los héroes del olimpo Immortality ( chapter 6 publicado )

pjlover447 posted on Jan 05, 2012 at 02:22AM
Summary-Percy Jackson has it all but when he defeats Gaea  every one says that Jason is the savior and not Percy.everyone soon forgets about Percy that is except for piper McLean. Then annabeth leaves percy for jason now Percy must make a decision go to the ocean- leave piper and become immortal or stay by pipers side.

Disclaimer- all pjo and hoo things belong to rr
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hace más de un año shubham06 said…
I would love to read ur stry
Always thought percy and piper would make a nice couple
Post sooooon
hace más de un año pjlover447 said…
Thanks I'm going to try to post tomorrow: )
hace más de un año magic-cow said…
Sounds interesting, post soon!
hace más de un año percyroxz said…
ya post soon
hace más de un año kronosdied said…
Post soon
hace más de un año Kaia143 said…
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Sounds interesting!! Post soon!!
hace más de un año greekgirlA said…
ya 447,post!
hace más de un año Kaia143 said…
Please post soon!!
hace más de un año pjlover447 said…
 prologue
Percy's  Pov  



I couldn't believe my eyes . 

Right there in front of me was the most powerful sword . 

The last thing left of Gaea  because I, Percy  Jackson had defeated Gaea .

I  had been fighting Gaea for awhile .

Now she was gone ......

Well at least for now

" woah!" I turned around to see Jason  grace , thalia's brother

" I'm going to tell the rest Gaea  was defeated ." he said . I nodded  not knowing  that when he said that he meant that he was going to take all the credit .

Jason grabbed the sword and went away .

Moments later I heard a crowd of people saying jason's name

" Jason ! Jason! Jason ! " curious I went outside.

hey guys here's the prologue ! Hope you like it :)
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hace más de un año horse22133454 said…
big smile
Wow post soon
hace más de un año pjlover447 said…
Thanks
hace más de un año pjlover447 said…
Chapter 2 
Percy


Percy couldn't believe his eyes .

He never thought Jason was the guy who would take all the credit .but there he was . 

" what's going on " Percy asked hazel Leo and Annabeth .

" Jason won!he defeated Gaea " Annabeth answered 

" no. I did " 

" Percy just because you won the first war doesn't mean you'll always be the savior" Annabeth said and went off to see jason show everyone else the sword . 

" I knew he was lying ." hazel said

" yeah ever since he chose piper over Reyna he's been acting weird" Leo said 

" I can't believe he lied" hazel said 

" I can't believe Annabeth thought I was lying" I said before leaving and going on the Argo II .

"hey Percy " a voice said 

"huh?oh hey piper" I said 

"so Gaea's dead "

" yeah"

"I know it was you.I know it wasn't Jason . It's to bad only Leo hazel frank and I knew Jason was lying "

" yeah ."

"Percy?"piper said putting a hand on my shoulder 

"yeah piper?"

" sorry"

"for what?" I asked noticing that piper was really close now

" don't worry I believe you" Piper  said taking a step back

hope you like it
hace más de un año horse22133454 said…
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Really good post soon
hace más de un año Kaia143 said…
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Love it!!!!
Post again.soon
hace más de un año rock4ever said…
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just found this and i love it! post soon! :D
hace más de un año Nemisis said…
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post asap looooooove it
hace más de un año trivia101 said…
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POST
hace más de un año percyroxz said…
posts soon!!!
hace más de un año beba157jello said…
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i love it pliz post soon !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hace más de un año Kaia143 said…
Please post soon!!
hace más de un año Annabeth_Rocks said…
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POST! just found this and i love it, im aso new. PLEASE POST!
hace más de un año pjlover447 said…
^thnx and I'll post soon probably tomorrow I just haven't been on here for a while
hace más de un año Kaia143 said…
S'okay cant wait t'll u post
hace más de un año trivia101 said…
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Is this abandoned ?? I hope not
POST!!
hace más de un año dogcat207 said…
Epic post lovethe idea
hace más de un año pjlover447 said…

not abandoned guys. Sorry I haven't posted but I'll try to post sooner. Kay

 chapter three
Piper's Pov

Two months later


I still couldn't believe that Jason had taken all the credit. It just wasn't like him.

