So I wrote this song for my girlfriend and I'll give it to her on our 2 months anniversary.. so please tell me what tu think of it

Our Love

tu have a smile that takes me to another world
It leaves me speechless, without saying a word
tu have flawless eyes, they're like a gift from Lord

I can't live without you
Cuz you're my heartbeat
If tu wanna set siguiente to me
There's a wide open seat
If tu wanna take it
Just come and make it
ALRIGHT

(Chorus):
This is our amor at 13
We're living our lifes while we're teens
Probably tu don't know that tu mean
The whole world to me

and if I had a estrella for everytime tu made me smile
I would be holding the night sky in my hand
We'll just forget our tears, and walk that mile

I can't sing without
Cuz you're my melody
I can't survive without you
Cuz you're my remedy
Don't leave me alone
Cuz it won't be
ALRIGHT

(Chorus):
This is our amor at 13
We're living our lifes while we're teens
Probably tu don't know that tu mean
The whole world to me

(Bridge):
When tu need me I'll be there
Just to mostrar how much I care
When tu cry I'll wipe your tear
When tu scream I'll fight your fears

(Chorus):
This is our amor at 13
We're living our lifes while we're teens
Probably tu don't know that tu mean
The whole world to me