Hello sad song fanpopers

Okay so I know this is proberly goin to sound terrible but I have come up with a verse and the chourus to a song that I am escritura and I want tu to say if tu like it and if tu can come up with another verse and a title. Thanks!

My bloods pouring to the ground
And tu don't even care.
I look at tu pleading
And tu just walk away.
tu ripped out my corazón and soul
Burned them to ash
Now tu say tu amor me
tu say tu want me back?

Get the hell away from me
You've hurt me
Get out of my life
You've scarred me
tu were the best thing in my life
Then tu turned and walked away
tu say tu amor me
And still tu walk away