in a poni, pony tail not caring that it was still wet. As I was closing the wardrobe door the sunlight touched my hands. It had been so long since I’d seen natural light. Seven days in the dark did no one any good. But when I remembered what sunlight meant I felt the happiness lessen. Edward couldn’t come out in the sun. It was a big giveaway to humans that he wasn’t normal. Damn. I’d just have to wait until dark to see him. I walked as quietly down the stairs as possible. I didn’t want anyone to know I was awake just yet. I wanted to actually get inside the living-room before everyone jumped me.
I only managed to open the door. Jacob was the first one to get me. He scooped my up into his signature oso, oso de hug and I didn’t complain even when my oxygen was cut off. I just hugged him back sinking into the warmth of his skin. I had missed him so much.
“Let me see her!” a voice with an English accent screamed. “Let me see her!”
Jacob dropped me gently and stepped out the way so my mother could hug me. It was like a death grip she used. She squeezed me so hard Jacob would be proud. But again I didn’t complain. I was just so happy to see her that I didn’t care.
“Oh Michaela!” she sobbed. “I thought tu were dead!”
“Nice to know, Mum,” I dicho smiling through the tears that were now rolling down my cheeks.
She let me go and I saw her tears. She wiped away mine and her hand lingered on my cheek. We stared at each other, into each other’s eyes. It was one of those mother-daughter moments. All these different emotions mixed together inside me. I never thought I would be this happy to see Sarah cisne again. The reckless crazy woman that drank herself stupid so many times I ran out of paper to tally it up. The woman that was a part of the reason why I moved to Forks but never admitted it to myself.
“I missed tu so much,” I cried to her. “I thought I’d never see tu again.”
“You missed me?” she asked, smiling. “Why do I find that surprising?”
Of course she knew what she was. She knew that she was a reckless crazy woman who drank herself stupid so many times I ran out of paper to tally it up.
I nodded.
“Oh tu silly girl,” she said, her hand dropping from my cheek. “I’m not worth the time to miss.”
“You are,” I said, grabbing her hand and holding it. “You’re my mum.”
“Some mother,” she said, looking down. “I turned up drunk at your graduation.”
“So,” I said. “You started a bit earlier than everyone else.”
She smiled, más tears coursing down her cheeks. She truly thought she was a terrible mother.
“Mum, I don’t care if tu drank the volume of the River Thames in Smirnoff Vodka. tu are my mother and tu are the best mum I could ask for. I amor you.”
“Kayla,” she sobbed before hugging me again. “You are the best daughter I could ask for.”
She let me go and wiped her eyes.
“I just need to go to the bathroom and clean up,” she sniffed before leaving the living-room. I turned around and saw Jacob gone and Darren there.
“Hi,” I said.
Darren looked a mess. He looked like he’d copied Edward, when I’d seen him in the cell. They looked so alike in that one moment. Not in actual appearance but what my absence had done to them. Darren had purple bags under his eyes and his eyes looked dead and he was so tired he could fall asleep right there standing. He looked like he’d lost weight too since I’d last seen him and that was only last week. But despite all that he was smiling.
“Kayla,” he whispered. “You really are here.”
I tilted my head, confused.
“I thought I’d dreamt the whole thing,” he said. “Even though I’ve hardly slept since tu were gone.”
I couldn’t believe that Darren would be like this over me. I mean, look at him. The guy was beyond a mess. Did this mean he loved me más than I’d thought?
“I’m here,” I said. “Safe and sound.”
He surprised me por hugging me. It was very gently, unlike Jacob’s and my mother. At first I froze. Darren had never hugged me once. An occasional pat on the arm was the most I got from him. But then I relaxed, realising that it wasn’t so bad. Darren was a part of my family now. It was possible in the cell that maybe I had thought of him. He was my sort of step-father. He had been dating my mother for four years. Their engagement was a reciente thing.
“Missed me, Darren?” I asked.
“Not at all,” he laughed. “This is what I usually look like. A complete and utter state.”
“I could have told tu that.”
He laughed and I looked up at him. Already I could see some life returning to his eyes.
“Come on,” I said. He let go of me. Even though I had just got inicial and still had other to people to see I needed to take care of Darren first. It was not because I felt guilty because I had sort of done this to him; it was because I wanted to. “Let’s get tu something to eat.”
posted by twilight-7
hola Guys, sorry it's took so long to post this chapter but I do have my GCSE's coming up. My first exam two weeks today (eek!). If tu live in America, GCSE's are big exams that we take at the end of high school. Don't know the equivalent for Americans. Anyway, I will try to post the chapters in between revision but I only have the story in note form and it still has to be written in sentences so I will try my hardest.
So here is the long awaited Chapter 17. Again, a bit crap but tu know.



