AN: From Creepy to Lady. This is the first chapter. I didn’t want to post this yet, I wanted to wait, but I thought “Ok I’ll post this and see how it goes” if this goes well, I’ll keep going. If not I’ll wait and post the rest latter. So yeah. Oh BTW I got this idea from an anime/manga called “Wall Flower” so if you’ve seen/read it you’ll see some similarities. But it isn’t copy right since I changed it a lot and made it my own. Hope tu like.
Trent’s POV
It was a dream come true. Me and all my friends going to the same school. Only problem, we had no place to live. So we went house hunting. We wanted something beautiful and luxurious at a reasonable price. We finally found a place and are on our way to have an interview with the owner now.
The house is beautiful, large, and perfect. It’s like a mini mansion, everything we are looking for. We all walked in very excited and confident to meet the owner. Cody was the first to enter the large French doors. He’s the smallest of us, but he is just as popular with the ladies. We all are. Geoff is a party kind of guy. He’s an ok guy. Then tu have Duncan the bad guy. He’s been in trouble a couple of time. Sometimes with the law, sometimes with the girls. Me? I don’t really go down that road. Sure I flirt, and dated. But not as much as these guys.
The house is bigger on the inside than the outside. Marble everywhere and Persian rugs, fine china and paintings everywhere. “Right this way.” A butler dicho leading us to a room in the far right. Inside were 2 velvet couches and a coffee mesa, tabla and fine china and té set for us.
“Sit boys” the owner said. She had puffy curly hair, a rosado, rosa dress and beautiful jewelry. “So you’re interested in my home?” she asked sipping her tea.
“Yes miss.” I dicho smiling at her.
“Ok. It’s all yours.” she dicho putting her té down.
“Seriously???” we all asked jumping out of the couch.
“And rent free.” She dicho with a smile. We all jumped up and started a victory dance. “BUT…” she said. We all sat down and let her finish. “My daughter will be staying with tu and……” she dicho but was cut off por Duncan.
“We understand miss. Your daughter is seguro with us. Nothing will happen to her.” he reassured.
“Thank tu but let me finish.” She dicho with a stern face. Duncan sunk into the chair. “I want tu to turn her into a proper lady. She has been threw some trauma and keeps to herself. But with our social stature I cant have her like that. So I need tu four to make her into a lady. If tu do the rent is free.” We all smile and agree and she looked annoyed. “Stop interrupting me. If tu fail, your rent shall be tripled.” She said.
“TRIPPELED???” we all screamed in unison.
“Tippled. But it can’t be that hard. 4 beautiful guys can make her lady like. She’ll see your faces and change. I can feel it.” Then we turned to each other.
“Should we do it?” I asked.
“Hell yeah. Make a girl girly? With our looks? Consider it done.” Duncan said.
“A girl in the house sounds like a fun time.” Cody said.
“We can do this.” Geoff said. Then we turned back and accepter her offer.
“Lovely. My daughter will arrive tomorrow. I’ll check in on tu all once in a while. To make sure she is turning into a lady.” she dicho before exiting the room and house.
We all cheered and settled in leaving her room untouched. It was across the hall from mine and siguiente to Duncan and Cody’s. I can’t wait to meet her and see what we are up against.
O0o0o0o0o0o
We woke up early and got the house ready. We picked rosas for her and ordered comida of all kinds. “Get washed up guys. Our project will be arriving soon.” I called stepping out of the shower.
“We would if tu didn’t take so long to shower.” Duncan dicho pushing me out of the way and walking into the bathroom we all must share.
“A huge house and only 2 bathrooms?” I mumbled getting dressed in a normal outfit. As soon as I was dressed we heard the doorbell. “SHE’S HERE!!!” I yelled running to the front door to greet her.
Everyone had a big smile and waiting for her. The door slowly creaked open and we were all taken back.
She was as pale as a ghost, her eyes covered por her short black and blue hair, baggy, raggedy clothes and a creepy doll in her hands. Is this what we must make into a lady?
“Are tu the daughter?” Geoff asked. She lifted her head but not to far. Then she looked back at her feet and walked in ignoring us.
“Hi I’m Cody. I am very excited to meet you.” He dicho offering her his hand. She looked at it as if she didn’t know what to do and walked adelante, hacia adelante and past the small boy.
“Hey girl. I’m Geoff, and I am very please to have tu here.” he asked handing her a rose. She looked at him and I guess he saw her face. He froze and withered away like a ghost.