Then again he hasn't been the same since he got all his memories back and we landed at camp Jupiter. At first he just acted a little different. 

But, then after the war when he said he defeated Gaia, he acted like he never even knew Leo.

So now Leo is suddenly not   jason's best friends.

And me?

Well, for some reason I'm still dating Jason, but I'm not sure I really like him I mean he's become a really mean person. He's always caring what other people think. I'm not even sure he still likes me.

To say the truth I'm not sure how I feel about him. Jason's been there for me since the start but still, he's not really the same old Jason I knew before.

Anyways, right now I was waiting for Jason. We had agreed that he would meet up at his cabin. So I went to his cabin but he wasn't here. right now I was waiting outside jason's cabin but he didn't come.

I had been waiting for about ten minutes already, when I saw Leo and hazel run towards me.

"hey guys, what up," I said

"well, um," Leo looked at Hazel before continuing.

"what," hazel asked Leo in a hushed tone.

"you tell her," Leo said

"No way, we already agreed you would tell her," hazel said and I started getting nervous.

What did they want to tell me, I thought

"Hazel I'm not going to tell her," Leo said

"For Zeuss's sake, just tell her Sammy," hazel suddenly blurted out.

Leo raised an eyebrow and looked Hazel.

"Sammy?" he asked her "you know what Hazel you can tell piper ALONE, and you can also tell Percy what happened ALONE,"

"No, Leo I'm sorry it's just that-" 

"Key word alone hazel," Leo said before leaving.

"you okay?" I asked hazel

"huh? Oh, yeah, so piper I'm really sorry" hazel said

"for what" I asked slowly 

"Piper, Jason's cheating on you" 

"What, no that's not true" I said probably sounding hurt.

"I'm really sorry piper, but here is the worst part hes cheating on you with Annabeth," hazel said quickly as I stood there stunned

I couldn't believe what I was hearing. I could believe that Jason was cheating on me, but with Annabeth.

"with Annabeth," I asked slowly before bursting into tears


hace más de un año Kaia143 said…
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Yay!!!! U posted!!
I love the chapter, too.
It was really amazing!!!!! And I cant wait until u post again. I hope its really soon!!!!!
hace más de un año pjlover447 said…
Thnx, il try to post tommorow
hace más de un año universalpowa said…
:OOO

JASON, YOU NAUGHTY BOY
he's not my favorite character...

LEO!!! <3

personally, i dont know about Percy and Piper...i kinda like Liper <3
im weird like that, lol

post sooooonn!! :D

~universal~
hace más de un año kayleegurule said…
Ya in my MOA forum I'm thinking about adding a little bit of Liper in there except it'll mostly just be Jiper. What would Percy and Piper couple name even be? I mean there's Percabeth, Perlia, and Peyna but I can't think of one for them.
hace más de un año pjlover447 said…
^ lol, IDK I'd probably just call them P&P or...

Perper?
hace más de un año universalpowa said…
^^ LOLL!!

Perper...i dont think there is a name, lol XDD
still...liper is the best <3
haha, i dont like jason -_-
or octavian...or rachel....
i hate the oddest characters, lol
LEO IS THE BEST! <3
;D post soon!

~universal~

***BEEP***

*P.S.- i still support Liper, lol ;D haha *
hace más de un año Kaia143 said…
laugh
So then dont read it.


Cant wat for ur.post tomorrow!!
And universal u sound like ur scolding a small child......

I cracked up at ur coment!! Hilarious!!!!
But I do have to agree. Jason has been a VERY NAUGHTY BOY!!! Haha...... Lol

A can not wait!!!!!!!
hace más de un año pjlover447 said…
^ haha!
I support alot of couples, like liper, thalico, Theo though I'm not sure that's their name, prachel, preyna, drew and Leo, khione and Leo, thazel (hazel and Leo), Sammy and Leo, Hank (again not sure if that's a couple name), and also for some weird reason drew and Conner.


