“You dicho something about a song?”
“Yeah so?”
“Could you… sing it o something?”
“Um… well, it’s not really… a happy song.”
“Would it be okay though?”
“… I suppose so. I actually don’t really know where I learned it from but I can’t really forget it.”
“It’s that bad?”
“Well… for me it is, I don’t know how you’d react to it.”
“You don’t have to if it makes tu feel bad.”
“No it’s alright. I can’t just leave tu hanging after baiting like that. *sigh* Alright…”
The warriors run down the small town,
They lay to rest all the men’s hope.
They burn and break all of the houses
The defender’s spears are all broke
And the king and his men,
With hearts of greed and sin
They watch and they lay down their swords
Like cowards they lay down their swords…
The kingdom is crushed now and weeping,
The people are all but slaughtered
The black Knight rises up his sword now,
Then the kingdom’s prey is slaughtered
For the King and the Knights,
Whose hearts matched not their words,
Only sealed what would make their end earned
They’d know that their doom was self-earned…
Cry, Cry
Tears, Tears,
The battle-cry and innocent’s tears
For they did not know why
It was them that should die
For the innocent blood spilt is cursed
The ones who spilt blood were now cursed…
Up rose the red knight
The single savior
Valiantly, selflessly
Our one protector
Down came the dragons
Metallic death
Then down came the red knight
Clinging to breath…
The last of the people were dead now
The soldiers all marched out with glee
The final words that were spoken
“Savior, oh please come save me”
“Yeah so?”
“Could you… sing it o something?”
“Um… well, it’s not really… a happy song.”
“Would it be okay though?”
“… I suppose so. I actually don’t really know where I learned it from but I can’t really forget it.”
“It’s that bad?”
“Well… for me it is, I don’t know how you’d react to it.”
“You don’t have to if it makes tu feel bad.”
“No it’s alright. I can’t just leave tu hanging after baiting like that. *sigh* Alright…”
The warriors run down the small town,
They lay to rest all the men’s hope.
They burn and break all of the houses
The defender’s spears are all broke
And the king and his men,
With hearts of greed and sin
They watch and they lay down their swords
Like cowards they lay down their swords…
The kingdom is crushed now and weeping,
The people are all but slaughtered
The black Knight rises up his sword now,
Then the kingdom’s prey is slaughtered
For the King and the Knights,
Whose hearts matched not their words,
Only sealed what would make their end earned
They’d know that their doom was self-earned…
Cry, Cry
Tears, Tears,
The battle-cry and innocent’s tears
For they did not know why
It was them that should die
For the innocent blood spilt is cursed
The ones who spilt blood were now cursed…
Up rose the red knight
The single savior
Valiantly, selflessly
Our one protector
Down came the dragons
Metallic death
Then down came the red knight
Clinging to breath…
The last of the people were dead now
The soldiers all marched out with glee
The final words that were spoken
“Savior, oh please come save me”
So why am I remaking it? Well the series was the first fanfiction series I made and when I did it wasn’t really well written, plotholes galore, so I wanted to remake it completely. But at the same time I didn’t want to redo it because of all the ideas I had.
So what I’m doing is rewriting the story, and keeping it as it was, but making some changes along the way. This way the original story will be there but it will be written better. I’ll add some other parts into it, but rest assured it’s not a reboot, just an edited version.
So what I’m doing is rewriting the story, and keeping it as it was, but making some changes along the way. This way the original story will be there but it will be written better. I’ll add some other parts into it, but rest assured it’s not a reboot, just an edited version.