“I’m Duncan. I’m here to mostrar tu a good time.” He dicho blocking her way. I can see a slight blush growing on her cheeks giving her slight color. Then she ducked under his arm and walked faster to her room.
“Hello pretty. I’m….” I dicho introducing myself but was cut short.
“I understand I must live with tu four and I’ll make myself clear. Don bother me, don’t talk to me, and what ever tu do don’t lie to me.” She dicho before opening her door.
“I never lie.” I dicho grabbing her hand. I slowly brought it to my lips. But she screamed and slapped me.
“DON’T TOUCH ME! STAY AWAY FROM ME. LEAVE ME ALONE!” she yelled before she slammed her door close and putting a sign up that read ‘Gwen’s room. KEEP OUT…Or else.”
“At least we know her name.” Geoff dicho lectura the sign.
“I got this.” Duncan dicho opening the door and entering. We all pressed our ears to the muro to listen. We didn’t hear anything until……
“STAY AWAY FROM ME. DEMON. DEMON DEMON…..” Then Duncan came out with cuts on his arms and slap marks on his face.
“How’d it go?” Cody laughed.
“Something is wrong with her. every time I talk to a girl like that they melt. She freaked out and hit me.” He dicho with a scold. “She’ll be harder than we thought.” He dicho before leaving.
I waited outside her door for a little then I opened it and looked inside. She was sitting on her cama talking to her doll.
“Why has she done this to me?” she cried. “Why?” she dicho before she broke down crying. I opened the light and she screamed and hid under her bed.
“Dinner is ready. Would tu like to registrarse us? We are not that bad.” I dicho with my trade mark smile. She peeked her eyes out from under the cama and looked at me. I think….I cant tell, her hair is too long.
“No. Let me be. Please.” She dicho hiding completely.
“Ok.” I dicho leaving. I entered the dinning room and everyone was looking for her. “Let her breath, give her time to warm up to us.” I dicho setting a tray for her. I set it outside her door and knocked on her door. “Diners outside por your door. But we’d amor for tu to registrarse us siguiente time.” I dicho before retiring to my room. We’ll work on lady liking her tomorrow weather she wants to o not. What is her problem anyway?
Trent’s POV
It was a dream come true. Me and all my friends going to the same school. Only problem, we had no place to live. So we went house hunting. We wanted something beautiful and luxurious at a reasonable price. We finally found a place and are on our way to have an interview with the owner now.
The house is beautiful, large, and perfect. It’s like a mini mansion, everything we are looking for. We all walked in very excited and confident to meet the owner. Cody was the first to enter the large French doors. He’s the smallest of us, but he is just as popular with the ladies. We all are. Geoff is a party kind of guy. He’s an ok guy. Then tu have Duncan the bad guy. He’s been in trouble a couple of time. Sometimes with the law, sometimes with the girls. Me? I don’t really go down that road. Sure I flirt, and dated. But not as much as these guys.
The house is bigger on the inside than the outside. Marble everywhere and Persian rugs, fine china and paintings everywhere. “Right this way.” A butler dicho leading us to a room in the far right. Inside were 2 velvet couches and a coffee mesa, tabla and fine china and té set for us.
“Sit boys” the owner said. She had puffy curly hair, a rosado, rosa dress and beautiful jewelry. “So you’re interested in my home?” she asked sipping her tea.
“Yes miss.” I dicho smiling at her.
“Ok. It’s all yours.” she dicho putting her té down.
“Seriously???” we all asked jumping out of the couch.
“And rent free.” She dicho with a smile. We all jumped up and started a victory dance. “BUT…” she said. We all sat down and let her finish. “My daughter will be staying with tu and……” she dicho but was cut off por Duncan.
“We understand miss. Your daughter is seguro with us. Nothing will happen to her.” he reassured.
“Thank tu but let me finish.” She dicho with a stern face. Duncan sunk into the chair. “I want tu to turn her into a proper lady. She has been threw some trauma and keeps to herself. But with our social stature I cant have her like that. So I need tu four to make her into a lady. If tu do the rent is free.” We all smile and agree and she looked annoyed. “Stop interrupting me. If tu fail, your rent shall be tripled.” She said.
“TRIPPELED???” we all screamed in unison.
“Tippled. But it can’t be that hard. 4 beautiful guys can make her lady like. She’ll see your faces and change. I can feel it.” Then we turned to each other.