Yeah, and I agree with couples like percabeth etc. You know the ones that will actually happen, no offense to the other couples.



Lol I probably bored anyone reading this. Anyways I'm posting tomorrow!! And read my other story about Leo, it's called temporary home
hace más de un año beba157jello said…
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awesome chapter post soon!!!!!!!!!!!loves the couples
hace más de un año pjlover447 said…
Thx I'm gonna try to post today


OH and plz read my other story's I'm gonna put the links on th top part. Also I just noticed new page!!! :)
hace más de un año pjlover447 said…
Hope you like it! thnx for reading and for those two liper fans yeah there might be liper but mostly I'm focusing on it ending with P&P (IDC if that's not their name ima call them that)

Chapter 4
Piper

After Hazel told me about Annabeth and Jason, I ran to my cabin. Tears slowly drifted down my cheeks as I bumped into someone.

"Woah, watch where your going beauty queen," Leo noticed my tears as I quickly tried to wipe them away.

"She told you right," Leo said and now he sounded almost guilty, "You okay."

"Yeah," I managed to choke out. "Of course, why wouldn't I be?"

Leo nodded, "I just wanna say this, beauty queen. Jason's a jerk Piper, you deserve better,"

I managed a smile. At least I had friends that cared about me, and knew when to not joke.

"Thanks, Leo it means a lot,"

"Anytime piper," he said and I noticed he was actually using my real name.

"I'm sorry I ditched you Leo," I apologized.

"its okay, see you later." he said as I left.

My eyes were red and I put my head down in embarrassment as I heard some of my siblings talking about how 'Jiper' didn't work out.I got to my cabin and just sat there for a while.

"Hey, Piper," I heard a voice say.

"Thalia," I asked confused.

Why was she doing here?

"I know I'm probably the least person you want to see. Me being Jason's sister and Annabeth's ex best friend," I noticed how she said ex and my lips started to tremble. I put my head down not wanting anyone to see me cry.

Thalia put a reassuring hand on my shoulder.

"Don't worry, I know it hurts. I liked Luke but he liked Annabeth, same with Percy," I looked at Thalia not sure if she had just said Percy.

Thalia blushed, "Yeah, it's stupid but I used to have a crush on him. Anyways, it doesn't  matter. The point is we could use a hunter like you,"

"thanks, for the offer I'll think about it," I said

"No problem, you know we usually don't want children of aphrodite, but your an exception," She said handing me a card and walking away.

I looked at the card not sure what my decision would be. Then I remembered Thalia had mentioned Percy. I wondered how he was taking the news.

Had they even told him?

Leo had said something about Hazel telling Percy.

That was another thing since when were Leo and Hazel dating? Wasn't she dating frank?

Ugh, I thought, why can't life be easier.
hace más de un año Kaia143 said…
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I love the chapter!!!
It was really good.
And I can't wait until u post again. I hope its really soon!!
hace más de un año kayleegurule said…
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I LOVE THIS! PLEASE POST SOON! BTW MAYBE IT WOULD BE PIPCEY? IDK AND WOULDN'T HAZEL AND FRANK BE FRAZEL? ANYWAY POST SOON!
hace más de un año universalpowa said…
:O
OMGGG
HAHAHA, I STILL LIKE LIPER <3
even though it will probably never happen...*sigh*
ALTHOUH, if Jason picks Reyna, THEN THERE CAN BE LIPER! :D
lol XDD

post soon! AWESOME! :D
haha, Leo, your the best


JASON, YOU BAD LITTLE BOY D: im gonna imagine fictationally killing him now lol ;D

post soon! awesome!
i think this is like, the only forum with Percy and Piper o_o
;D

ohh! i have a name!
so there's two that are ehh

Perper
and
Pirpy

;D i like Pirpy lol XDD

POST SOON!! :D

~universal~
hace más de un año beba157jello said…
^LOL love the chapter hope u post soon !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hace más de un año pjlover447 said…
aww!!

