los héroes del olimpo Percy Joins Chaos

Musabbir-Noor posted on May 22, 2012 at 09:16PM
Hey Guy's
This is a fanfiction. It takes place after the giant wars. All the gods start having more kids. One of them is called James. He was Percy's half brother. Everyone started to forget about Percy. Soon even Annabeth forgot him and started going out with James. Percy had enough. /he was running away. Unknown to him Chaos, creator of the universe, was watching him. He was teleported to a distant planet. After liberating them, there was a problem on earth. After 10,000 years he was returning home.

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hace más de un año AaronSmith said…
Hello everybody! I'm actually prounknown, but because I can't get in my account anymore, I have made a new account! And this name is actually Aaron from this story!!! teehee. Thought you should know. And find a co-writer! Please!
hace más de un año AaronSmith said…
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Oh wait! 11th page! Cake for everyone!
hace más de un año son_of_Posiden said…
1. say your name ten times. 2. say your mom's name five times. .........3. say your crushes three times. 4. paste this to four other groups. ...If you do this, your crush will kiss you on the nearest Friday. ......But if you read this and do not paste this, then you will have very bad luck. SEND THIS TO 5 GROUPS IN 143 MINUTES. WHEN YOU'RE DONE PRESS F6 AND YOUR CHRUSH'S NAME WILL APPEAR IN BIG LETTERS ON THE SCREEN. THIS IS SO FREAKY IT BECAUSE IT ACTUALLY WORKS
hace más de un año Jane_Bridges said…
Okay next chapter-
Annabeth's POV-
I literally died after my encounter with Percy, everyone was staring at me and whispering behind my back!
Then Ace had to come in and made the entire affair way worse than it really was. Ugh! I finally just gave up and let Ace have at it.
All of the sudden I see a figure come through the shadows, it's Bianca looking gorgeous as always with her dark hair tied in a high pony tail, no make up, and wearing a simple sleeveless, black tang top and skinny jeans, she runs and pulls Ace off the table he's "preaching" from,
"Oh Ace! What have you done?! You've shamed me and our allies!" Says Bianca glaring hard at Ace,
"It was necessary mother! But I will obey you for your sake." He says sounding righteous and stuck up,
Bianca sighs and begins walking back toward the elevator she came out of. But before the doors close she looks at me,
"Friends?" She mouths,
And how could she? She knows I still have feelings for Percy! I hate Bianca!
I scowl and lift my chin, wink, smile meanly and shake my head,
"NO not ever!" My eyes say darkly.

Hope you guys like it! Please comment!!! Aaron and I love reading them!
-Jane
hace más de un año AaronSmith said…
Ace's POV

After my mother had dragged me off the table, I stormed to the line of cabins, because I didn't really had a place to go to.

"Going somewhere?" someone tapped my back. I pulled out my sword and pointed it at the person's face.

It was Aaron. She dodged the strike. I was actually pretty shocked, because I thought she was at the lift with Annabeth. There was no way she could get here so fast. I was usually faster than the other campers here.

She laughed. "Take it easy, kiddo! You could land your sword on anyone."

"My name's Ace," I growled. Who did she think she was, addressing me as if she was more powerful than me?

"You look......angry," she noticed.

"You shouldn't have insulted my father, you know. He's much more experienced than all of you," I said.

"Acey, Acey," she replied. "You don't know who my godly parent is, do you? And you're born from demigods. Maybe I could something you couldn't."

"Yeah, right." I snorted. "Who's your godly parent, anyway?"

"Well, this a secret only Annabeth and Clarrise know," she leaned in to whisper in my ear. "Others think it's Athena, but it's actually......Nyx,"

I went numb all over. "What?" I, well, squeaked.


