hola everyone! I was thinking of starting a story related to winx club, just without the exact characters and lines. Here is an intro. Please tell me what tu think. Do tu want more? Should I continue it? please tell me.
It was a bright and sunny día on Earth and a young fairy named Luna was packing her things in two suitcases. She was leaving to go to Alfea for the first time. A few months ago, Luna's parents told her that she was a fairy and how her mom, Selena, was a fairy too until a powerful witch took all her powers when she was younger. She still had some power left in her but not enough to strike an attack.
As soon as Luna was all packed her Mother,Selena, and her Father, James, went to the backyard so no one can see them and then they tossed a device in mid air. It was a machine that makes portals appear. When the portal appeared, Luna and her parents walked through. When they reached the other side, they stopped at where the barrier would be. They all knew that all non magical creatures can not enter the magic realm. Selena could not enter cause she did not have enough power for the barrier to let her through. Luna dicho good bye to her parents and then she walked through the barrier and turned back waving to her parents and watched as they both went back through the portal to go home. She signed and turned around towards Alfea and started walking in that direction.
“Well, no turning back now.”, dicho Luna as she was walking towards Alfea. She finally reached the Gate and met Grizelda, the teacher of discipline. She knew she had to walk up to her and hand her the papers that allows her to enter. She just stood there, watching as the other hadas handed in their papers. She then finally went towards her.
Well it's now o never, Luna thought to herself as she continued walking towards Grizelda.
“Hello. What's your name?”, asked Grizelda. “And where are your papers?”
“I am Luna. My papers are right here”, dicho Luna as she handed her the papers.
“Okay. tu are alright to go in.”, dicho Grizelda as she approved Luna's form.
“Thank you”, Luna dicho politely as she walked into the Alfea school for fairies. She stood their in the lobby, just looking around and looking at the structure of Alfea. She already felt right at home. The headmistress Faragonda finally came down the hall. She greeted everyone, made her speech and then dismissed everyone to go to their dorms. Luna went up the stairs to find her dorm. When she found it, she opened it and already two girls were standing in the middle of the room. One had Red-ish rosado, rosa hair and the other had some rosado, rosa with some red in it.
“Oh. Hello girls.”, greeted Luna as she started walking forward.
“Hi. I am Rossa, fairy of Flowers”, dicho the red-ish rosado, rosa haired girl. “I am Melanie fairy of Love. What is your name?”, dicho the rosado, rosa and red haired girl. Politely.
“I am Luna fairy of the moon and lightning.”, replied Luna.
“Well it was very nice to meet tu Luna. We are expected to have five girls in this dorm. We are still needing to meet two more. I think I hear them now”, dicho the Melanie as two más girls walked in the room. One had green with a little purple and the other had light blue hair.
“Hello girls. In case tu did not know, I am Nixie fairy of the Ocean”, greeted the light blue haired girl.
“Hi. I am Diana, fairy of wild animals.”, greeted the green and purple haired girl as everyone found their rooms and beds. They all put their belongings down por their area and told each other about their self except for Luna. She knew that there was not much to tell about her except that her mom was a powerless fairy and that her magic came from moon and lightning. She just walked to her cama and sat down.
“Is everything okay Luna?”, ask Melanie.
“Yeah everything is fine. I was just- oh never mind. I a tired and class starts tomorrow. I have to go to sleep. Good night girl.”, dicho Luna as she untucked her blankets and laid down to go to sleep and so did the other girls as well.
The siguiente day, all the girls got up and out of their beds. They all went to get ready for their first día of class. Then they all walked down to the class room for class and introductions. They were all excited cause is the start of a very exciting journey of becoming a real fairy. After class ended, the girls were about to go to their rooms but instead they heard the ground shake and a girl scream. They all rushed outside and found a girl on the ground and two witches in front of her.
“Oh, hello freshmen”, dicho one of the witches.
Luna started walking in front of them, like she had seen them before.