Charlie’s POV

“...and Jasper saved her. He was the one who saved her from the excruciating death that...
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Leann will call bella "Izzy", because she knew Isabella from her childhood and bella used to have the name Izzy. just want to mention it because it could be confusing

Bella's pov

There was a woman standing in the doorway. She was about my heights, her hair was brown long and flat and she had the same eyes as Daniel ‘Topaz’. She was beautiful.
“Leann” I said
“How did tu past the booby-traps and how do tu know my n….., wait Izzy” she dicho surprised
I nodded “yeah, Omg Leann I’m so happy you’re alive” I dicho with unbelieve.
“I’m so happy to see tu too, Izzy, I knew tu would...
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posted by just_bella
I'm trying something new, I know people have written New Moon from Edwards perspective, but I think it would be interesting to read it from Alice's. Please be honest with me, comentarios would be great. Thanks.

Chapter One

I was standing in the cocina cleaning up the counters, looking into the future. I saw that Edward would be coming inicial and asking me to plan Bella's birthday party, that we should invest in a new computer company that was starting because we could make a lot of money off of it, that Rosalie was going to want to redo her whole wardrobe again. I thought that Bellas party would...
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Chapter 9 Father Knows Best (Edward’s P.O.V.)

“Bella do tu really think that we should interfere?” I certainly wanted to intercede but I had my doubts as to what my daughter would think of our little road trip to La Push. “Edward, we are going. I am not going to watch Renesmee in pain any longer.” Bella sounded determined as she stared straight ahead. “I thought that tu didn’t want them together and that tu wanted her to have options.” I reminded the amor of my life as gently as I could. She snarled sarcasitcally, “Well it seems like options are doing her a lot of good right...
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sorry for any mistakes i didn't read it again before posting it, so if tu find some let me now :D now i really gonna put one up later today. And thankx everyone for commenting on my artículos i really appreciate it :D :D

Bella's pov

Renesmee was standing siguiente to me and her little brother, she was smiling at him and just dicho with a little sweet voice
“hello, little brother” I couldn’t resist but smile, I was happy and glad that this was all over.
“Edward can tu take, mason” I said
“Are tu okay” he dicho in worried and panicking voice
“I’m fine, I just want tu to hold him for...
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posted by BuffyFaithFan1
LUST. . b y : B u f f y F a i t h f a n 1
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CHAPTER SIX: PEDISTALS part three...
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"But not right now of course!" Ili went on. "Cause the game then wouldn't be fun. So, be ready! And sit back to watch the fireworks!" Ili dicho and ran into the woods, and disappeared out of our sight. I turned and noticed that everybody was scared as I was...but they tried to hide it. We all finishe preparing for this, and went back inside ready to make an ambush. Three things still crossed my mind.
1.) Will she know when we do the ambush?...
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posted by BuffyFaithFan1
 Either Way tu Leave!
Either Way You Leave!
Lust
By: BuffyFaithfan1
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Chapter Three: Fight! Fight! Fight! Part One...

