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this is a sonic story i have been escritura for about a month.my chracter is myself because i put myself in my sonic stories.my chracters name is ashley but is refered to ash for short.hope tu enjoy it.
one claim,cool día at shadow & ash`s house
(shadow grabs the keys and is about to head of for work)
ash-shadow,can`t tu just take a día off work so we can spend some time together?
shadow-you already know how deticated i am to my work.maybe the commander will let me off but im not sure.(he just leaves)
ash was feeling kinda pissed off she coulde`nt spend time with shadow.
2 hours later
ash was still inicial alone & she did everything she could to take her mind off shadow.she had almost dado up & dicided to make a phone call.
sonic-(is in the garaje with tails who is fixing on one of his planes when his cell phone rings)hey ash! whats up!?
ash-i am just so bored rigth now i could just kill myself.shadow coulde`nt spend anytime with me today,he`s occupied with work.
sonic-bored!?well im so glad u called.wanna hang out with me today?
ash-definetly!i`ll be their in a few minutes(hangs up)
7 mins later
(sonic & ash are headed out the door on their hoverboards)
sonic-this place is kinda far,so that`s why we`re using our boards to get their.despite the distance,it1s pretty cool & beautiful,im sur you`ll like it.
(sonic & ash pull off on their gravity-deviying boards)
15-20 mins later
sonic-we`re here!
ash-whoa,(she looked down in amazment)
(this biome was a huge,amazon rain forest-like jungle with flores everywhere tu turn,exotic birds such as peacocks & hummimg birds but even for a forest like this,it has it`s own dangers & precations)
sonic-theirs alot más to this forest than what meets the eye,i don`t think i even went througth half of this forest yet.
ash-i think im starting to like this place.
sonic-well c`mon!we have so much time on our hands to gawk at this forest.let`s go!(the 2 adventurures sped into the forest at super sonic speed.
1 hora later
sonic & ash have dicided to go on foot to explore some of the parts of the forest.
sonic-(looked up at a árbol & saw some fruit;he went up the árbol on his hoverboad & grabbed 2 mangos.(to ash)-want one?
ash-umm,sure.
sonic-i`ve only found out about this place a couple weeks hace & here i am visiting it twice a week.what do u think ash?(he turns around to see ash is coiled up por an albiono boa constrictorbut it is also genetically fused with the dna of a viper)
sonic-don`t worry ash!i`ll get that snake off!
(he started off repeatedly attacking using homing attack & spin dash;the snake slowly losened his grip.sonic attacked it a few más times & he finally let go.the snake took one last look & retreated.)
sonic-u ok ash?
ash-i seem alrigth.
sonic-lets get outta here before he comes back!chaos control!
*back at home*
sonic-whew!what an adventure!
ash-you dicho it!but i liked it.
sonic-how`d that snake get u anyway?
ash-it must have got me for behind because i did1nt see it.
sonic-doesen`t this beat being at inicial all day?
ash-hell`s yeah it does!im glad i dicided to come over.
sonic-you know,since before u & shadow dated,we would go on lots of expeditions like this remember?
(memories just flowed into ash`s head of the times she spent with sonic,tails,knuckles,sometimes amy & sometimes shadow before they dated.the good, the bad, even close calls& the extordinary that happend on different adventures)
sonic-you were actually much happier in those timesremember when i took tu hoverboarding?
*flashback*
sonic-now that i taugth u everything u neeg 2 know about hoverboarding,here`s the real test,SPACE COLONY ARC!
knuckles-remember if tu fall,you`re screwed because you`ll be dead.
ash-what?!
sonic & tails-KNUCKLES!
knuckles-just kidd`in i was just mess`in with her.
tails-if tu do,sonic will cacth tu back up on his hoverboard,
sonic-or i`ll use chaos control to bring tu back up.
ash-okay,so wheres my starting point?
sonic-its rigth in front of you;see the glowing red & blue post?
ash-yeah,i see it(starts up her hoverboard)the startmarker counted 3,2,1,START!
*FLASHBACK END*
sonic-(showing ash some pics)you actually got it down once tu became face 2 face wih gravity.
ash-those wre the days.i would do it again if i wanted 2.
sonic-so that means?
ash-i let u know when im bored.i work 2-3 times a day& im a manager; i take off anytime i want to.
sonic-cool!we can tour the globe behing shadows back!almost like the good times.
ash-well,shadow whent on that trip 2 spagonia but,i was a thing for an assignment.
3 weeks later
sonic & ash have been 2 lots of places(knowing sonic)& how fast he gets 2 them.spending all this time together,sonic has also taken intrust in ash but she`s shadows girlfriend.
10:30 pm
ash told shadow she would spent some time with her girls so she & sonic could talk.
sonic-ash,why do u allways have 2 keep things from shadow?why not tell him what`s really up?
ash-have u seen the way he acts when i do tell him stuff?no way!
sonic-i know.but u do`nt have 2 worry about a thing with me.
ash-that`s because you`re más outgoing & i feel más comforable telling u everything.
sonic-before u & shadow hooked up,me & u were almost like best friends.
ash-yeah,me & u are pretty tigth together.i kinda trust u más than shadow.
narrirator-you can just imagine how sonic was feeling with ash telling him this.
sonic-(with a sense of pride inside him,he almost wanted 2 tell ash what he was feeling about her.)
in the distant future
silver-so r those 2 going 2 be together?
