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posted by Bella0405
Just something i wrote, as the story is evolving Twilight characters will be included (in a different situations, such as dating and stuff). Nahla1309 and Shellycane were an inspiration for my story. Tnx to Shellycane for idea and help!!!


WHAT MEETS THE EYE



02. TRIP TO DESTINATION

Friday morning, unusually dark, grey and rainy for Phoenix. Girls got up pretty early, ate breakfast, got dressed and all eager and ready for their one día drive off to Forks. They decided to go with Beth's car, a new shiny black Jeep Compass, ideal for journeys, they have all the room they need in that car. Taylor and Rachel used to tease Beth when she bought that car. It's enormous and Beth is such a small tiny creature. She used to say that that car is a reflection of her personality, her little lobo cub, strong and fast like a wolf, but still gentle and sleek like she is. Beth was first to drive then they planned to take turns when she gets tired.
"Beth, come on honey, we're all set, let's go!!!"- Rachel shouted from the bottom of the stairs.
"Just a minute, I'm comin'!!!"
"Do tu always....does she always have to be the one to be waited for, gosh!"- Rachel tried to shout to her but Taylor stopped her, just to keep the good mood.
And there she was, finally, running from the parte superior, arriba of the stairs, with her bag in one hand and the car keys in the other. Her almost short orange-reddish hair looked messier than usual. She wore blue jeans, white camisa, camiseta with sleeves that were little over her elbows, dark grey vest on parte superior, arriba of it, and a little silver shoes, like ballerina.
"Sorry guys, I couldn't find my car keys!"- she dicho in an apologetic tone.
"Oh we know. Let's go!"- Rachel smiled and winked at Taylor.
They put their bags in a trunk, one at the time, in prefect order, from biggest to the smallest, then got into the car. With Beth behind the wheel which meant loud rock música big part of the way. Taylor sat on a passengers asiento siguiente to her and Rachel behind them, she liked being comfortable, even to fall asleep during the journey. Girls knew what are they getting into when they agreed to go with Beth's car, and letting her drive first early in the morning.

"It's mostrar time!"- Beth smiled at them and started the engine, and they were on their way to Forks.
"A little música for the road, ha girls, what do tu say?!"
"Of course Beth, we were counting on that."- Rachel chuckled.
She turned on the CD player, and the música begun to play, the song Run from Snow Patrol was playing, Beth really loved that song, she dicho that that particular song makes her sad and happy in the same time. Rachel and Taylor didn't mind the song, they liked it too.

