hola I gots a story question...

Would tu guys be all for this story I've been escritura for a while? When it says you, it's talking about Michael, cuz that's how I wrote it, and it's like I'm talkin to him in first person.....
ANYWAYS. On to teh importantsssss...... ^o^
I'm myself, a 15 año old girl, and this is BAD era, so Michael's around his late 20's... And we're in amor (No smexens, I promise!) and... Yeah. Would tu read? (Will also be publicado on MICHAEL JACKSON)