I might die from lack-of-comments-sickness. PLEASE READ THIS PAGE!!!
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Skipper27 commented…
Im still lectura this! hace más de un año
AaronSmith commented…
Thanks, Skipper27! hace más de un año
hace más de un año Jane_Bridges said…
Okay adding a new Character!!! She is a daughter of Hades...
Ellie's Pov-
Rumors were flying everywhere, Aarons real mom- Nyx, New kids, New friends, New allies, but mostly Annabeth's "visit" with Percy. Okay being a child of Hades and all, I'm not that interested in love and breakups, but I was dissapointed with how Annabeth treated Percy, and how she expected Percy to atomaticaly go back to her even though he was married and had a kid.
But if I was Annabeth I would be miserable. Sooo....
I was in my room when Annabeth barges in, without even knocking! But she comes in and plops next to me on my bed while im in the middle of a chat with my friends and eating ice cream...weird, doesn't she know that us Hades kids need space?!

"Um..Hi?" I say, awkwardly,

"Hey, I need to ask you about Percy-" she says

"Woah, no please dont ask me, go ask some Aphrodite kid!" I say interrupting her, mid sentence. Annabeth gives me a stange look,

"Um, no, I dont need love counciling, I need you to summon a boy for me,"

"Oh okay- um yeah that I can do, who do you want to see?"

"A boy named Nico Di Angelo," She says,

"Oh I know him!" I exclaim, he's my half brother who comes to Camp Half Blood in the winters and stays at camp Jupiter the rest of the year.

"Yeah so just summon him and ill do the talking, and then leave." she says, twirling her blond hair in her finger,

"Yeah okay but you have to give me somethig in retern- your coral bead Percy gave you when you guys started dating," I say. Okay I'm not goin to lie, I had the biggest crush on this new Posiden kid and I thought it would be awesome if I could give him something from his father.

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Skipper27 commented…
nice chap! hace más de un año
Jane_Bridges commented…
Thanks Skipper27! hace más de un año
hace más de un año AaronSmith said…
Aaron's POV

One word: Change.

Everything is going to change. All those bad memories, all the regret and sadness. But it's only for a while. After that, it'll come back, and I won't- no, I can't face it.

(Author's note: Hope this keeps you wondering: who is Aaron Smith?)
hace más de un año olympianglory said…
I like this story loads... IMA TRY!!


Annabeths POV

I sighed reluctantly...

Why did this girl Ellie want Percy's camp necklace? I had found it alongside a small, coral ring next to the Poseidon cabin. It was the last thing that he left behind, as if to say he was renouncing his whole life before he became OP-Omega, that was his nickname now. It does make sense....

I handed Ellie the necklace, she smiled and snapped her fingers. Nico appeared, seemingly calm, although he looked like he had been through a gale. Nico sighed
" I know what you want, Percy blah blah blah, this is my advice, try not to mistake what you have with what you hate, it could leave before you know it."
" How is that gonna help me?" I cried. " I just, I didnt know he was gonna propose... Im the reason he joined Chaos anyway!"

Nico frowned " Annabeth, it wont be easy to make him change what he is now, if he changed beacause of you, maybe you can change him back..."


Omega's POV

I frowned, Nico Di Angelo had entered Olympus, I turned to one of my newer elite members, Hurricane Fury, or Olympia Shadowforth, as her previous name had been. She had joined because the camps never accepted her, like many.

" Hurricane, locate Di Angelo and bring him to me, We have a little discussion..."
She saluted, and walked away.

Olympia ( Hurricane Fury) 's POV

I grinned. Di Angelo, pah! I drew my sword, though I preferred archery.

Nico Di Angelo turned around, Annabeth was sitting on the bed, tears running down her cheeks. I didn't bat an eyelid.
" Nico Di Angelo, your presence is requested by Omega The Last. Come quietly, or it will be by my hands that you do die."
He shifted uncomfortably, and followed me to the Chaos cabin. I laughed. He would never dare misbehave in front of a shooter like me. I hoped every single one of these measly campers either stayed in their places, or died. I preferred the second option.
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PiperMclean7732 commented…
Nooooooooo Annabeth isn't going to get Percy back! Bianca is my favorito! character and Annabeth doesn't have the right to steal her husband. It was her fault so deal with it! hace más de un año
hace más de un año AaronSmith said…
Ace's POV

Aaron took me to an arena that was surrounded by dummies and whatever. And there were swords and axes and whatever placed in a well, gardener's toolbox or something on the wall.