"There's something magical about that song, isn't it?"- Beth asked expecting a positive answer.
"Is that a pregunta o a statement?"- Taylor asked through a smile.
"A bit of both I guess."- and they all laughed.
"Well we know tu honey, but it's nice to start a día with this song instead with that usual stuff that u listen to when tu drive. I mean we can hear tu all the way from that curve when You're coming home."- Rachel teased a bit.
"I know!"- Beth giggled.
"That's why I made a brand new CD with the songs we all love. Am I not a sweetheart?!"
"I know I am, mostrar a little gratitude here."- she whispered to herself.
"Oh sweetie, thank You, tu know tu are!"- Taylor was sincerely grateful.
So the drive kept on, but Beth wasn't tired, she just kept driving and canto her favorito! songs, she used to say that nothing is hard work with a little bit of music. A few hours have passed by, Rachel fell asleep in the back seat, with her soft long brown hair she looked like an angel, so peaceful while sleeping. Rain was still pouring outside, not so great día for a road trip as the weather is concerned, it seemed like there is no end of the black and grey clouds above. Everything looked so sad, even Taylor looked más sad and troubled than usual. But nothing could break Beth's spirit, driving away alone was good enough fun for her, so tried to talk to Taylor and make her laugh as much as it was possible. Sometimes she was laughing her eyes out, and in the other moment she had that serious sad face again. She often made the girls sad only por looking at her, as she held her cup of té in the evening, almost every evening, sitting in her chair in their little library. She used to lean back in her early 20th century french style black armchair, with her head tilted to the left. Her shiny black shoulder length hair falling on one side, and her eyes so empty, soulless stare through the window, like waiting for her long lost amor that went away and promised to came back someday, but he never did. They both tried so hard to soften her corazón and soul, they loved her so much, to tell her that everything will be okay, and that she doesn't have to feel lonely, o scared o even sad, they were there for her, her friends, her sisters, her family. It was long behind lunch time, so they got pretty hungry por now and decided to find a restaurant, eat something and rest for a bit. They reached LA and kept going on road I-5 toward Sacramento, and finally found a small restaurant por the road, with a funny name.
"Wow, this is awkward. From dusk 'till dawn."- Taylor read the glowing sign on the parte superior, arriba of the house that the restaurant was in.
"Well maybe, if we're lucky, some strange looking people will be there, strippers with snakes, and bunch of vampiros will try to eat us alive!"- Rachel teased Beth again for the vampiros and giggled.
"Oh, don't be silly Rach, all the vampiros are asleep now, no one will eat us alive, at least not during daylight."- she answered in the same tone.
"Come on tu two, enough of vampiros and other unearthly beings and let's go eat, I'm starving."- Taylor added walking toward the restaurant.
"Well, technically vampiros are not unearthly....."
"Yes, yes, okay we get it, think of the food, will You!"- Rachel interrupted Beth in her most intellectual explanation about vampires.
They got in, it was mostly usual cena, comedor actually, nothing fancy, a few old wooden tables with old fashioned tablecloths and matching chairs. a few truckers were in, having their meal and drinking coffee. The three of them found a mesa, tabla por the window and sat down, and an old woman, with a silly apron, red with white dots and laced at the ridges, supposedly to be a waitress approached them. She took their order and poured them three cups of coffee. They ate, and the journey continued, but Taylor sat behind the wheel this time, with Rachel in the passengers seat, and Beth in the back seat, now she wanted to get some sleep. comida always made her sleepy.
It was almost completely dark, and the storm was getting wilder, thunders louder. They were all a bit scared, trying to find a motel por the road to settle down for the night, but all the motels on the maps were gone, none of them as they supposed to be, it felt to them like the were the only one in the world, like in some kind of a horror movie.
The thunders were getting closer, lightnings so strong and bright, it felt like it's día when lightning struck, the girls were getting even más scared. They pulled over for a moment, it stared to rain a bit. They saw a car lights coming from the opposite way, Taylor got out of the car hoping to stop that car and ask if they know how far is there to a some kind of a motel o anything, restaurant, gas station o whatever with roof and door. Other two followed her out.
She had no luck in attracting their attention, the car just rushed por them as if they don't even exist. But they managed to attract a horrible unearthly force to themselves. A lightning!
They didn't even expect that would ever happen to them. Taylor opened a little umbrella that she took from Beth car, with metal point and handle, and with Rachel and Beth under each arm. They were on the open road with nothing around them but concrete and plain grounds, not even a tree. And the laws of nature took their part. The just fell unconscious on the ground por the car with an awful scream.
minutos passed, Taylor opened her eyes, with a loud moan she got up, had a terrible headache. But it got worse when she saw at the first look lifeless bodies of her friends, two persons that she could not continue to live without. It was pouring por then, she remembered what happened, and she started to scream and cry so loud with pain, the scene in front of her caused that pain. She was always the strong one, but to live through something that not one living person could, a lightning strike, that was nearly impossible. She finally got up to her senses and approached her friends that were lying still on the ground, touched both of their necks in buscar of a heartbeat. They were both still alive, barely, but still. She was weak, but managed to put them both, one por one in the car, hoping for a miracle. well she was a doctor after all, then remembered her medical school and what to do in situations like this. She did her best. Beth, who was half sitting, half lying in the passengers seat, opened her eyes in fear and with disorientation, completely numb in the moment. Taylor hugged her so hard and kissed her, and explained to her through tears what happened, in that moment Rachel was coming to her senses.
"It's okay sweetie, we're here, I amor tu both."- Taylor whispered through tears.
This was a situation for a guinness book of records. All three of them, got struck por a lightning, and lived to tell the tale, with some minor consequences, like headache and feeling of disorientation. That was a traumatic experience for them that will follow them through life. They sat in the car celebrating that they were still alive, wondering how that actually happened, for about an hour. Taylor decided that is time to continue a buscar for a room, so she started the engine. Storm became más quiet with every moment, and eventually stopped, it was so quiet then, only wind and car engine roar could be heard. It was late, a couple of miles up north they found a tiny motel por the road, lucky for them, it was vacant. They asked for one room, not wanting to separate for the night. What they just lived through it's not weird at all.
When they came into the room, they sat on one big bed, they relaxed a bit. and at that moment emotions burst through, silent tears followed por a loud cries. They comforted each other, lucky that they are still together, but Taylor absolutely broke, she was shaking and crying, they were not able to calm her down. Their attempt to do so interrupted yet another weird and unexpected thing. A TV set mysteriously burst into flames. Rachel and Beth managed to put off the fuego with a fuego extinguisher, cursing the motel, storm and bad electricity. Taylor finally calmed down, and fell asleep, Rachel turned off the lights, and they followed Taylor as well. It was a long day, they got through a lot, they deserved to rest and dream of colorful places and happy people.
It was already morning, time to continue with the drive. They decided that Rachel will be driving, she was the only one that had no headache, so she could keep her eyes and mind on the road, Taylor slept in the back seat.
That was the most quiet 7 hours drive ever, they didn't say a word, no música no nothing. Taylor woke up por the time they finally reached Forks, they passed the sign that dicho THE CITY OF FORKS, WELCOME.
"Imagine this, we're finally here, alive and in one piece. Everything is so grey....so sad, and quiet."- Beth shared her disappointment with girls. "I sure hope something interesting will happen here."- she added.
They all looked at each other with sadness in their eyes, hoping for a rayo, ray of sunshine.
posted by vampirelover17
edwards pov


