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posted by SweetHoneyBunny
Talow stood lectura the task he had been given. It had come from the general of the battalions and recruiting so he couldn't object. He read the scrawled out message again:

Task #1: Thursday, August 3 ****
Recruit 003579-Dains

tu are to reportar to the prison-holds this afternoon for your task of executing the captured victims from the villages of Dains and of the Bellator boy captured one día after. Failure to comply will result in serious penalty including but not restricted to:
Demotion
Reassigned
Imprisoned
Death

Talow swallowed as he pushed open the large doors, behind were the prison-holds. The air held a stench of sweat and blood that lingered in one's throat. He forced himself not to gag as he walked towards the three soldiers standing around a large desk. The escritorio was occupied por a large man who was giving one boy the death stare.
“You brought this upon yourself, failure to follow the rules has its consequences.” The man's fingers were inched towards a drawer in the desk, the boy in pregunta watched silently. “Do tu remember what it was tu did?” The man sat forward, a wicked grin on his face. The boy was sweating but made no mover to wipe his brow. “Speak!” He jolted and like a machine began to talk.
“I refused to follow my battalion into battle, leaving my brothers to the mercy of the Bellators.” His mouth clamped shut when he was done.
“Exactly.” The man at the escritorio had a look in his eye like a savage beast with its prey pinned under it. “And tu know why I have to punish tu for this. If everyone started abandoning mission we would have lost years ago. Is that what tu want! To be ruled por self-loving Bellators! Well do you?” The man's face had turned red with rage as he leaned across the escritorio to shout in the traitor's face.
“No...I...um..” He was silenced por the man as he stood and gripped him por the throat.
“I new tu were a rata the día tu were recruited.” He dropped him to the ground. “Take him away, I'll deal with him later.” Two of the soldiers who had been standing behind the boy now came adelante, hacia adelante and grabbed him por the arms. His shouts and pleading could be heard as he was dragged down the hall. Talow watched them leave and was having segundo thoughts about this when the man noticed him.
“Quit cowering and get over here before I do the same to you.” Talow obeyed and stood before the man, handing his paper over. The man read it and sank back into his chair.
“So, tu got the guts to do this o are tu going to chicken out like most of them?” Talow didn't say a word as the man walked around the escritorio and lead him down the same hall the soldiers had vanished down. Talow could see people locked behind bars, dirty and sad-looking as he passed keeping close to the officer. When they reach cell 23 Talow could see the villagers from Dains watching him as the door was unlocked. They backed into the corner as the officer entered the cell and grabbed a thin man with bloody nails and a bruise on his cheek. He dropped him in-front of Talow.
“Your choice. We can do this the quick way o we can drag it out.” He pulled from his cinturón, correa a small gun and a club with nails poking out of it. Talow looked from the weapons to the man who was watching the floor, not meeting his eyes. Talow picked the gun, checking how many rounds it had left. One. Just enough to finish the job. He saw the officer watching him, waiting for him to pull the trigger and end this mans life in full view of the others. Talow knew this man which made all so much harder. As he aimed the gun and steadied his shaking finger on the trigger Talow was about to bury the bullet in the man's head when a shout from down the hall forced him to jerk his hand and shoot the floor siguiente to the man. The officer spun on his heel and stormed down the small ahllway, stopping at a cell containing one person. The boy who had attacked Talow in the clearing. The man dicho something to him before he started walking back to his escritorio to fins another bullet.

Talow took this opportunity to run down the hall and stop at the cell.
“Why did tu do that?” He asked the boy behind the bars. The boy leaned casually against the wall, examining his nails.
“Do what?”
“Stop me from shooting that villager.” Talow was growing impatient knowing that his time was running out.
“I know tu don't like killing, it's written all over your face.” The boy came closer. “You want to get out of here?” Talow nodded eagerly. “Next chance tu get out of this place find the main road until tu reach a place with two alley ways. Take the second, it'll lead tu the jungle.” Talow made a mental note of what he was told.
“Why are tu helping me?”
“Think of it as a favour.” Talow took a step back from him and started to turn away.
“Thank you...um..” He didn't even know his name to thank him properly.
“Name's Raza, now get out of here.” Raza shooed him away as the officer started coming back down the hall.