mephiles-you tell me,i already know the anwser & so will u.you`ll know what happens 2 them long before they do.(hands him the purple chaos emerald)
silver-(looking into the emerald)i,i see it.but is this true?
mephiles-look silver.
in the past/present
sonic-ash i,i,i bougth tu some ice cream it`s in the freezer.
ash-ummm,okay(leaves to the kitchen)
sonic-damn,i with i could have told her.
(ash comes back)
sonic-ash,i missed u when u & shadow started dating.u didn`t hang out with us very often.
ash-we did spend alot of time together back then.shadow used 2 be so sweet & understanding 2 me;it seemed like after he came back from that trip 2 trinidad,he acted so differently.
sonic-trinidad huh?guess shadow had a case of jungle fever!
(sonic & ash lauthing then they both lean in as if they were besar until-
tails-hi sonic!
sonic-ahhhgg!(he got so scared,he fell outta his playa chair)tails?! what are u doing here this late at nigth?
tails-im bored.so i cameover 2 see what u were doing.
sonic-im just sitting he chating with ash.i guess tu can say here for a while.what do u say ash?
ash-okay,why not.
tails-sonic,i found one más chas esmeralda today.
sonic-really?that makes 3 outta7 dosen`t it?
tails-yeah,but we better be careful,eggman could come & get them at anytime.
sonic-you`re rigth;im gonna store it in a seguro place before-
(just then an large robot comes)
eggman-hello there sonic,you know what i want so hand`em over & no 1 gets hurt.
sonic-damn it.
1 mes later
shadow is just about 2 find out ash & sonic have been hanging out together.
(shadow comes inicial early from work one day,he turns on the t.v.)
news ancor man-suspect jamie wolfe has been aprehended & will be taken in for questioning;if tu have any preguntas o conserns about the cedar palms case,call 248-362-7890 kfy news.
shadow-(walks to the back room & finds a journal prompt)he looks through it & finds out it`s ash`s. he reads it.
ash`s thougths-even though im with shadow,i hang out with sonic whenever he`s busy.
shadow-(flippes trough a few más pages.)
ash`s thougths-more & más im with sonic,i see something in him.i can tell he has feelings for me;by some of the things he does & says.the way he smiles,& he never fails to mostrar up whenever i need it.it`s been a mes & a half,im starting to like him a little.
shadow-sonic`s try`na hit on ash?he won`t be for long when i remind him whoses girlfriend she really is.
downtown esmeralda city
sonic,knuckles,& tails hanging out
tails-listening 2 his mp3
sonic-(2 knuckles)u see i reallly,reallly like her,but im not sur how she feels about me,because shes still with shadow;it`s the only reason why i have`nt pushed o forced anything.
knuckles-knowing shadow,thays a pretty good thing 2 do.last thing u wanna do is get caugth flirting with his girlfriend while he`s around.
sonic-i know rigth!but what else can i do?
knuckles-well,if tu like her as much as tu say tu do,maybe u should hang out together alone & maybe tu can get the word out then.
sonic-thay`s a great idea knuckles,even though i i don`t really come to u 2 talk about my problems.let alone fix them.
knuckles-i fell some strange energy.
tails-what kinda energy?
just then a medium-sized ball of yellow ligth appears in front of them.
sonic-(looks up.)shadow?
shadow-just attacks sonic with chaos spear.
tails-sonic!
knuckles-shadow!what do u think you`re doing!?
shadow-(chuckles)just taking care of some buissiness,now get out my way o you`re both toast.
knuckles-shadow!we are not just going to let u attack sonic withougth figthing u first,is`nt that rigth tails?
tails-no one attacks sonic & gets away with it!punch away knuckles!
knuckles-with pleasure.
just a few blockse away from there location.ash is shopping.
cashier-that will be 25 dollars.
ash-thanks.she gives him the money & leaves.she went across the calle to a nearby wendy`s.
knuckles & tails try their best 2 hold off shadow.
shadow-(uses a mini chaos blast 2 shake off knuckles & tails.)fools tu can`t stop me,im the ultimate life form!(walks up to sonic)as for u.
ash-(walks down another block & sees the figth.she is a bit shocked & appaled)
knuckles& tails are on the ground& shadow is beating up a barley counsious sonic.(one más hard hit he would have been out)he tried 2 put up a shield but because he was already weak,it didn`t last long.ash coulden`t tak anymore so she stopped the figth.
ash-shadow stop!
shadow-turns her direction.
ash-why are u figthing them?
shadow-you`re hiding something.why the hell r u hanging with sonic behind my back?
ash-whenever you`re busy, i get bored & find myself hyang out with him.
shadow though for a brief segundo & bough into ash`s story.with that, he let sonic go & ash healed all their injuries.this conclued my first chapter.
posted by pinkarray
Good news, I have a new fanfic on the site, it's called Be Aware of the Technology, to shock tu with the explosions Sonic and his friends create.

There will be fickle times, flighty times, sad times, and even cheery times.

The story of a carefree Sponge named SpongeBob, about to get his luck crushed when he sees a cocky pescado come into his resturant. Unfortunately, he takes it personally... tries too hard to act naive and suddendly angers the fish. He has a dream about the pescado eating Krabby Patties and we're about to see something super superior, about Sonic joining SpongeBob in his sad adventure to extinguish the luck of the fish.

Luckily, we have Amy Rose, Cream the Rabbit and other friends waiting for us in an action-packed story.

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