' rachell u look beautifull i dicho ' then she blushed ' i amor u' i dicho scared a little for her reaction she looked at me and dicho 'i amor tu two ' ' do u mind missing school today ' sure no prob ' what do u want to do edward ' well i wanna take u to this medow remeber how i dicho i needed to tell u somthing ' yes ' well it is time ' ok ' dont be scared ' ok ' do u trust me ' yes ' ok well lets go 5 minutos later we r here so i want u to close ur eyes and hop on my bac ok ' ok y ' ull see w.e and she climed on ur eyes closed yes y r u so cold ull figure it out ' ok ' then we were there and i took her off my back and dicho stand over there ok she said.
posted by jamiesue00
We were in the car for about an hora when Jake took my hand and smiled at me. “We are here.” He dicho pulling into a secluded driveway. There wasn’t another house for miles; we were all alone. We drove up the driveway and through the trees and bushes came the most beautiful house I’ve ever seen. It was perfect, with a three car garaje and a wraparound porch going all the way around the main level. Jacob reached into the guante box and pulled out a garaje door opener. “How did tu get that?” I asked. “Well, this house belongs to your Aunt Rose and Uncle Emmett. I was talking with...
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posted by CharmedVamp101
I watched as the Cullen's gathered in a circulo, círculo and I sat down to wait. I watched their mouthes moving, but heard no sound come out. I wondered what they were talking about. I watched intently, trying to read their lips, but I failed.
"Are tu ready,"Edward asked as he turned back to me.
"Ready as I'll ever be."
I couldn't wait to see what was myth and what was true.
"First Emmett and Rosalie, they will demonstrate our strength and how impenetrable we are. Only vampire teeth and werewolf teeth can cut through our skin."
Edward sat down beside me. Werewolf teeth? hombres lobo exist? That was neat and...
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BUFFY FAITH fan 1 ...
ALRIGHT, THANKS TO ALL THE fans OUT THERE WHO just amor my two libros that I started on here: BLOOD LUST, STORYTELLER, and BLEED IT OUT -STORYTELLER 2-: thanks for all of the WONDERFUL comentarios and I'll be ready to write again...ONCE I stop this writers block! Its nothing major I can write right now if I want, but I just can't think of ANYTHING else to do with RACHEL, MILE, and KANDICE in STORYTELLER
or BELLA AND EDWARD AND THE GANG in BLOOD LUST!
so comentario me giving me ideas that connect with the last part of the reciente chapter I published here! And maybe JUST MAYBE I'll...
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posted by CharmedVamp101
I had my family gather in a group to figure out what each family member can show. Liz sat about 5 feet away, so we whispered. Alice, Jasper and I would mostrar her that some vampiros had a gift above all else. Emmett would mostrar her the strength. Carlisle would mostrar her the speed. Rosalie would mostrar her the indestructability. Esme would mostrar her the senses.
"Are tu ready,"I asked as I turned to face her.
"Ready as I'll ever be."
"First Emmett and Rosalie, they will demonstrate our physical strength and how impenetrable we are. Only vampire teeth and werewolf teeth can cut through our skin."
Rosalie...
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posted by jamiesue00
Chapter 4
“I can’t believe my little girl is getting married today, are tu scared o nervous?” My voice breaking as I dicho that. I hoped she couldn’t tell how nervous I was.
“Momma, don’t worry about me, I amor Jake and he loves me. I’ve waited a long time for this mom. Please don’t worry about me so much.” Nessie dicho full of confidence.
I was having flash backs when me and my mother would have these pep talks. I was always the one telling her she had nothing to worry about and just go for anything tu want. I couldn’t believe I was having the same kind of talk with my own...
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posted by jamiesue00
Chapter 2 - engagement
“What’s going on, tu all look like someone has died.” Nessie came into the cottage, her hair windblown from running.
“It’s nothing sweetheart, Jake was just talking to your father about a car he thought he might want to fix up.” I’ve become quite good at lying since I became a vampire.
We all stood there staring at each other, not saying a word. I could see that Jake wasn’t going to say anything and Edward was too busy lectura what Nessie and Jake weren’t saying. I could see the desperation in Jakes face.
“Edward, why don’t tu and I go up to the...
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posted by bitten_byedward
Ch 9


A/N: I own no copyright. No characters are mine except Ms.Daniels. Sorry it took my so long. Busy/Writers block. New story line. Sort of. Plz R&R!



