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posted by Problematic129
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Chapter 12
    A guilty red head’s confession
    “Look, I just wanted to thank you, for everything.” Cali said, not looking me in the eye. “I just… lost control, I guess.”
    I nodded, hugging her. “It’ll be okay.”
    She nodded and then headed off to the buses, I was about to follow until I heard a voice calling my name. I turned around, thinking it was Azerien but surprised to see America running towards me.
    “Summer! There tu are, I’ve been looking everywhere for you! Where were you? tu weren’t at class.”
    “I was just went to help Cali, who was on the biblioteca floor bawling her eyes out.” I gave her a pointed look.
    America winced. “I didn’t mean to make her cry, I was just angry with the whole picture thing.”
    “But didn’t she do the right thing? Wasn’t he the man who ran from that shed? Wasn’t that the noble thing to do?”
    America groaned. “I just…okay, fine. That probably was the right thing to do. But, I just… kind of wanted to find the killer ourselves. The police absolutely suck at doing their work in this town. When we first saw him, I went back.”
    “Did tu find anything?” I asked, making sure my eyes were wide and innocent.
    “I found some shoes, a machete, and also this map, it’s at inicial though. I was thinking of deciphering it and catching him. But that’s not important, I just wanted to tell tu that I’m sorry, and can tu tell Cali I’m sorry too?”
    “Why can’t tu tell her yourself?”
    “Isn’t she angry at me for being such a vitch?”
    I laughed at her substitute, “no, she’s just hurt. If tu tell her yourself she’ll be happy.”
    “It’s just that, when Cali moved here, she was just so oblivious to how bad this town is. Things like this always happen, and when tu get proof of the legendary killer, well yeah, it’s important.”
    “That important to treat her like that?” I ask giving her a skeptical look.
    “No, not at all,” America shook her head miserably. “I just wanted to be the hero to catch him, and I overreact over everything! I really hate myself now.”
    “You and Cali were always this close?”
    “Were both names of places, yeah. Cali’s my besty, we clicked when we first met, I wouldn’t trade her for anything.”
    “Then why don’t tu tell her that?”
    “You know what?” America declared with a determined look in her eye. “I will.”
    “So everything’s okay?”
    “As long as tu two accept my apology, yeah!” America smiled brightly.
    “I’m sure Cali would accept, and I forgive you.” I smiled back at her.
    We stood like that for a few segundos before we división, split up going to our different buses. I saw America bound off to the bus where Cali went. I could just make out in the window of America grabbing the collar of some poor freshman, yanking them off the asiento and taking her rightful place siguiente to a stunned Cali, who America pulled into a warm hug.
    Smiling, I finally got on my bus, where the bus driver was giving me a dirty look. Feeling dangerous, I gave him my infamous killer glare, and was pleased to see the driver shake as I took my seat. Azerien was nowhere to be found, so I didn’t have to endure an another awkward drive inicial with him.
    It felt like forever when the bus reached home, it still felt so weird to call it that though, there’s just something so foreign about it.
    Like it’ll never be home, just a place that I’m staying at, before tragedy strikes.
posted by alicia386
Last weekend, Ciara, Zaria, and I, Teresa, traveled from Hollywood, California to Paris, France. We planned on living there for a año and see how it goes. Zaria wanted to study fashion, ciara wanted to study art, and I wanted to study the french boys there.

We bought an apartment about a mes before we started packing. ciara is the organized one so of course we had our plane tickets, some snack because airplane comida is cheap and disgusting, and we had our suitcases. Unfortunately, I am the complete opposite of Ciara. I forgot my suticase in my mom's car. Luckily for me, she didn't drive off...
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posted by alicia386
Wednesday

First día of summer and I'm already bored. I'm not bored enough to want to back to school. I'm just lonely bored. L. J called me several times this morning wondering if I was okay and if I wanted to go some place with him. I kindly rejected him. If it wasn't Jennifer o Tammie calling then I don't want to hear. Velvet signed me up book club thing. I do like to read libros and she thought that maybe I could meet some new friends that have something in common with me. I think she is full of baloney. Velvet made me promise to go to the first meeting tomorrow. I don't know. We'll see how my mood is por tomorrow.
After much debate, I have decided to try my hand at escritura a mystery novel. I've always loved mysteries, especially the original "Sherlock Holmes" stories, and shows like "Monk" and "Twin Peaks". The summary for the story I'm escritura is in the in the section below. If tu like the idea, let me know, because I'm really excited for the story!
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Summary:School's out and fifteen año old Harold McCormick is headed for his annual summer getaway at Science Camp, but when an accident occurs, Harold is detirmened to prove it is murder, despite the doubt of the police and everyone around him believing otherwise, and in order to save the camp, Harold must find someone who believes him, crack the case, and bring the culprit to justice before he strikes again.
I got dressed and slipped my chaqueta with badge on and went down the hall. And then someone bumped into me. hola watch where you’re going! “Sorry tu Agent Montezz?” Yes who are you?