"Welcome, kiddo, to the place where most people train and stuff. The sword arena," she announced. "Your dad started here,"

"My dad started here?" I said in disgust. This was a dump, a barren land. It was even worse than the stables.

Aaron ignored me and continued. "As I was saying, it's not the kind of place that you high class people or whatever train- heck, you probably train in air-conned, has holographic dummies running around arena- but it's all you're gonna get here. So throw that sword away and choose another one."

"But it's the only sword I have," I protested. I was lying, actually. It always reappeared in my pocket.

"It probably reappears in your pocket."

"None of them will fit me."

"We train eight year old kids."

That immediately shut me up and I threw my sword away.

Aaron walked to the toolbox and pulled out an assortment of weapons. She beckoned me to come over and I did.

She threw something over her shoulder. It was an ax, too heavy for me. I almost got crushed under the weight. "Too heavy," I groaned under the weight.

She looked around. "You don't say," she answered.

As she was shoving through the mess of weapons, I saw Hurricane Fury, one of my father's most experienced shooters, leading Nico di Angelo to my faher's headquarters.

I dropped the weapons and ran towards them. "Hurricane!" I shouted.

She turned towards me. "Master Ace," she saw Aaron and her face looked disgusted. "I can see you're hanging with our......low class allies in this dump."

"I HEARD THAT !" Aaron shouted. She randomly threw something towards me and I caught it.

It was a disposable ballpoint pen. On the side was some writing, but I didn't look at it and said," This is a pen."

She stiffened. "Uncap it."

I did, and immediately it became a shimmering bronze sword with a double-edged blade, a leather-wrapped grip and a flat hilt riveted with gold studs. It was about three feet long including the hilt, was shaped like a leaf and it balanced perfectly. It was about...... 5 pounds? The hilt bent upwards.

"I'll have this," I shouted.

Aaron sucked in a breath and murmured:" Anaklusmos,"

Please support! olympianglory, welcome to the Percy Joins Chaos family!
hace más de un año AaronSmith said…
Ace's POV

"Master Ace? Master Ace!" Hurricane snapped her fingers at me.

"Yeah?" I stared at the pen. Could this be the pen that my father used in his days? The pen he used on his quests?

"If you would come with me, I would show you the training arena below our headquarters. It has cavalry mode, and you can even set the numbers of enemies-"

"No, I'm training here."

"In this dump? It's not even air-conned. Would you prefer here over there when we have the latest technology in training?"

"He gets to fight with a real person. He gets a real experience of fighting with monsters, and for the first time in his life, he's going to break sweat, workout, have at least a little scratch, and get mosquito bites," Aaron cut in, anger in her eyes.
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hace más de un año Fangirl521 said…
awesome... just awesome
hace más de un año AaronSmith said…
laugh
Thanks,Fangirl521! I've seen your work (Percy Jackson meets The Hunger Games or something) too and it's quite awesome and nice!
hace más de un año PiperMclean7732 said…
cake
Please POST! This is awesome!!!
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PiperMclean7732 commented…
Nevermind i'm just going to post. hace más de un año
hace más de un año PiperMclean7732 said…
Bianca (She stills calls him Percy because she has the right)
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Everywhere she went people who used to talk to her shun her. This shouldn't matter but these people were like her first family. Even Nico wasnt himself around her. Was it all because of her and Percy and her son? I mean Annabeth broke his heart so he was fair game, right? And now everyone was against her. But she couldnt think about that now. She is the 2nd greatest killer working for Chaos and she had a family to think about. She simply pulled up her long black, dark brownish hair and played basket ball. It helped her. I felt like all my anger and pain washed away.
Even though she would never say it she wished she went to CHB instead of being a hunter. As she thought about why my basketball shots got more aggressive until I stopped. I just stood there yelling in anger. I threw the basketball in frustration. "Bianca........" a male voice said.
"Hi Percy......" I said with caution while turning around. Percy wasn't the most sympathetic at times. He then scooped me up in a hug. But i didnt dare cry i had to be strong for him and Ace. Percy could be the most serious guy ever but he had feelings too. Thats why I love him. He can be serious when needed but also soft on the inside with a barrel of emotions packed beneath.
"Hey you know what centers me......." I said even though he obviously knew the answer.
"Basketball...." He replied a little more happy and he snatched the ball from me.
I gasped. Oh no he didn't I thought! And ran to join in.
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hace más de un año PiperMclean7732 said…
Annabeth
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As I was walking by the basketball arena I saw THEM! The first time Percy is having fun and it's with HER. Percy....... I mean Omega was playing basketball with Bianca. I heard shrieks of joy and went to get a closer look. Bianca made a free throw and it went in. Omega had the funniest face on when it went through. Until he picked Bainca up and carried her like she was a prize. Until he set her down and kissed her! And then he said I love you. Right in front of me! Well....... They didn't see me so technically it wasn't on purpose but still it stung. I then ran away back to the Athena cabin.

