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what do tu think of this poem?

this is my first but just tell like it is. if tu hate it just tell me.

every time i look at tu i makes me want too cry.

every time i look at tu it makes me want too scream.

every time i look at tu it makes me want too die.

every time i look at tu it makes me think of tu and her lastnight.

so what do tu think should i wright more?

lilred96 posted hace más de un año

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dustfinger said:

this is not a poem. its a song. make it a song. i like it so far.

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posted hace más de un año

ok thanks for answering ;)

lilred96 posted hace más de un año

Mela1994 said:

i like it, u should write more!!! :D

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posted hace más de un año

do tu think people would read it?

lilred96 posted hace más de un año

i would read it so yeah i think people would read it :)

Mela1994 posted hace más de un año

sweet_n_silly said:

like dustfinger I think it would be a good song. It's pretty darn good too. there's some spelling issues though. tu definately should write more.

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posted hace más de un año

if u do decide to make it into a song, I could maybe write the música if u want

sweet_n_silly posted hace más de un año

peterslover said:

Awesome☺ Like they said, make it into a song☺
siguiente line could be:
every time I look at tu I want to say goodbye

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posted hace más de un año

TwilightSagaLdy said:

yeah its más of a song and its pretty good!!! and i think tu should finish escritura it! i like it!!! =)

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posted hace más de un año

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