“Doesn’t matter Kyle dicho for tu to meet him in the shooting arena.” Where is that? “Take this hall straight down then make a right tu will see a stair well go all the way down then make a left first door on your right.” Thank you.

He walked away then leaving me alone in an empty hallway. I followed the guy directions and stepped into a combat arena compete with targets bows, arrows, guns, and many...
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Chapter Twelve: Small Rooms Makes for No Escapes

      Their headquarters was nothing más then a room with monitors everywhere. They had enough in the budget to get a bigger el espacio and tons más gadgets, they just chose not to. Some of the monitors showed different vistas of the outside building. One monitor was mostrando a desert somewhere in Africa. It is odd how they got one out there and why they have he out there. I didn't ask questions. I wanted to appear as if I knew everything about everything in the room. Marlo wasn't going to get the best of me. 
      Darrell stayed por my side...
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posted by IlovePatch97
Sorry it took so long, school is crazy. i hope this makes up for it.
don't forget to comentario :D


Chapter 6




“Wait! Wait!” I said, needing a moment of processing. “This is real? I’m not dreaming, I’m not hallucinating and this isn’t an extremely well executed prank?”
“No Alana I’m sorry to say but this is real, unbelievable, but real” Chris replied. I turned to look at Patricia, her face unchanged like stone.
“So then what are we going to do? Are tu bringing me to this Zerokenum guy so he can cut out my heart!?” I exclaimed in sudden alarm. I didn’t think Chris o Patricia...
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posted by Problematic129
~Genre: Fiction, fantasy~
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    Iris
    It felt like being hit in the gut, I just couldn’t believe it. Not saying I’m bossy o anything, but I didn’t want to walk alone in a deserted park, but I did anyway.
    What I was not ready for, however, was the real pain in my stomach when I was pushed to the ground, hitting my fragile head in the process. Ready to let people hear my screams all the way from China, I turned around, and was startled to see a black thing passing us, flying on the wind.
    I knew going...
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Orion woke up with a dark black aura slowly disappearing from his body. Libra hobbled into the room and saw Orion quickly waking up," Orion your up I have been waiting for hours, now quickly outside," he dicho hurriedly as he hobbled out through the other door that lead outside into a small arena. Orion stood up feeling fresh and powerful and ran through the door into the arena. Libra stood looking younger than he actually was at the other side, wand writhing about in his hand ready for a fight," come on Orion dont be afraid," Libra shouted out. So Orion stepped into his circulo, círculo and drew his...
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posted by Dhampires
The most beautiful creature is the most deciving creature. Foul, cruelness, and haterid are the only things that makes it's corazón whole. The rest is pit of darkness not one hearty emotion lurks in it's body, it feeds off fear- the fear of it's prey.
It was only a few nights eariler that she wore an white silk ballgown to the Ball-wearing matching gloves that came just above the wrist and glass heels. She'd had that beautiful blond hair flowing behind her back, her crystal blue eyes showed off her hair very well and her rosey lips placed together her face perfectly-not to mention her slim...
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posted by alicia386
Chapter Three: New School, New Worries

      "You're lying," I dicho but then again, who would lie about something like this. "My father would have told me if he was in danger. We have a strong relationship."
      "That maybe, but would he really want tu to worry when your spy exams are coming up? Would he want to add más to your plate of stress?" Darrell raised one eyebrow for my response but he didn't need one. He already knew what I was going to say.
      "You have a point but," I said. "What is the school going to do about it? Surely, they wouldn't let one of the most parte superior, arriba notch...
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posted by 1999jacko
Ron was waiting outside the school building for the MI6 agent that was being sent for him. A small, black car turned round the corner, it slowed to a stop in front of him, the door slowly opened an instead of the small agent the commenter had told him would come 3 men in odd black suits, white ties and black sunglasses stepped out and shoved a almohada case over his head, blocking his line of vision so he couldn't see what happened after that but he felt the smash of a cricket bat against his head while being roughly pushed into the back asiento of a car. Slowly his head started to hurt a lot and...
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just a warning every other chapter will be dark with a murder happening in almost all of them so if tu don't like dark stuff don't read this one