“Should we do it?” I asked.
“Hell yeah. Make a girl girly? With our looks? Consider it done.” Duncan said.
“A girl in the house sounds like a fun time.” Cody said.
“We can do this.” Geoff said. Then we turned back and accepter her offer.
“Lovely. My daughter will arrive tomorrow. I’ll check in on tu all once in a while. To make sure she is turning into a lady.” she dicho before exiting the room and house.
We all cheered and settled in leaving her room untouched. It was across the hall from mine and siguiente to Duncan and Cody’s. I can’t wait to meet her and see what we are up against.
O0o0o0o0o0o
We woke up early and got the house ready. We picked rosas for her and ordered comida of all kinds. “Get washed up guys. Our project will be arriving soon.” I called stepping out of the shower.
“We would if tu didn’t take so long to shower.” Duncan dicho pushing me out of the way and walking into the bathroom we all must share.
“A huge house and only 2 bathrooms?” I mumbled getting dressed in a normal outfit. As soon as I was dressed we heard the doorbell. “SHE’S HERE!!!” I yelled running to the front door to greet her.
Everyone had a big smile and waiting for her. The door slowly creaked open and we were all taken back.
She was as pale as a ghost, her eyes covered por her short black and blue hair, baggy, raggedy clothes and a creepy doll in her hands. Is this what we must make into a lady?
“Are tu the daughter?” Geoff asked. She lifted her head but not to far. Then she looked back at her feet and walked in ignoring us.
“Hi I’m Cody. I am very excited to meet you.” He dicho offering her his hand. She looked at it as if she didn’t know what to do and walked adelante, hacia adelante and past the small boy.
“Hey girl. I’m Geoff, and I am very please to have tu here.” he asked handing her a rose. She looked at him and I guess he saw her face. He froze and withered away like a ghost.
“I’m Duncan. I’m here to mostrar tu a good time.” He dicho blocking her way. I can see a slight blush growing on her cheeks giving her slight color. Then she ducked under his arm and walked faster to her room.
“Hello pretty. I’m….” I dicho introducing myself but was cut short.
“I understand I must live with tu four and I’ll make myself clear. Don bother me, don’t talk to me, and what ever tu do don’t lie to me.” She dicho before opening her door.
“I never lie.” I dicho grabbing her hand. I slowly brought it to my lips. But she screamed and slapped me.
“DON’T TOUCH ME! STAY AWAY FROM ME. LEAVE ME ALONE!” she yelled before she slammed her door close and putting a sign up that read ‘Gwen’s room. KEEP OUT…Or else.”
“At least we know her name.” Geoff dicho lectura the sign.
“I got this.” Duncan dicho opening the door and entering. We all pressed our ears to the muro to listen. We didn’t hear anything until……
“STAY AWAY FROM ME. DEMON. DEMON DEMON…..” Then Duncan came out with cuts on his arms and slap marks on his face.
“How’d it go?” Cody laughed.
“Something is wrong with her. every time I talk to a girl like that they melt. She freaked out and hit me.” He dicho with a scold. “She’ll be harder than we thought.” He dicho before leaving.
I waited outside her door for a little then I opened it and looked inside. She was sitting on her cama talking to her doll.
“Why has she done this to me?” she cried. “Why?” she dicho before she broke down crying. I opened the light and she screamed and hid under her bed.
“Dinner is ready. Would tu like to registrarse us? We are not that bad.” I dicho with my trade mark smile. She peeked her eyes out from under the cama and looked at me. I think….I cant tell, her hair is too long.
“No. Let me be. Please.” She dicho hiding completely.
“Ok.” I dicho leaving. I entered the dinning room and everyone was looking for her. “Let her breath, give her time to warm up to us.” I dicho setting a tray for her. I set it outside her door and knocked on her door. “Diners outside por your door. But we’d amor for tu to registrarse us siguiente time.” I dicho before retiring to my room. We’ll work on lady liking her tomorrow weather she wants to o not. What is her problem anyway?
Duncan sat there, absorved in the movie.
There was only 7 teens in the movie theater.
