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I need help with my english. Anyone?

I'm doing this homework for school about tennis. I need to know if there are any mistakes in this sentence:

tenis ranks as one of the most popular spectator and participation sports in the world, with fans and competitors in más than 100 countries. Millions of people, most of them amateurs, play the game worldwide, either as recreation o in amateur tournaments.



Please correct it for me (:
Thank you.
 beeibe posted hace más de un año
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DavidJS23 said:
tu have to manny commas. Try this :Tennis ranks as one of the most popular spectator and participation sports in the world. Its popularity spans to más then 100 countries. Millions of people, though mostly ametuers, play the game worldwide. It can be played either as recreation o in ametuer tournaments.

Im not the best at english lol, but i hope what i dicho helped.

- David
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thanks! :)
beeibe posted hace más de un año
ashesandwine said:
Ok... so I'm portuguese, so maybe tu shouldn't really trust me... But I think that's correct:)

I'm sorry if I couldn't be of much help:(
Lots of love
Ashes:)
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sarabeara said:
Okay, it's pretty good :)
In the first line, "participation" should be changed to "participator" (in order to correspond with "spectator").
And no offense, but the last sentence is a mess. Change it to "Millions of people, most of whom are amateurs, play the game worldwide, either as a form of recreation o a form of competition." (it's too repetitive to say "amateur tournaments")
Oh, and not really important, but it's frowned upon in the English community to write "100." tu might want to change it to "one hundred." It's not really a big deal, but I know some teachers are sticklers when it comes to details.
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haha. thank tu so much!
beeibe posted hace más de un año
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No problem. AP English comes in handy ;)
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GaGaBoi said:
Im English and yes, all the wording is correct, Maybe lay off the commas a bit. ( =


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Free_Spirit said:
Hm maybe lay off the commas a bit lol. But it sounds alright. maybe a bit más sophisticated language cause teachers amor it if tu do that. so maybe something like
tenis is a very popular sport with thousands of fans and particapating athletes in today's society..... and tu can continue on. I dunno try and make it sound a little bit smoother.
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