Hey, fellow pridelander..today i'm posting my first ever articulo after joining fanpop for almost 3 year.
well, to be honest i'm más like a reader than a writer so please don't be rude if there's something wrong o tu don't like...Constructive Criticism appreciate.
THE
Lion kinG
Disclaimer : *proudly* Lion King are mind *disney cleared their throat* ...okay not mind
shall we start ?
Endless Night
"Psst, hola ?, Nala !" 'ugh, what did he want this time ?' thought Nala while opening one of her eyes to look at the golden cub who disturbing her sleep. "come on, get up! I wanna mostrar tu something." dicho Simba, the young prince of the Prideland and also her frie...pardon her BEST friend.
"Simba, last time tu were saying that we ended up chased por those Hyenas" groaned Nala. "you can mostrar me that 'something' in the morning"nshe continued the closing her eyes, ready to sleep again.
" Nala..." moaned Simba, getting impatient. "this cannot be wait until morning" he continued. Didn't want to getting another problem, Nala decided it'll be the best choice to just ignore him and continue her sleep.
" Nala ?.." cricked heard no answer. losing his patience, he shocked her shoulder while yelling "Nala !!" . lot of 'ssshhh' ranged the cave as all the leona also want their peaceful sleep. ears pinned, Simba look at Nala who had both her eyes wide open,
"you going to wake everyone up !" dicho Nala
"I.Don't.Care." answered Simba
'He would just keep trying if I didn't come with him' Nala sighed, then get up. "alright, what is it ?" asked Nala.
"just follow my lead" dicho Simba while smiling. He led her out of the cave onto the edge of Priderock. sitting on his haunch he then lift his face to look at the sky. "look at the stars Nala !".
Sitting siguiente to his spot, Nala follow his example. what she sees make her verde azulado, trullo, teal eyes mesmerize. she never really realize how beautiful the shiny stars is especially if tu combine with prideland's landscape. "Simba...it's beautiful" replied Nala. lost in thougt.
"My father dicho the great king of the past are up there...watching over us" dicho Simba who brought his face back to look at Nala.
Hearing what Simba said, something pop up in her head. she turn her head and meet Simba's gaze who eyed her intently. "Simba...do tu think my father...also up there ?"
This caught Simba off guard. he never really know who her father is . but then he put a smile after remember what her father taught him. "yea, I'm sure he is up there, guiding and watching over you" answered Simba.
She couldn't help but smile after hearing her best friend answer.closing her eyes she slowly leaned to the side of his face and lick him on the cheek. she didn't know what make her do that, but it feel so right. opening her eyes, she could see his reaction which is stiffened.'pinned ya'
The End
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so what do tu think ?
adang
well, to be honest i'm más like a reader than a writer so please don't be rude if there's something wrong o tu don't like...Constructive Criticism appreciate.
THE
Lion kinG
Disclaimer : *proudly* Lion King are mind *disney cleared their throat* ...okay not mind
shall we start ?
Endless Night
"Psst, hola ?, Nala !" 'ugh, what did he want this time ?' thought Nala while opening one of her eyes to look at the golden cub who disturbing her sleep. "come on, get up! I wanna mostrar tu something." dicho Simba, the young prince of the Prideland and also her frie...pardon her BEST friend.
"Simba, last time tu were saying that we ended up chased por those Hyenas" groaned Nala. "you can mostrar me that 'something' in the morning"nshe continued the closing her eyes, ready to sleep again.
" Nala..." moaned Simba, getting impatient. "this cannot be wait until morning" he continued. Didn't want to getting another problem, Nala decided it'll be the best choice to just ignore him and continue her sleep.
" Nala ?.." cricked heard no answer. losing his patience, he shocked her shoulder while yelling "Nala !!" . lot of 'ssshhh' ranged the cave as all the leona also want their peaceful sleep. ears pinned, Simba look at Nala who had both her eyes wide open,
"you going to wake everyone up !" dicho Nala
"I.Don't.Care." answered Simba
'He would just keep trying if I didn't come with him' Nala sighed, then get up. "alright, what is it ?" asked Nala.
"just follow my lead" dicho Simba while smiling. He led her out of the cave onto the edge of Priderock. sitting on his haunch he then lift his face to look at the sky. "look at the stars Nala !".
Sitting siguiente to his spot, Nala follow his example. what she sees make her verde azulado, trullo, teal eyes mesmerize. she never really realize how beautiful the shiny stars is especially if tu combine with prideland's landscape. "Simba...it's beautiful" replied Nala. lost in thougt.
"My father dicho the great king of the past are up there...watching over us" dicho Simba who brought his face back to look at Nala.
Hearing what Simba said, something pop up in her head. she turn her head and meet Simba's gaze who eyed her intently. "Simba...do tu think my father...also up there ?"
This caught Simba off guard. he never really know who her father is . but then he put a smile after remember what her father taught him. "yea, I'm sure he is up there, guiding and watching over you" answered Simba.
She couldn't help but smile after hearing her best friend answer.closing her eyes she slowly leaned to the side of his face and lick him on the cheek. she didn't know what make her do that, but it feel so right. opening her eyes, she could see his reaction which is stiffened.'pinned ya'
The End
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so what do tu think ?
adang