Does this story sound good? I need help..

Ok so my story is called "Kikio's amor Story"

Anyways, Its about this blonde girl named Kikio and she goes to this all-girls school called "Green LeaF Acadamy" the "f" is capitalized because it stands for "female", anyway, the principal decides to let a boy registrarse the acadamy just for fun. All the girls get pissed,even Kikio, but she starts to develop a crush on the boy whos name is Harima.

Soooooooooooooooooooooooooooo....what do tu think? Good o Crap?....