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I Walked into the room where Padme was laying asleep. I lightly shook her awake. "Padme something's been bothering me" dicho Anakin.
"What Ani?"asked Padme. "Why we don't have a normal life with a kid...?" "Oh well...."Padme said.
"I amor tu padme" and with that Anakin stripped off his clothes and then Luke And Leia where now destined to be born... a
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