Talow found the entrance to HQ easy enough, it was getting out that would cause some problems. He waited around until he saw someone he knew.
“Nico, Cyle!”
“Hey Talow, what's up?” They stopped to talk to him, moving to a muro where they wouldn't be in the way.
“I was wondering if tu guys could get the guards to open the doors since you've both got más seniority then me. I think I dropped something outside when we were coming back.” Cyle and Nico exchanged looks, not quite believing his story but they helped him anyway. When Talow was far enough away, he started to follow the directions Raza had dado him, sure enough he found himself at the edge of the jungle. All he had to do was dive in there and he'd be inicial free, but should he? Talow looked back at the city noticing the line of men coming down the main road. He still held the plans under his chaqueta and he knew they were looking for him. Were they after the plans? Did they know he had escaped? All thinking came to late as UFS soldiers found him. Maybe if he talked to them they would see it from his point of view. He had the plans, all he had to do was mostrar them.
One day. A girl named Rachel was camping with her friend, Misty. Later, they climbed trees. When Rachel fell from 5 feet, Misty went into the deep, dark forest to look for the ranger. After 2hours, Rachel decided to look for her friend. After searching, she found a row of what looked like cottages. Curious, she stepped into a newly built one. She saw a girl with long whitish-blonde hair and a white dress, slightly torn.You know, it kind of looks like..."AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHH!"

Please tell me if it needs any other revisions. If not, I will mover on to chapter 2. Note: For Chapter one, I will not go farther than "AAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHH!"
Chapter 1


Warren poked his head slightly above the covers, noticing
the blinds were up, mostrando a bright and sunny day. He slowly peaked at the clock, trying not to look at the walls around him. 11:03am. Crap. He closed his eyes, using his senses to go downstairs for what was left of breakfast. He grabbed his old baseball bat that Sam had dado him in a chance to try to get his little brother to become "normal" and used it as a walking cane. He had tapped into his hearing, smelling, and feeling senses to the point where if he did loose his eye sight, he could live. If only I could loose my eye...
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posted by sadiebugz00
Realistic Fiction

Chapter 3
The Shopping Trip


Anne's point of view

I got out of my dad's car, walked a few paces, then remembered to thank him. So, I turned around and what did I find? 1) My dad had already left. (Pffttt....Jackie Chan time.) 2) The cutest boy I have ever seen.

He had castaña, castaño hair with beautiful, gleaming forest green eyes. It looks like he's saying something, but I can't make it out, because I was so absorbed in his beauty. Once I come to my senses, I finally find out he was saying, "What are tu looking at, weirdo?" I blush and turn away, walking towards our agreed meeting place...
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posted by kyran12
CHAPTER 1

when cringe woke up all he could see was a crouched figure in the dark. As he watched, the figure slowly rose to its feet and walked away. Cringe was confused, he could remember getting up this morning and going to school and then... and then...... Nothing.

the siguiente día the figure was back but this time he wasn't alone. there was a child standing siguiente to him. as cringe started to get up a voice came from the child, but it was different, it was an adults voice. "who are you?" the voice was deep and almost metallic.
"who wants to know" cringe was known for his sarcasm at school but it...
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Chapter (19):
She walked into a unfamiliar kitchen, where three people sat around a small table, "Morning" she said, "Nice of tu to registrarse us.." dicho a girl with pale hair and bright green eyes, "Shut up Suse" she said, "Lily please respect your sister" dicho Laura Gellar, she walked to the mesa, tabla and settled siguiente to her father, "What's for breakfast?" she asked, "Pancakes,and if tu don't want any cereal" replied Jonathan, "Mom, can I have two panqueques, tortitas please" she asked, "Sure, Susie could tu please put some for your sister?" replied Laura, "of course" dicho Susie with a forced smile and she put...
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Chris: Welcome to Total Drama Adventure

= theme song =

(Team Zoey)
Mike: hola Z-
Gwen: STOP.
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*Chris walks into the kitchen*
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Private: CAN I PLLEEAASSE registrarse THE OTHHA TEAM????!!!!!
Chris: Well sure but you'd have to be replaced.
With Rico.
Private: Oh sure!!!

(Team Triumph)
Private: hola Crystal I'm on your team now!
Crystal: Great.
Heather: *sigh* Another stupid bird on my team...
Skipper: HEY!!!!
Crystal: hola don't talk bad about me and the cute one....I mean.....................
Lindsay:...
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posted by Problematic129
Part 4!!!!!!!! Thanks to tu guys, I made another one! Again with lovely inspiring freedom pictures, and it has to do with the title, i hope tu enjoyed it. I found some of these pictures on tumblr and we corazón it, both great websites and really inspiring. I don't own any of these, but I hope tu enjoy this and it inspires you, it sure inspired me.
I'm going to make another Inspired soon, so look out. Hope I'm inspiring tu my lovely readers and writer's. Write on and live on!
I don't anything (especially the pictures). Enjoy!
 Katniss and Peeta
Katniss and Peeta
We share it everyday,
Oh yes we do.
They are the treasures of the world
That we use.

It's not gold,
Zinc, copper, o silver.
Oil, not even close.

They are
Courage, determination
How women could have their rights
Today

The treasures of the world
The one and only place
Where tu can find people
Of different color and sex

Where tu can find blacks,
Asian, Syrian, and Australian
Oh the people of the world
The treasures of the world

The treasures of the world
Use them wisely
Do not leave them in chains
For the people tu break
They will break tu back.

