Here's the follow up.
DISCLAIMER-As many of tu already know,my name is not Don Belisario. Therefore,I do not have any control over NCIS. I do not own the characters. I don't own Paranormal Activity either.
Ziva's POV...
I skimmed through the journal. He had quite the vocabulary.
JOURNAL
I can't help but amor her. I can't do a lot of things. Like sweep her off her feet. I'm such an idiot! Michael made her happy. I should've just let him kill me. Maybe she'd be happy.
Narrator's POV...
Ziva heard the bathroom door open. Using her ninja skills,she spread herself out on the bed.
"Hi,Tony." she dicho in a seductive voice.
"Okay,what did tu do?" he questioned.
"Nothing..."
"Seriousley,Ziva."
"Fine,since tu went through my desk..."
"You went through my room!"
Ziva's POV...
"Well,you could have just said,I'm going through your room." Tony dicho to me.
He moved closer,placing his hands on my hips.
"So,...what did tu find,David?"
"Dirty magazines,stuff,and a journal."
"Did tu read it?"
"Yes,and if tu it ever crosses your mind that I would be happier with Michael. Your insane." I smirked.
"Anything else?"
"Nope." I dicho bluntly.
We heard a strong knock on the door. So strong,that Tony took his gun to answer it.
"Hello?" he asked.
"Gibbs." the guest dicho in a familiar voice.
"Boss,you're here." Tony smiled.
Narrator's POV...
Abby,McGee,Ducky,and Palmer arrived at Tony's apartment five minutos later. Tony ordered pizza for the movie. The seating arrangments were diffrent. First to sit down was Gibbs,Ducky,and The Gremlin on the sofá in a row. Then Abs and Probie snuggled on the loveseat. Tony dragged out a futón and a blanket. Ziva was changing when this was happening. She came out in a bra on parte superior, arriba and short shorts on bottom.
"I call Ziva as my snuggle buddy!" Tony emphasized.
Ziva's POV...
I walked over to Tony and ran my hands down his chest.
"Have tu been working out,Tony?" I dicho looking into his sexy green eyes.
"Yeah,I have."
"Can tu stop playing Grabb ass,you two?" Gibbs asked in the most polite way he could.
Tony popped in a scary movie into the DVD player. The beggining commercials passed and soon came on Paranormal Activity. Gibbs was just silent the entire time,he's not scared of anything. My face was burried in Tony's shoulder.
"Scared,my ninja?" he mumbled to me as he ran his hand down my back.Soon the movie was over. Abby,McGeek,Gibbs,Duck,and Palmer all left.
"Ziva,could tu stay the night?" Tony asked me.
"Yes,sexy." I remarked.
"Sexy?" he asked.
DISCLAIMER-As many of tu already know,my name is not Don Belisario. Therefore,I do not have any control over NCIS. I do not own the characters. I don't own Paranormal Activity either.
Ziva's POV...
I skimmed through the journal. He had quite the vocabulary.
JOURNAL
I can't help but amor her. I can't do a lot of things. Like sweep her off her feet. I'm such an idiot! Michael made her happy. I should've just let him kill me. Maybe she'd be happy.
Narrator's POV...
Ziva heard the bathroom door open. Using her ninja skills,she spread herself out on the bed.
"Hi,Tony." she dicho in a seductive voice.
"Okay,what did tu do?" he questioned.
"Nothing..."
"Seriousley,Ziva."
"Fine,since tu went through my desk..."
"You went through my room!"
Ziva's POV...
"Well,you could have just said,I'm going through your room." Tony dicho to me.
He moved closer,placing his hands on my hips.
"So,...what did tu find,David?"
"Dirty magazines,stuff,and a journal."
"Did tu read it?"
"Yes,and if tu it ever crosses your mind that I would be happier with Michael. Your insane." I smirked.
"Anything else?"
"Nope." I dicho bluntly.
We heard a strong knock on the door. So strong,that Tony took his gun to answer it.
"Hello?" he asked.
"Gibbs." the guest dicho in a familiar voice.
"Boss,you're here." Tony smiled.
Narrator's POV...
Abby,McGee,Ducky,and Palmer arrived at Tony's apartment five minutos later. Tony ordered pizza for the movie. The seating arrangments were diffrent. First to sit down was Gibbs,Ducky,and The Gremlin on the sofá in a row. Then Abs and Probie snuggled on the loveseat. Tony dragged out a futón and a blanket. Ziva was changing when this was happening. She came out in a bra on parte superior, arriba and short shorts on bottom.
"I call Ziva as my snuggle buddy!" Tony emphasized.
Ziva's POV...
I walked over to Tony and ran my hands down his chest.
"Have tu been working out,Tony?" I dicho looking into his sexy green eyes.
"Yeah,I have."
"Can tu stop playing Grabb ass,you two?" Gibbs asked in the most polite way he could.
Tony popped in a scary movie into the DVD player. The beggining commercials passed and soon came on Paranormal Activity. Gibbs was just silent the entire time,he's not scared of anything. My face was burried in Tony's shoulder.
"Scared,my ninja?" he mumbled to me as he ran his hand down my back.Soon the movie was over. Abby,McGeek,Gibbs,Duck,and Palmer all left.
"Ziva,could tu stay the night?" Tony asked me.
"Yes,sexy." I remarked.
"Sexy?" he asked.
i need help cus i have writers block and i need help chapter 2 was complet crap so some one give me ideas
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oh and i want a vote do u think i should delet the the intier 2 chapter o try to just write an fix it hope that i can fix it to your liking pleas coment and tell me how to make it beter
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oh and i want a vote do u think i should delet the the intier 2 chapter o try to just write an fix it hope that i can fix it to your liking pleas coment and tell me how to make it beter