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I walked into the black water, as the Midnight Moon shone bright on me and Edward. We were wearing our swim suits, and I was just walking deeper and deeper into the water. I got about shoulder length, and then Edward joined me. We stared at each other, and then I heard Edwrad whisper something like "I amor you." But I wasn't that certain, so I said, "What?"
"Bella, I amor you." Edward dicho and I smiled.
"Thats what I thought...
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 Alice's vestido
Alice's gown
18 Roses

1. Daddy (Edward)
2. Gramp (Charlie - still uncomfortable in his tux)
3. Grandpa (Carlisle - ever so dashing)
4. Uncle Emmett
5. Uncle Jasper
6. Billy Black (no dancing though, just a peck on the cheek after giving me the rose)
7. Seth
8. Embry
9. Quil
10. Eleazar
11. Benjamin
12. Liam
13. Garrett
14. Sam
15. Paul
16. Jared
17. Phil (absent - replaced por Colin)
18. My Jacob

18 Candles
(Female family members and friends - time for wishes!)

1. Mom
2. Renee (didn't make it. suffering from arthritis. too bad! of course, no one could replace her. :( )
3. Grandma esme
4. Aunt Alice
5. Aunt Rose
6. Kate
7. Tanya...
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here we go, its a long one, but i got confused...enjoi!

Almost as soon as I was securely in my seat, the class room door opened and Mr. Varner, followed por Jasper and Thackery came into the room. I saw Thackery scan the room, and take in me and Ben in the middle of two vampiros and one werewolf. His eyes narrowed as he saw me sitting siguiente to Alice. I felt my tattoo burn as it usually does when my emotions are as strong as they are now. I squirmed a little but stopped when I saw Thackery, Ben, Alice, Jacob and Edward staring at me.
‘I wish tu could teach me how to stop the burn,' I complained...
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ETERNAL AGONY (Edward: A Cruel Thing Called Love)

I watched her sleep restlessly. She has been tossing and turning almost all night. I adjusted her bandaged arm and placed it over her stomach. I got up from the cama and went to sit on the rocking chair – in order to give her space. Give her el espacio – that’s what I ought to do.

Immediately after I left her side, her hands searched for me.

“No…” she whimpered. Her eyes flew open. Her eyes searched for me in the dark. Panic written all over her face.

I thought she was already deeply asleep. I sighed.

“I’m here.” I said. Her eyes adjusted...
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posted by iluvtwilight123
I untangled myself in the graceful knot that Edward and I got in. Last night was 1 of the most amasing nights of my life and Edward wouldnt let me forget it. I looked around to see what happened to my night vestido and again it was in shreds on the ground.
"Seriously Edward? how many gowns do tu need to rip before tu notice that I can't look sexy if tu keep ripping everything i own." I nearlyshouted but i couldnt because Emmett and the rest of the family was at the Cullens house which was over a brook a quarter mile from here. And Renesmee was over there sleeping over with Alice she would...
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That night Bella went inicial and had a long argument with Jacob about working and hanging arond with the Cullens. "Bella, tu know I don't like tu hanging around with them bloodsuckers. tu shouldn't do this to me, you'll get hurt,"Jacob dicho with false conserne. "Jacob, tu stopped me from going to college because tu didn't want to leave La Push, I understand that but your not even around any más I can't always hang around with Christy any más she has a job tu know! Ineed to get off my but and work have some fun and enjoy life while it lasts!" Bella complained over and over but Jacob wouldn't...
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posted by twilight-7
If I kept tu waiting tu know I am sorry!



Charlie was out of the hospital and lounging in front of the TV, watching baseball on ESPN. He looked completely healthy and according to him felt healthy. I guess it was the Azdi part of him that had helped him heal so well although Charlie denied having healing abilities. I sat siguiente to him.
“Want anything?” I asked him.
“I’m alright,” he said, not taking his eyes off the batter that was running round the bases.
“I do not understand that sport,” I said, shaking my head clueless at the screen.
“It’s very simple. See that guy that’s...
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Ch 2
A/N: Hey! This is Ch.2 of my story. If tu actually read this, thanks. Also, if tu do read it, please review and suggest (even if tu don't like it.) I own nothing



Bella's POV

I woke up in the living room. The tv was, of course, on. ESPN had on baseball game. Red Socks vs Yankees. But, as soon as my eyes opened, Charlie noticed. He was watching me, not the game.

