please help i need to know if my songs are good enough

My world’s crumbling
This is the end it may be hard to get but it is true what it means do tu think it means I don’t care for tu Im stil there for tu always here
it tore me apart but I have to leave
It was everything I could ever want now its slipping now its going crumbling away my world is crumbling everything is so depressing so depressing
I know tu were always there but betrayal I cant forget it was pain hurt torture to try and live through it hurts más than anything tu do
it tore me apart but i have to leave
It was everything I could ever want now its slipping now its going crumbling away my world is crumbling everything is so depressing so depressing
I thought it was but I fooled myself again I amor tu but that’s all I know I thought it was but I fooled myself again I amor tu but that’s all I know
it tore me apart but i have to leave
It was everything I could ever want now its slipping now its going crumbling away my world is crumbling everything is so depressing so depressing