In the Athena cabin
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I sat on my bed crying while Cori (my older sister) said,"We warned you not to trust the son of Poseidon!" All I did was stare madly at her. This is what I had to deal with all my life. People telling me about all my bad choices! Ugh!
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hace más de un año PiperMclean7732 said…
Please comment below!!! I would enjoy that and if you like this then below is the link to my story DaughterOfArtemis:
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hace más de un año PiperMclean7732 said…
Anyone still reading? I mean I love this fanfic and I don't want it to end.
hace más de un año olympianglory said…
Hurricane POV

As I led Di Angelo towards HQ, I saw Master Ace with the Beast. I smiled. I gagged Di Angelo, blindfolded him, and drew my bow. I was going to put this dog beyond use. I let my arrow fly. I hit her chest, and she doubled over, wheezing. I was already gone before she saw It was my arrow. Because etched into my arrows were phrases. This one was my favourite: You have only one life. Yours is about to end.


Omega POV

I smiled. Hurricane walked into the room with Nico. " I see you brought him. And my explicit order, was that done?" Hurricane nodded. No-one knew why she had been named Olympia, after the city. The gods hated her. I knew she wasnt lying, as she was missing the " One Life" arrow. She winked at me.
" The Mutt will soon be put down, if she doesnt find a way to stop the poison. Its pit scorpion, mixed with acid." I knew that the beast would never survive her arrows. Hurricane was a sharpshooter. She never missed. That was why Ace liked her, and I picked her. She got rid of enemies quickly , and never lost a fight.

Ace

He gasped. Aaron was doubled over, a stream of blood pouring from the wound.I saw writing etching into the iron shaft, this arrow belonged to Hurricane. She favoured this saying, and only used it on people she loathed. But there was something different. Hastily etched on the other side was: Nyx cant save you this time Aaron. Enjoy punishment. I realised. Aaron was a child of Nyx, Hurricane had known, so she shot her. " So your a traitor and a child of Nyx? No wonder Fury wanted to kill you. Your evil. And the mosquito bites inject venom! So she was right! Enjoy punishment."


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hace más de un año PiperMclean7732 said…
Good job Olympi.
hace más de un año olympianglory said…
Your turn!
hace más de un año PiperMclean7732 said…
Ok............. Ima posting

Aaron POV

As the poison was crawling into my body I prayed. It was the first time I had prayed to my mom. I whispered softly under the loud yelling of Ace,"Please mom. If you can help..... HELP!" I then disappered under the ground until I felt the warm layers of Tartarus and saw my moms house of night in the distance.

Bianca POV

I was swiftly walking past the old training arena. I saw Ace with..... Aaron falling through the dirt. I quickly ran to help. I slid and tried to grab her hand but it was so slippery I could not get a good enough grip on her hand and she fell through. I stood there, shocked and then I threw a temper tantrum like a little girl. So many loses! SO MANY! I mean Aaron wasnt the best person ever but she didnt deserve death! I scooped up Ace, he was in shock as well and he broke down crying. I spoke up and shakely saipd," Ace I need you to tell me what happened!"
hace más de un año olympianglory said…
Ace Pov

I had to admit, I was barely sure what had happened. But I relayed the story of the message in Hurricane's arrow. My mother shook her head in disbelief.
" I trust Hurricane with my life. She doesnt kill for the sake of it. She knew something about her."
" Um, mum? Aaron, shes a daughter of Nyx. Hurricane must have overheard, and shot before anyone saw. I knew this was crazy, but Bianca silently seemed to accept this.
" Very well. We shall not blame Hurricane, but we shall question her further. I want to know why she killed an ally.

