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I wrote a poem can u plz tell me if its good?

Im just a girl
he was just a boy
thats what everyone else saw....
but they saw so much más in each other..
to him she wasnt just a girl she was an ángel that had taken his heart
to her he wasnt just a boy he was her soulmate, who'd left his corazón with her....
it hurts me because all that amor is gone he's found somone new who he has dado his corazón to.......
amor is rare
hold on to it.........
my corazón is broken.....
in to little peices......
im mostrando you.....
what you've done to me......
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??? wow someone has relationship issues. that is so depressing. I dont really like it its really sad .
9twilightlover5 posted hace más de un año
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well im telllng a story this happened to my friend,,, so i just wrote it idc if u dont like it im just try=in to point out that amor dosrnt always work..... but tnax for ur comentario
twilight_lover9 posted hace más de un año
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wow !!!!!!!! omg !!! ♥♥♥
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jennyjen said:
it is awesome i amor it.... its great.......i amor it
select as best answer
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thank u
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