What do tu think of these poems I'm 13 and I have a big crush on a boy I wrote these for him but didn't know if I should mostrar him I was wondering what tu guys thought? Thanks

MY WORLD (My Favorite)
His shinning eyes are like the southern estrella in the night
His smile lights up any room when in darkness
It also lights up my world
It was cold and dark than he appeared
It than lit up
His shinning eyes are like the southern estrella in the night
If i lost him than I would also lose
My light

ALONE
When I Close my eyes I see him
When I close my eyes i'm all alone wanting to be inicial

SHINE
He has a shine
It makes me so blind
But only, but only
Sometimes

frases AND misceláneo THINGS

fan GIRL IN amor
Q. One Direction the biggest boy band of today has fans in every country over them and their called directioners but what do we call ourselves when we fan girl over just a normal infamous boy
A. In amor

WALLS
My idol/idols plaster my walls
But my crush still plasters my mind

IF HE WERE FAMOUS
If my crush were famous and yes he deserves it he's just that good
I would instantly like him on facebook
Follow him on twitter
And subscribe to him on YouTube
But till then I'll just do it in my mind

TV BOY
If he were on TV for even a minuto
I would instantly look up that clip
favorito! it and watch it 100 times a día
Even if i saw him at school all día
And on the weekend at least 1000

Thank tu for lectura them I hope they are good and tu enjoyed them :)