Omega POV

I sat on my bed, typing in a command sequence, when i was interrupted by Hurricane, handcuffed, and escorted by guards. I rose to my feet,
" Who permitted this?" I cried." Have you lost your tounges? Who permitted this?"They shuffled nervously.
" Mistress Bianca,Lord Omega." squeaked one.
" Well," I yelled," Untie her! Anything she did was my orders."
" But-" one whispered " She killed an ally!"
" And I told her to. That " ally" was a child of Nyx! She would of adored our deaths!"
hace más de un año PiperMclean7732 said…
Omega POV

"Bring in my wife! We shall question her!" He was very shocked! Why would she trust a daughter of Nyx over Hurricane!

Annabeth POV

She had heard about Bianca and Aaron! Bianca was holding her head down low like she knew it was her fault and it was!!! First Percy, now Aaron! I know she is cruel but why must she take away everyone I love!! I walked straight over and slapped her. Bianca fell to the ground as I took out my knife and pushed it into her arm. Red blood oozed out as she layed there lifeless. I looked at Ace and saw shick and fear in his face. I said,"Bianca...... Poor, poor Bianca! Dont ever mess with my life again! And she strided off with a look of determination.

Bianca POV

The life drained out of her. She smiled even though it hurt at Ace. "Go get your father" The last thing she saw was Ace running toward the palace and she blacked out.

Omega POV

The guards turned and were about to leave when Ace rushed in. Fear was written on his face. He stuttered,"Mom...... she..... she was stabbed and is bleeding"
"Who did it son!"
"Annabeth!" He ran out the door remembering how sharp and deadly her knife was. And sure enough she was there bleeding to death. "Bianca...... No!"
"Im fine Perce.....", She coughed," Ill be fine." She was carried off into the palace and to the infirmary.



P.S. Bianca still lives it was just her arm! Just telling everyone!
hace más de un año PiperMclean7732 said…
smile
Your turn Olympi!
hace más de un año AaronSmith said…
Hi everybody. I just want to tell you that I don't have a lot of time because of homework and competitions. So I need talented co-writers like Jane-Bridges, olympianglory and PiperMclean7732 to help me. Please be active in writing and reading this. Thank you. And don't ask about my homework because you will never guess what my age is teehee.I'll try to post in my free time. In the meantime, please continue this story.
hace más de un año Fangirl521 said…
This is good...
hace más de un año PiperMclean7732 said…
Sure AaronSmith! I would love to be a co-author!
hace más de un año AaronSmith said…
Hey pls post on here because I really don't have much time to pls!!!
hace más de un año AaronSmith said…
AARON'S IN DA HOUSE!

Okay, not really. This chapter is gonna be really short, maybe ten words long. But no matter. Here it goes! (Eh, you better stop lagging dear phone. I might drag you through Tartarus.)

Annabeth's POV
Realization suddenly dawned on me.

I had hurt Bianca. Sure, she had taken Percy away from me, but maybe I shouldn't had done something like that to her.

Linebreak....

Yes, I can use my computer now. See ya in a few minutes.

hace más de un año AaronSmith said…
I''m going to repost the first part so it feels whole.

Annabeth's POV

Realization suddenly dawned on me.

I had hurt Bianca. Sure, she had taken Percy away from me, but maybe I shouldn't had done something like that to her. I mean, it was sort of cruel...right?

Once I heard she had been taken to the infirmary, I ran to there, wanting to apologize to her. But two guards stopped me.

"You can't go inside," one of them told her. "Spectrum is inside, and you filthy demigods might do anything to her."

