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So I wrote this chapter and I think it's a bit boring and I tried to fix it but it still seems boring.
“I’m sorry I shouldn’t have bothered you, I’m not even sure why I came, I’ll get a taxi home” I dicho setting down my cup of té after a minuto and preparing to stand up.
“No don’t worry about it love, tu can stay here for a while if tu like” Louis spoke quickly. I looked at him for a moment before leaning back into the couch,
“Ok, thanks” I smiled at him.
“I like your ring” Louis stated and I looked down remembering I was still wearing it.
“My dad gave it to me for my birthday” I dicho trying to keep my voice even.
“When was your birthday?” Louis asked with a smile.
“Yesterday”
“Halloween? That’s cool”
“Yeah”
“How old did tu turn?”
“19”
“It’s a pretty ring” Louis continued despite the fact that I was being extremely uncommunicative.
“Yeah”
“So did your dad throw a party for tu o something?” Louis was still smiling. He was so oblivious it was unfair. I shook my head as tears formed in my eyes. I stared down at my lap. “Hope are tu ok?” I shook my head again and a tear fell. Louis moved over so he was sitting siguiente to me. He put his arm around me and I sniffed, scrunching up my face and trying to stop the flow of tears.
We just sat there for a minuto like that. Not saying anything but it wasn’t an awkward silence. It felt nice having his arm around me but all of a sudden I remembered Zayn and the kiss and a knew flow of tears came on. Before long it would be like a cartoon and the room would be flooded with my tears.
“It actually happened the night I was born” I began after I’d calmed down a bit, “My dad was driving to the hospital after he got the call from my mum. It was at night so obviously people had been partying and drinking. My dad was so excited about getting a girl, he always wanted a girl…he didn’t see the drunk driver at the roundabout unt
“I’m sorry I shouldn’t have bothered you, I’m not even sure why I came, I’ll get a taxi home” I dicho setting down my cup of té after a minuto and preparing to stand up.
“No don’t worry about it love, tu can stay here for a while if tu like” Louis spoke quickly. I looked at him for a moment before leaning back into the couch,
“Ok, thanks” I smiled at him.
“I like your ring” Louis stated and I looked down remembering I was still wearing it.
“My dad gave it to me for my birthday” I dicho trying to keep my voice even.
“When was your birthday?” Louis asked with a smile.
“Yesterday”
“Halloween? That’s cool”
“Yeah”
“How old did tu turn?”
“19”
“It’s a pretty ring” Louis continued despite the fact that I was being extremely uncommunicative.
“Yeah”
“So did your dad throw a party for tu o something?” Louis was still smiling. He was so oblivious it was unfair. I shook my head as tears formed in my eyes. I stared down at my lap. “Hope are tu ok?” I shook my head again and a tear fell. Louis moved over so he was sitting siguiente to me. He put his arm around me and I sniffed, scrunching up my face and trying to stop the flow of tears.
We just sat there for a minuto like that. Not saying anything but it wasn’t an awkward silence. It felt nice having his arm around me but all of a sudden I remembered Zayn and the kiss and a knew flow of tears came on. Before long it would be like a cartoon and the room would be flooded with my tears.
“It actually happened the night I was born” I began after I’d calmed down a bit, “My dad was driving to the hospital after he got the call from my mum. It was at night so obviously people had been partying and drinking. My dad was so excited about getting a girl, he always wanted a girl…he didn’t see the drunk driver at the roundabout unt
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