Bella POV

3 MONTHS LATER

I. Was. Pathetic.

Over the past three months, my life had changed dramatically. I went from having a fairy tale life to having a screwed over life.

I rebelled. Went against the man. I lived in the principals office now. I went from straight A's, nice reputation, perfect actually. To bad to the bone.

I missed him. And his family. I had nightmares about them.

I missed Jake. I had just became friends with him........
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Chapter 6 - Date


    When I pulled into the parking lot at school, I saw the icy Volvo parked six spots down. I stepped out of the truck and slipped. I fell but-first in a mud puddle. How embarrassing. Out of nowhere, Colleen and Stefan were both helping me up and Colleen rushing me to the girls bathroom. She had an extra pair of jeans that looked exactly like the ones I’d worn before.
“ Thank tu so very much! I don’t know what I would do without you.” I said, truly grateful. My outfit had almost been ruined.
“ Don’t mention it, Wendi. You’re the only friend...
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It was confirmed today, that Carter Burwell will NOT be composing the score for New Moon. Alexander Desplat is composing in Carter's place. This raises the question, will Chris Weitz and Alexander Desplat use the lullaby Carter composed?

In my personal opinion, I really think it's better if they keep the same lullaby. Alot of fans may disagree. And I agree to an extent, it did not sound like a lullaby. But, during the lullaby scene when they were in the trees, there was a paino melody solo. If they kept that melody, but expanded it o made it más complex, it would sound más like a lullaby. And they could keep the continuity.

What do tu guys think?
 The paino Melody Solo during the Lullaby
The Piano Melody Solo during the Lullaby
posted by BuffyFaithFan1
 u talking to me?
u talking to me?
CHAPTER THIRTEEN: Its Okay Mom...I'm Only Bleeding...Part One...

I crept through the halls of the Cullen's house, noticing no one was here. No sound came from ANY room. Just...silence! I opened the door that was shut that lead to Carlisle's room. I opened it, and saw some familiar person lying on the bed. I smiled, and noticed that Jacob was sleeping. I closed the door, and skipped down the stairs. I met Edward at the bottom, and I leapt into his arms. I kissed him on the cheek, and he then kissed me on the lips. I held him to me, and then Emmett flicked us in the back in the head a moment...
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posted by xxEmo92xx
 Daniella's Pick
Daniella's Pick
"Oh my god!" Daniella cried out with pleasure. "It's perfect. The golden accents, the small ruffles at the bottom, I amor it." Daniella almost cried. "Ummm, sweetie, it is a barbie gown." Alice interrupted. Daniella soon became furious. Her eyes turned red and her hands moved back and forth slowly. "I will make this wedding perfect. No 'sprite' will tell me what is what in my own wedding. For I am a shapeshifter, and I intend to use my gift for the wedding of the century." Daniella turned into a barbie doll, tried on the dress and turned back into herself. Wearing the dress with the golden...
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Chapter Three

    “ Hello there, Wendi. Would tu like to sit with us today?”, Colleen dicho in a sweet beautiful voice. I nodded and sat, too amazed to speak. Jacob spoke next. “ Cat got your tongue?”, he teased. I smiled and blushed. “Leave her alone, Jacob. tu are too scary for her to talk to you. Just listen to how fast her corazón is going.”, Leo said. Colleen gave him a sharp look and he was silent.
    I had no clue what they meant but they were slightly weird. As I thought this, Carmen sneered and giggled. “ Shut it, Carmen.”, Colleen...
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It has come to my attention that the respuestas feature is frequently used incorrectly in the Twilight Spot. I have seen numerous preguntas such as.." Who is hotter, Edward o Jacob," o "What is your favorito! book from the series?" It is okay to ask preguntas like this (even though they start to get repetitive) but please use the Pick feature, which is made for oppinionated respuestas and questions.

The respuestas Feature is meant for FACTUAL preguntas only. I have seen other spots and it seems to me that the Twilight Spot is a perfect example for wrongly placed questions.