Normally when faced with something like this, Aaron would say something really sassy and shut them up. But she wasn't here for some reason. She was probably going around the camp by herself. She was easygoing, but sort of like a loner.

Sorry, getting off track.

So I just pushed past them and searched for Bianca. She was pretty easy to find, because everyone else had cleared out.

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That's all for now. I'll post more in time.

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hace más de un año AaronSmith said…
Guys, I uh don't have that much time this year, so co- writers, pleaseeeeee help me. I loved this idea since I read it and I don't want it to go to waste. I understand that most of you are also collaborating with other authors or have your own forums, but please, help me continue this.
hace más de un año olympianglory said…
I'm sorry, but I just don't use Fanpop for anything anymore. I'm not using it, and there are other Chaos stroies on Wattpad, and many of them are updated much more.
hace más de un año AaronSmith said…
wattpad huh? i do that too ;)
hace más de un año emerald_32 said…
this plot is too used and really stupid, tbh. no offence.
hace más de un año olympianglory said…
I'm sorry, but seeing as each one is unique in it''s own way, I'm not sure why you're even talking. You probably just sit around hating on every single thing you see, because you don't have the talent to come close to what some of these authors have achieved.
hace más de un año olympianglory said…
Lol I feel like posting after my rant.

Hurricane
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I pushed through the lines of guards, bow nocked, poison dripping, sizzling where it hit the floor. The guards avoided my arrows.

Finally reaching the infirmary, I scanned the rows of crisp sheets until a spotted a familiar face.
"Mistress Bianca!"
The former hunter smiled.
" Hurricane, you know better than to call me that!"
I had never, not even once, been referred to by Olympia by one of my comrades. The last person who did it... Well, they no longer had full use of several of their fingers.
" Er.... Bianca, then. How are you? Do you need anything? Poison? Few deaths? Anyone you want me to shoot?"
She shook her head.
" Stay, Olympia."
I winced, and turned to her,bowstring taut.
" Sorry..." I muttered.
Bianca looked at me, warm brown eyes full of life
" Get Percy, hmm? Ask him to come. I'd like to see him for a bit."
I nodded quickly, and speed walked out..
hace más de un año AaronSmith said…
mischievous
Omega's POV

I ran my fingers through my hair. I was sitting on my bed, restless. It felt sort of weird. I mean, I hadn't felt being nervous since I joined Chaos' army.

The problem was, though: Hurricane killed Aaron. Aaron was a daughter of Nyx. There was nothing wrong to it, yeah?

But Bianca said that Hurricane killed an ally and wanted to question her. Aaron disappeared. Then Annabeth tried to hurt Bianca.

So much can happen in a day.

There was a creak of the door, and I straightened my back.

Hurricane poked her head in. "Mistress Bianca wants to see you. In the infirmary."

"Sure, okay. I'll be there in a minute." I stood up and walked out of the door.

Once I reached, I quickly scanned for Bianca. And there she was, forever smiling, even if she had this serious wound on her arm.

I sat next to her. "So, uh......"

"It's okay, Omega. Seriously. But can I ask you a question?" She arched her eyebrows.

''Yeah?"

"Why did you ask Hurricane to kill Aaron?"

I was a little thrown back at the question. Basically the only reason was that she was a daughter of Nyx. She could lash out at us anytime.

"I didn't really mean it," I mumbled. It was the truth. "I just asked Hurricane if she knew how to kill her. Then Hurricane immediately walked out without saying yes."

"Are you saying......" Bianca frowned. "That Hurricane could've, I mean, known her?"

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Hope you guys liked it! Does anyone know the answer to Bianca's question? Because I do!

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hace más de un año AaronSmith said…
Ace's POV

I walked through the camp, without Aaron interrupting me or anything. The sun was setting and dinner was about to come. I swung my sword around in circles.

And I saw the Athena cabin. I walked in, because Aaron had told me that people thought her as a child of Athena.

I found her bunk pretty easily, because her name was spray painted on the wall above it. There were a few posters of bands and papers that contained plans. I could see why people assumed she was a child of Athena.

"She used gold and black Montana spray paint. Hard to wash off. Chiron told her to pay, but she just laughed it off." Someone said quietly.