“Who are tu girls?”, Luna asked.
So what should i do? Continue it o not? Please tell me what tu think.
It was a bright and sunny día on Earth and a young fairy named Luna was packing her things in two suitcases. She was leaving to go to Alfea for the first time. A few months ago, Luna's parents told her that she was a fairy and how her mom, Selena, was a fairy too until a powerful witch took all her powers when she was younger. She still had some power left in her but not enough to strike an attack.
As soon as Luna was all packed her Mother,Selena, and her Father, James, went to the backyard so no one can see them and then they tossed a device in mid air. It was a machine that makes portals appear. When the portal appeared, Luna and her parents walked through. When they reached the other side, they stopped at where the barrier would be. They all knew that all non magical creatures can not enter the magic realm. Selena could not enter cause she did not have enough power for the barrier to let her through. Luna dicho good bye to her parents and then she walked through the barrier and turned back waving to her parents and watched as they both went back through the portal to go home. She signed and turned around towards Alfea and started walking in that direction.
“Well, no turning back now.”, dicho Luna as she was walking towards Alfea. She finally reached the Gate and met Grizelda, the teacher of discipline. She knew she had to walk up to her and hand her the papers that allows her to enter. She just stood there, watching as the other hadas handed in their papers. She then finally went towards her.
Well it's now o never, Luna thought to herself as she continued walking towards Grizelda.
“Hello. What's your name?”, asked Grizelda. “And where are your papers?”
“I am Luna. My papers are right here”, dicho Luna as she handed her the papers.
“Okay. tu are alright to go in.”, dicho Grizelda as she approved Luna's form.
“Thank you”, Luna dicho politely as she walked into the Alfea school for fairies. She stood their in the lobby, just looking around and looking at the structure of Alfea. She already felt right at home. The headmistress Faragonda finally came down the hall. She greeted everyone, made her speech and then dismissed everyone to go to their dorms. Luna went up the stairs to find her dorm. When she found it, she opened it and already two girls were standing in the middle of the room. One had Red-ish rosado, rosa hair and the other had some rosado, rosa with some red in it.
“Oh. Hello girls.”, greeted Luna as she started walking forward.
“Hi. I am Rossa, fairy of Flowers”, dicho the red-ish rosado, rosa haired girl. “I am Melanie fairy of Love. What is your name?”, dicho the rosado, rosa and red haired girl. Politely.
“I am Luna fairy of the moon and lightning.”, replied Luna.
“Well it was very nice to meet tu Luna. We are expected to have five girls in this dorm. We are still needing to meet two more. I think I hear them now”, dicho the Melanie as two más girls walked in the room. One had green with a little purple and the other had light blue hair.
“Hello girls. In case tu did not know, I am Nixie fairy of the Ocean”, greeted the light blue haired girl.
“Hi. I am Diana, fairy of wild animals.”, greeted the green and purple haired girl as everyone found their rooms and beds. They all put their belongings down por their area and told each other about their self except for Luna. She knew that there was not much to tell about her except that her mom was a powerless fairy and that her magic came from moon and lightning. She just walked to her cama and sat down.
“Is everything okay Luna?”, ask Melanie.
“Yeah everything is fine. I was just- oh never mind. I a tired and class starts tomorrow. I have to go to sleep. Good night girl.”, dicho Luna as she untucked her blankets and laid down to go to sleep and so did the other girls as well.
The siguiente day, all the girls got up and out of their beds. They all went to get ready for their first día of class. Then they all walked down to the class room for class and introductions. They were all excited cause is the start of a very exciting journey of becoming a real fairy. After class ended, the girls were about to go to their rooms but instead they heard the ground shake and a girl scream. They all rushed outside and found a girl on the ground and two witches in front of her.
“Oh, hello freshmen”, dicho one of the witches.
Luna started walking in front of them, like she had seen them before.
“Who are tu girls?”, Luna asked.
So what should i do? Continue it o not? Please tell me what tu think.