Jameson was rushing around the room his eyes blood shot with tiredness, he had received the results of the prints hours hace and had been working on it for the whole night. And when he had discovered who the killer and his little gang were he had instantly knew he was screwed, but tried to type it up so hopefully chief detective James would discover it and start arresting the people as soon as he was killed. When he finished his little message to James...
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posted by Problematic129
~Genre: Fiction, fantasy
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Alex
    “Are tu okay?!” I asked as I rushed to Zaria and Iris.
    “Somewhat,” Iris dicho giving me a shaky smile, while Zaria replied. “Define okay.”
    I helped them out of the water, they were soaked, and kept on slipping. Which led me to fall into the water.
    “Sorry,” Iris said, looking at my now wet clothes sorrowfully.
    “It’s okay let’s just get out of here.” I said, pulling them toward the ground.
    “Wait!”...
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posted by 1999jacko
Dark Fantasy(I think)

Drake and Sam stood at the edge of the road waiting for the cars to stop zooming past. pato, drake was starting to get really impatient so she started to shout," oh come on! how long does it take for us to be able to cruzar, cruz the road," his face going red and all the while Sam was laughing his head of at the rants that pato, drake was going on about until finally he said," come on man lets just go under the bridge it may be the long way but its easily quicker than this, so come on." Sam had already started jogging towards the entrance to the little path that lead under the bridge por the...
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Through Her Eyes... Chapter One- Life No More?





Alice could still fell the warm breeze glide across her skin and through her blonde streaked fresa red hair, making it fly every which way. She remembered looking over at he father with his warm brown eyes and brown hair a shade litter then his eyes. His nose big as every. She would always make fun of him for that nose. She remembered leaning in to give him a warm kiss on the check and saying, “I amor tu dad.” He looked down at her and said,”I amor tu two.” As he turned into the siguiente road, She gasp. He slams on the breaks but it’s...
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Chapter (13):
"So, are we gonna walk inicial o is Noah gonna pick us up?" asked Leo, as they descended the school steps, "I'm calling Noah" replied Abbie, "Okay then" dicho Leo, he shoved his hands in his pockets and started rocking back and forth on his heals, Abbie fumbled her messenger bag for her phone,and found it just before she could dial Noah's number, it vibrated lightly signaling that she had a text, "I got a text" dicho Abbie, "Who's it from?" asked Leo, "Noah" replied Abbie after she'd checked the name, she read the text, 'Stay where tu are I'm picking tu and Leo up, From ur 'Also...
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posted by hgfan5602
Run now. Run fast. We all have a place that we desire to be, and that place is not inicial for me, unlike most people. My parents have started to torture me since last December, and I have had enough of it. My corazón is racing, and I know I have to get away now. I can't take any más of this. My parents have been holding me in my room, locking me under chain and key, beating my head against the wall. Not your normal kid, the kid who thinks doing homework is torture. This is what I call real torture. Yesterday past midnight, I was thinking, "Why do my parents do this to me? Why? Why? I'm definitely...
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posted by Problematic129
*Thanks for all the review!!! :) Please don't copy and please read and review*
Chapter 9
    The Seven Deadly Sins
    Greed, gluttony, envy, lust, sloth, pride, and wrath. The seven deadly sins, we all know what they are. Commit one and tu are sinner, commit all, tu are very bad sinner.
    If I have ever believed I committed one it would be wrath, I have a good temper, believe me, but when it is broken. When I’ve met my breaking point, that is when I am at my most unpleasant.
    In the bible, it tells us about...
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posted by SweetHoneyBunny
I dropped the bat and ran the two steps to his side. “Brett, what happened?! Who did this to you?!” His leg looked like it was torn apart. The skin was hanging in shreds, there was blood everywhere and I could see the bone. His arm was hanging at an odd angle and his face was covered with claw marks and a deep gash could be seen above his right eye. I grabbed some cloths from beside me and turned on the sink. Wetting one of the cloths, I began to clear some of the blood away. Brett gasped in pain. “I'm sorry. I should take tu to the hospital.” I was getting up to leave the room to...
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posted by kitty190123
One day, a girl was walking through a forest. Her name was Rachel, and she was looking for a friend. Her and her friend, Misty, were camping, but then Misty disappeared. She then saw a dim white light. She walked towards it and saw a face, a body, arms, and legs. It was wearing a white dress. tu know, when she thought about it, it looked a bit like... "AAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHH!"

That's all for chapter 1! Please tell me if it needs to be a little longer and feel free to post your preguntas and comments!