I turned around. It was Annabeth.

"I thought I saw you in the infirmary." I replied coldly. After all, she tried to hurt my mom.

"I went out when I saw Hurricane." she answered.

"She was a child of Nyx. Aaron, I mean." I said slowly.

She nodded. "And?"

"So why did you take her in?"

She sat down on her bed. "Aaron was a lost person. Sort of sad. Maybe even a little scared."

"She looked pretty okay to me."

"I said was ."

"Oh, um, okay. What else?"

Then I heard a conch blow, signalling dinner time.

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Plz post! Thanks!
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hace más de un año olympianglory said…
Hurricane
__________________

Hurricane was going to skip dinner. She'd skipped every meal for the past two days. She'd been troubled by the memories of her best friend, Rowen, who'd died not long ago.
Hurricane sat in her room, staring at herself in the mirror. Ribs poked through her skin, she'd been skinny anyway.
Rowen's laughing voice sounded in her brain.
"Hurricane, blood's thicker than water... But syrup is thicker than blood!"
"So?" Hurricane had replied.
"That means, that pancakes are more important than family!"
Rowen had burst out laughing.
Then, a worse memory appeared.
The were fighting, back to back. Rowen darted forward... And a sword sprouted through her chest. The girl fell to her knees.
"NO!" Screamed Hurricane, back in her room.
She hugged her knees.
"I should have saved you! You should be here, alive."

The worst thing was that Rowen had died on her own birthday, December 9th.
Not much of a birthday present.
hace más de un año olympianglory said…
Hurricane
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She walked up to the sword fighting arena, and began hacking at dummies.
Every time she "killed" one, she felt some of the guilt drain, but that wasn't saying much.
She'd killed so many people, the blood on her hands felt overpowering.
Honestly, Hurricane had lost count.
hace más de un año AaronSmith said…
Aaron's POV

I sat on the corner, looking at my mom having this meeting with other people.

Nothing beats sitting in a corner listening to that. It's basically the power of boredom, seeping through your veins until it makes you want to crawl into a ball.

Anyways at some point I couldn't take it and stood up. "I'm gonna get practicing," I told them. They just looked at me.

Okay then.

So I went to the training arena and started hacking. I felt the adrenaline surging through my arms, going autopilot.

I wasn't sure if my mom would let me up into meatspace again. I had to get back to camp. I had to help.

Nyx came up to me. "You......okay?"

"Yeah," I continued slashing.

"I'm not gonna let you up for a while."

I turned around. "Excuse me?"

"You're hurt."

"I'm fine."

"You've done enough."

"You mean I've killed enough."

"Maybe."

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Hoped you liked it!


hace más de un año olympianglory said…
Hurricane
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She stared into the mirror, watched her reflection.
She picked up a pair of scissors, and undid her head from its plait.
She raised the scissors to hair hair, and hacked off the lower part. Her hair was now just above her waist.
Hurricane snipped again. Small of her back.
She gave one last cut, leaving her hair around the middle of her spine, and set down the scissors.
She stared around the room.
Hair dye from Halloween, arrows, bows...
Hair dye.
It was white, and her hair was black.
She shook the can, and sprayed a streak of white down the back of her head.
Satisfied, she plaited her hair again.
"Now, where do they keep the bread? I want a sandwich."
hace más de un año AaronSmith said…
Annabeth's POV

After dinner (and offering a huge steak of beef to my mom), I went to find Bianca again.

I knocked on the door of her room. "It's Annabeth," I said.

Bianca opened the door. The wound was pretty okay already, and she could get out of the infirmary, but she couldn't move her arm. Her hair was a bit messy.

"Can I......come in?"

She stared at me for a while. "Yeah, sure." So I walked in.

"How's the wound?"

"It's doing fine."

"So......have you seen Hurricane? Or Aaron?" I tapped my fingers to the wall.

"Aaron disappeared. Hurricane's not coming out of her room."

"Wait. She disappeared?"

"Yeah. Fell through the dirt."

I had a little idea in the back of my head where she was now.

