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Help!

I wrote this song today. Is It good?

Oh, do tu know,
I used to look up to you,
I felt I had found someone,
But I was mistaken,
And did tu know,
If I could see tu face to face,
And I’d be speaking for the aliens,
I’d tell you,
I hate you!
Don’t mind how tu look,
I know you’ve grown up,
I hate you!
You’re just scared of us,
And if I told tu the truth,
I’d just call tu a wimp,
Are tu afraid of me?
I hate to put all the blame on you,
But it really is your fault,
tu wanted to become a Hollywood star,
If I could see tu face to face,
Here’s just what I would say,
Why did tu have to change?
Why couldn’t tu just stay?
And I honestly wouldn’t cry,
If I heard that tu had just dropped dead,
I hate you!
tu probably don’t even know,
This song is for you,
What’s the point of this song?
I know tu won’t listen,
You’re an arrogant jerk,
Thought tu were an alien,
I guess after all this time,
tu got your wish,
tu belong.
 misscrazel posted hace más de un año
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gorillacookies said:
Its pretty good! Its actually great! i like it;)
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Thanks!^-^
misscrazel posted hace más de un año
boytoy_84 said:
It's not bad at all :)
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Thank you! ^-^
misscrazel posted hace más de un año
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