Oh the treasures of the world
(All the colors, all the people)
The treasures of the world
(All the colors, all the people)
The treasures of the world
 Different sexes and colores come together to walk the Relay
Different sexes and colors come together to walk the Relay
added by h3rmioneg
added by hgfan5602
Chapter 14: Convicts See All and Hear All

It was around the afternoon. We were simply driving around town trying desperately to come up with a plan. Our anterior ideas weren't all that good. Many of the ideas included us going to look for Dr. Hyde since he was our main suspect. Raven and I shot down that idea. If we did go and find Dr. Hyde, what would that accomplish? Dr. Hyde is a villainous man. I am sure he wouldn't be able to be fooled por spies in training. We would end up getting zero amount of information from him. He knows me and Raven. He knows what side we have chosen. Darrell was...
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This is my first attempt at a romance so here it goes

Craig Smith sat in his moms car waiting for her to stop rambling on about if he has everything ready for his last año in Ruckletin high and how he should act," and tu need to act responsible for the kids coming up into the school and don't get in trouble as much as last year, and- and I'll miss tu web I mover today so give me a big hug before tu go, okay," tears already welling up in her eyes as the car came to a stop outside the school gates. Craig looked up at his teary mom and hugged her before sayiń," I'll miss tu to mom and I'll...
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Remembering the Past, Hope for the Future
by hgfan5602

I sat there, at my desk, siguiente to my bedroom window, thinking about the past events in 2012...and remembered the time...when I was at Relay for Life. It would not be soon before I, myself, passed from cancer also. My doctor dicho that I would only have a few months left, so I decided to make the most of it.
Our team had raised $6864.88 for cancer patients across the globe. We had all been preparing for this one special time. I was walking the Survivor's Lap, and watched as all the survivors of cancer walked a lap together. It was so cheerful!!!...
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Chapter 12
        The lovely fun of kickball
    “School, school, school,” I shake my head. “I blame the smart people.”
    Beth looks at me. “Pammy, were in gym, technically not school.”
    “But still in it,” I say.
    Beth rolls her eyes as our gym coach leads us outside, to the very hot air, oh my goodness someone call the rain! I then feel my spirits lift up when I learn were playing kickball! Yay! I usually hit someone in the face with my powerful temper...
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posted by CapShunsuifan13
Just a sample of a fanfic ive considered writing. Tell me what tu think.
All SOA characters belong to Kurt Sutter aside from my OC

He was back in his own country, it had been so long but he was finally back.
No that wasn't right, he wasn't in his own country, he hadn't been there in 18 years. No he wasn't there, but he was home, it had been ten years since he was last here. Ten years.....
He stepped out of the SUV, the cold air hitting him in the face like a ton of bricks. This was California it shouldn't be this cold. He nodded to the driver, letting him known it was okay to leave. But the black...
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added by hgfan5602
posted by Max277
Chapter 7

Okay right now, my brain was on over load. Nick was dieing, Luke was mad at me, the gang was a bit hurt. Best of all. We were trying to stay alive. That plan wasn't working so well. I glanced over at Nick. He began to close his eyes. No. I slapped him on the cheek. His eyes flew open." Don't close your eyes" I hiss at him." Slapping me is working so well for tu isn't it?" He snapped at me. Then there was a loud painful sound. Right now, Nick, Me, Luke, the gang. We were all hidding in a very big cave. Not the best place to be, It was better than nothing though...
Few hours later......
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posted by 1999jacko
Rick lay still on the calle almost lifeless as the ambulancia came round the corner and the men jumped out of the back door and hefted him up onto a cama sort of thing, covered his face with an oxygen tank and then wheeled him up into the ambulance, as soon as they were all in the ambulancia the man started to drive off quickly towards the hospital just as Rick started to see dots in the air and slowly faint.

Alli sat at her cena mesa, tabla talking rapidly with her rich parents about how school had gone and if there had been any más of the usual violence that had been happening in the school lately...
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In the morning James returned. The others were already there. Kyle laid in his bed, asleep. They left James a spot siguiente to Kyle, where James had sat last night. The white fondo de pantalla was slightly ripped. James sat in his seat. "Did anything happen last night?" asked Katie desperatly. James shrugged. They could tell something had the others looked at Katie all wondering the same question. She pointed at the security camera that nobody had noticed. James sat on his asiento with his knees under his chin and his hands clasped around his legs and head facing down. Memories of last night were nagging...
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posted by vampirefreak_26
I jogged my way to home, trying to get my thoughts straight. As I entered the house I smelled the warm velvety smell I knew all too well and hated. It reminded me every time of what I was and what it meant to me. As I followed the smell I found an open bottle of blood on the dining mesa, tabla with a note lying beside it. Drink o I’ll come and make you! “Curse tu Dimitri!” I could feel how my body reacted to the smell; my fangs began to lengthen my body tensed as it knew what the bottle held. Strength! I tried to survive as long as I could without the blood, but over time my body weakened...
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