Thx for reading guys

^Perper, Pipey or Pipcey?

IDK but those names are funny. Not like mine are better.

and it would be Frazel but at the time i decidedt justput Hank, no idea why
hace más de un año icuSTALKER said…
I call piper and Percy Pepper lolz. Idk why. Post soon!!!:D
hace más de un año pjlover447 said…
Chapter five
Piper



Hurt.

That was how I felt, not sad, depressed, or even mad.

I was just hurt.

I don't cry in front of people.

I locked myself inside the Aphrodite cabin. I sat down, determined not to cry. I took out the card Thalia gave me.

It's sharp, I thought, but then quickly put the comment aside. 

I wasn't about to have any emotional problems because of Jason.

I wasn't going to cry, or purposely hurt myself.

Jason was not worth my time, I told myself.

Suddenly, the door opened. I stood up from the corner where I was.

I looked up from my corner to se Drew towering above me.

What the Hades? Didn't I lock the door?

"Aww," Drew said in fake sympathy, "Is the dumper girl okay?"

Some campers—the ones that still were on Drew's side—snickered.

I didn't even stay to fight I just left. I was so mad. Mad at everyone just everyone.

LEO

I was definitely surprised when Piper showed up at bunker nine.

"It's okay" I said for once not joking.

"So how you been," Piper asked me

"Fine," I said but I still couldn't stop myself from laughing a bit.

"What, your not a third wheel again, right?"  she asked me teasingly.

I laughed again, this time bitterly, "No, not at all. Only when Frank, or Sammy—my great-grandpas— around me and Hazel,"

"Sounds bad," Piper said just as the door opened.

Piper turned pale. I looked over and saw Jason standing there.

He looked at me and gave me a disgusted look. The one my family, those social workers, and drew give me.

The one that means they think I'm just a problem, that needs to be taken care of.

He looked at piper next, "Pipe, let me explain. Please," he begged.

Piper stood there not saying a word and then she stood up went over to Jason and as if she was in a trance she slapped him.


PERCY

Hazel came over.

At first I was glad to see her, but then she told.

She spoke her words carefully, but my hearts still broken.

"You okay?" Hazels worried voice asked.

"Y—yeah," I stuttered, determined not to cry. 

"listen, I'll be okay Hazel" I managed a smile.

The truth?

I wouldn't be okay. I just didn't want her or anybody at all to see me. Not crying.

I wouldn't let them think Annabeth broke.

I'd stay strong, right?

Wrong.

The moment Hazel left I burst into tears, and silently cried. Crying is something I usually avoid.

But something was wrong I put my trust in Annabeth and she hurt me.

I now remembered how Annabeth came earlier. She invited me to the beach. Her voice sounded worried and sad. Her eyes told me she had been crying. 

I asked what was wrong

"I-it's nothing Percy" She said.

At the moment I felt so bad for her. Right now-that I know what she did- I hated her.

"Why," I said, "Why, mess my love life now Aphrodite, why not before?"

I put my head between my legs and whispered, "I loved her,"

wow, such sad chapter. I especially found Percy's part sad :( IDK why.
Oh and yeah Leo has love problems of his own tell me if you want me to write about them too.
And hmm.. Wonder what Annabeth's up to? Lol
Any ways pepper? Really, IDK about what their name is.

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hace más de un año Alvin2442 said…
Pipcy Perpir
hace más de un año pjlover447 said…
Perpir?
That's new. I think someone already mentioned pipcy not sure who. Glad you read itXD
hace más de un año horse22133454 said…
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love it post soon
hace más de un año beba157jello said…
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epic but sad chapter hope u post soon !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
hace más de un año Kaia143 said…
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I like perpir it sounds good.
And love the chapter. Amazingly good!!
And totally can't wait until u post again. I hope its really soon!!
hace más de un año mbg43 said…
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I don't think I can read this forum. It's just not what my mind thinks what would happen.



also NEW PAGE!!!