It was basicly Just all of my friends there.Crystaale was first,
then Ryan then me, (Vannessa),
then Duncan. And in the segundo
row was Sasuke, Diamond, and Jason. We were watching " friday the thriteenth"
in 3D.Diamond went to the bathroom, Crystaale went to get palomitas de maiz, palomitas de maíz and sasuke went with her. Ryan had a "Tuxedo malfunction" and went inicial with Jason to change. It was just Duncan and me. "Soooo...." Duncan stammered, trying to make dumb conversation. "Shut up!" I yelled, and put my finger over his lips. His happy expression went from happy to shocked. But when i leaned in, his expression turned lusty....
There was only 7 teens in the movie theater.
It was basicly Just all of my friends there.Crystaale was first,
then Ryan then me, (Vannessa),
then Duncan. And in the segundo
row was Sasuke, Diamond, and Jason. We were watching " friday the thriteenth"
in 3D.Diamond went to the bathroom, Crystaale went to get palomitas de maiz, palomitas de maíz and sasuke went with her. Ryan had a "Tuxedo malfunction" and went inicial with Jason to change. It was just Duncan and me. "Soooo...." Duncan stammered, trying to make dumb conversation. "Shut up!" I yelled, and put my finger over his lips. His happy expression went from happy to shocked. But when i leaned in, his expression turned lusty....
Tori
Hayley
Anastasia
Alex
Danny
Sofie
Raynie
Mack
Chelsea
Summer
Dawn
Alexa
Andrea
Lisa
and Maggie!
Also joining us are:
Geoff
Bridgette
Izzy
Trent
Gwen
DJ
Owen
Heather
Beth
Courtney
Duncan
Cody
Lindsay
Leshawna
and Harold!
In today's episode, who will go inicial and who will survive our brutal challenges? Find out on Total Drama EXTREME!
Trent and Beth= Brent
LeShawna and Ezekiel= LeKiel
Duncan and Sadie= Sadeuncan
Tyler and Izzy= Tizzy
Heather and Cody= Cheather
Courtney and Harold= Courald
DJ and Bridgette= D-Bridge
Eva and Geoff= Geva
Noah and Lindsay= Linoah
Katie and Owen= Kowen
Justin and Gwen= Gwustin
Chris and Chef= Chref
Malitav the oso, oso de and Mr.Coconut= Mr. Malitav
Sasquatchanaqa and Interns= Sasquaterns
All of these are odd couples. Do tu agree o disagree if tu like it 5 stars!!!
Give me your suggstions
LeShawna and Ezekiel= LeKiel
Duncan and Sadie= Sadeuncan
Tyler and Izzy= Tizzy
Heather and Cody= Cheather
Courtney and Harold= Courald
DJ and Bridgette= D-Bridge
Eva and Geoff= Geva
Noah and Lindsay= Linoah
Katie and Owen= Kowen
Justin and Gwen= Gwustin
Chris and Chef= Chref
Malitav the oso, oso de and Mr.Coconut= Mr. Malitav
Sasquatchanaqa and Interns= Sasquaterns
All of these are odd couples. Do tu agree o disagree if tu like it 5 stars!!!
Give me your suggstions
Parents:the wonderful Gwcan
hobbies:like 2 get in troble,like to have party just like his dad,swimming,loves to shave there pets
Food:seafood
Lives:Hollywood,California
Birthday:April,11,2009
Sports:swimming,soccer,football
Duncan Jr was boin on April 11,2009.His parents are the wonderful Gwcan and his hobbies are to get in troble,likes to have partys,swimming,and amor to shave the pets.His favorito! comida is seafood and lives in Hollywood,California.bbbbbbbbbbbbbyyyyyyyyyyeeeeeeeeeeeeee
I think the couples should hav been different. Here's my lista of the couples i would pair up:
1. owen and Sadie
2. Duncan and Gwen
3. Izzy and Cody
4. Geoff and Leshawna
5. Bridgette and Tyler
6. Heather and Noah
7. Katie and Justin
8. Harold and Eva
And here's the reasons why:
1. they r both fat
2. they both were black and like bloody movies
3. they r both crazy
4. they r both happy
5. they r both sporty
6. i think they make a cute couple
7. they are both cute
8. they r both rejected
1. owen and Sadie
2. Duncan and Gwen
3. Izzy and Cody
4. Geoff and Leshawna
5. Bridgette and Tyler
6. Heather and Noah
7. Katie and Justin
8. Harold and Eva
And here's the reasons why:
1. they r both fat
2. they both were black and like bloody movies
3. they r both crazy
4. they r both happy
5. they r both sporty
6. i think they make a cute couple
7. they are both cute
8. they r both rejected