I'm just stating a concern and hope that i helped a small bit. Here is a great articulo por Cinders, from the fanpop Etiquette spot that does a great job explaining the respuestas Feature.

link

Thanks for listening to me rant :p
posted by BuffyFaithFan1
 How Can I Help tu If tu Keep Pushing Me Away!?
How Can I Help You If You Keep Pushing Me Away!?
STORYTELLER
by: BuffyFaithfan1
Chapter Four: Whispers In The Wind!...
The whispers over whelmed me! I open my eyes and saw three faces staring into my face. They were dead looking and one looked familier. There was two guys and a girl. One girl had a scar running down the side of her face. The other girl had a huge gash in her neck. And the guy had a huge chunk of meat missing from his neck. And his side. I then pushed the two girls aside and kicked the guy back so I could have some space. I then realized that the guy was Jackson. From ROOM: 4. Remember? He told me only two things that I wanted...
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posted by BuffyFaithFan1
 Hilarie aparejo, burton as Peyton Sawyor!
Hilarie Burton as Peyton Sawyor!
STORYTELLER
by: BuffyFaithfan1
Chapter One: The Fear...
I fell to the feet of my killer. He smirked at me as the blood oozed out of the freshly made wound. He kept that smirk till the light started to fade. I studied his face and remembered it to recognize anywhere. And then the lights got darker and darker and then my eyes closed and I couldnt see my killer.
I woke up in a white room. Everything was white. The chairs, tables, walls, cieling, and there was no door. I loosened the covers that trapped me to the bed, and sat up to look around. Just then a guy walked through a white door. Oh,...
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posted by xxEmo92xx
Danie turned into a blob of manzana, apple sauce, then shape-shifted back into a human. "There" She said.
"Hey Erin! So I see tu got my text."

"Yeah! Congrats! tu have to tell me all about this Parick."

"No, tu tell me about tu being part of the Volturi."

"How did tu know?"

"Well me being a vamp and everything, I get one power which is shape-shifting."

"What does that have to do with it?"

"Oh nothing I just needed to tell you."

"Ok, how did tu find out?"

"Your friend Alice told me."

"Oh,ok. Yeah, so tu know my dad is Aro and my little sister is Jane."

"I didn't even know that!" Alice said."Why didn't tu tell me?"

"I wasn't ready to yet."

"Erin, tu are my best friend; I tell tu everything, tu should tell me the same."

"Ok,sorry."

"It's fine. Now come on, let's go shopping for your friend's big day."

"Ok, let's go."

Two hours later, Alice, Erin, and Danie were still roaming around when they found the "perfect dress".
posted by xxEmo92xx
 Erin in real life!
Erin in real life!
Heres a guide to my story that I am writing,Erin.


1.Erin is part of the Volturi, but she is half human-Spoiler!

2.not everything will be exactly like the books,it will be dramatized a little.

3.Erin is my best friend in real life, so I try to make her as realistic as possible.

4.This one is más about me:I don't like cussing in my stories because I don't cuss a lot in real life, but it makes my stories funnier,agree?

5.We might make a movie out of this when we are done-Spoiler!

6.Erin was telling me about one of her friends, Danie, and she might be in a few chapters-Spoiler!

7.Erin tries to kill Alice later in the story-Spoiler!
 Our trademark...lol!
Our trademark...lol!
posted by vampiress015
I just have to say that this isn't really Twilight fan-fiction, nor Harry Potter for that matter. It's a mix. I noticed on fan-fiction.net that loads of people were escritura them, so I thought I'd give it a go myself. So, anyway, here it is:

Chapter One- The Essence of a Fan

'Edward, we amor you!'
'No, I amor him more'
'I swear on Jacob's life that I amor Edward más than you'
'How does that work? tu don't even like Jacob'
'Do too, I'm on Team Switzerland'
'Then tu can't amor Edward more- tu amor them both'
'Edward come back!'
Harry jumped out the way as two screaming girls flew past. His...
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LOS ANGELES - Stephen King’s opinion may drive a stake through the corazón of “Twilight” autor Stephenie Meyer.

In an interview with USA Weekend, the bestselling autor compared Meyer with J.K. Rowling, the autor of the Harry Potter series.

According to Stephen, “Both Rowling and Meyer, they’re speaking directly to young people… The real difference is that Jo Rowling is a terrific writer and Stephenie Meyer can’t write worth a darn. She’s not very good.”

Meeooww!

While Stephen may not be a fan of Stephenie’s writing, he understands the appeal of the series.

“People are...
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