"Do you...... like her?" I leaned against the wall.

"Whaddya mean?"

"Do you think she can be trusted?" I didn't need to ask myself this. But I wanted to make sure the others were in it too. To find her.

"I don't know."

"Go with your instinct and tell me."

She swiped her hands on her jeans. "Look, Annabeth. Get some sleep. Hades knows what's gonna happen tomorrow."
hace más de un año olympianglory said…
Hurricane
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Hurricane walked down the corridor, past the lunch hall, past the.. Toilets... Okay...
She sat down outside the base, and stared at the spindly ring of trees.
She nocked an arrow, and shot one. A thick flow of amber tree sap rushed out, racing to heal the wound.

"That's what it is, Olympia. A race. The winners live longer, the losers die faster."
Ha, Olympia. She hadn't called herself Olympia in ten years.
It had actually been an exact decade. She'd started on her birthday.
That meant she was now 20..
"Happy Birthday, Me. What do you want to do? Oh, I don't know. Run off? Nope. I'll just shoot things, that's always fun."
She continued muttering, while repeatedly shooting the same tree, again and again.
hace más de un año prounknown said…
I've been away from this account for so long.
hace más de un año olympianglory said…
Omega POV
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A while ago, Bianca had said something about Hurricane knowing Aaron. I also knew something... That Hurricane had a friend, a dead one. Rowen Forrest.
The puzzle fitted into place.
Aaron killed Rowen. So Hurricane, naturally, had wanted vengeance.
She'd tried to murder her, as payback.
But.. Rowen died four years ago... I'd heard Hurricane muttering.
She could hold a grudge for a million years, four years was nothing. The pain must still be fresh.
Of course she'd wanted to get revenge.
Now I had to find her.
hace más de un año AaronSmith said…
Aaron's POV

"She's too young, Nyx. She was 13 when you signed her up. She's seen too much."

"But she's already 17. It doesn't matter anymore. I don't care. She wants to go back." Nyx said tiredly. "Besides, what can she do here? She's not going to belong and you know that. Aaron's not a child anymore."

"She's not an adult, either."

"You know there's a term called 'teenager', right?" I asked.

Hemera looked at me. I stared back.

"Defiance." she commented, and turned back to Nyx.

"We can't let her out and that's final."

"Stupidest statement ever." I muttered.

She looked at me pointedly. "Excuse me?"

"I could just go out by myself, you know? I don't need your permission. In the end, it's going to be my decision. You're not my mom." I licked my dry lips.

She took deep breaths. I smiled mischievously.

Gotcha.

"One night."
hace más de un año olympianglory said…
(I kinda loathe Olympia now... But she's still my baby. May I introduce Rowen Forrest, daughter of Ares and Hunter OF Artemis! )

Rowen POV

Rowen screamed.
She had been in this place for three, four years. It seemed like centuries. And they called this Elysium?
"Wait, can I leave?"
She walked towards the thin barrier separating her from the rest of the Underworld.
Her hand passed through cleanly. No hacked off body parts, nothing. She was fine.
Ducking through, she made her way towards an entrance, slipping neatly past the hordes of dead, mostly heading for Asphodel.
Nobody even tried to stop her. She did a cartwheel and a backflip, then sprinted out without looking back.
The scene before her was scary. A towering complex stood there, lighting flashing in the clear sky.
Naturally, she went in.
hace más de un año AaronSmith said…
AN: (I think I'll focus on Aaron for a while. Warning: short chap. I'm getting real busy with homework.)

Aaron's POV

The moment I got out of Tartarus, I went straight for a bar. Bad decision, I know, but I was getting tired of all the drama. Everything was messed up, the situation could wait. My headache couldn't. So I opted to have a few drinks to get a bigger headache.

I was pretty sure I wasn't going to get drunk. No, trust me. I can still shoot a dart with decent precision after downing at least 1 bottle of booze.

Okay, that's not a lot compared to how much I drink, but still.

So I went to a nice contemporary bar near the Empire State Building.



AN: I'M SO SORRY. I'LL TRY TO POST MORE THESE DAYS.