"Bella! Are tu okay? tu just passed out. Everybody left." Charlie said, worried.

"I'm fine, what time is it?" I asked

"5:30."

"AM o PM?" I asked, very, very curious.

"Ummm............PM."

'Why did I sleep so long?' I asked...
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I’m in a hotel where the interview will take place. Robert is late, although understandably so. He’s been doing interviews all day, so I try to be patient. Suddenly, the door opens and Robert walks in apologizing with a very thick British accents that makes tu melt. He’s tall and thin, he has a very pale skin. He’s wearing jeans and a T-shirt under another shirt. He’s hair is messy and it looks as though he had fallen asleep. He plays with a bottle of coke. When he finally sits down we start out interview…
What made tu want to be in this movie? Had tu read the books?No, I hadn’t...
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posted by twilight-7
This is just a little thing i wrote and would amor to continue it but i just want to hear what tu think of this before i do. rate and comentario plz!!!




I didn’t know how to tell my mother that I wanted to leave the country. I wanted to tell her the real reason but I was convinced that it would upset her and I wanted her to be happy. How could I explain to her that her fiancée hated me and wanted to ship me off to a boarding school in Switzerland? I didn’t want her to feel that she would have to break up with him because I didn’t like him. Rephrase that, because I hated him. He obviously...
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posted by mwalsh
hope u like it leave a comment

chapter three
(mia's pov)
we stopped when we got to a little clearing covered in flowers, he let go of my hand and went to sit down he patted the floor siguiente to him for me to go sit with him, i sat down and faced him, he took both my hands in his and started playing with my fingers. "amelia, i told tu that i am a werewolf, well werewolfs do this thing called imprint" he looked up from our hands and into my eye's "when we find the person we are meant to be with, she is the one holding us on this earth not gravity" he was still staring into my eye's "amelia when i...
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posted by mikaela_isabela
okay, you've seen the prologue, this is the first chapter...enjoi!

I knew it was too early to get up, yet I couldn’t just lie there any more. If I didn’t do something, I may just go mad. My beautiful, immortal vampire boyfriend was out hunting with his brothers and wouldn’t be inicial until later today. His sister Alice was supposed to stay with me, but thanks to her amor of dressing me up like a barbie doll and my clever planning, she stayed at her place to arrange a whole new wardrobe for me and I got to spend the night without being babysat. I rolled over and looked at my alarm clock....
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posted by mrsblack_1089
This is sort of a short one...

"Hey, Renesmee, wait up!"
I didn't have to turn to know the voice. It was Mrs. Malagwa, my art teacher, the only person at Brenton who insisted on calling me 'Renesmee.'
I turned and smiled at her. "Is there a problem, Mrs. Malagwa?"
"No, no problem." she panted, out of breath, though she'd only jogged a few steps. I waited for her to continue. "The Valentine's día Dance is coming up," she said. "And tu have such artistic ability. We need más members on the Decorating Comittee." she held up a sheet that was half filled with signatures.
Ah, the dance. I was...
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posted by alicecullen91
I thought the movie was great! If i had to rate this movie it would be an A.
Acting: B+
Directing: A
Story: A

My favorito! parts have to be:
+the besar scene
+how the movie started
+how the movie ended (good cliffy)
+the baseball scene (very funny)
+the prom
+bella tellimg charlie that she a fecha with edward.
+the meadow

My least favorito! parts are:
- how edward acted soooo dramatic at the meadow
-the hospital scene at the end of the movie (a little más detail needed to be added)
-the WAY too fake flying and running with bella.

thanks to the movie, i really enjoyed some of the characters in the book, for...
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