NOTE: Okay... This is my very first FF on the fansite so if I screw up... PLEASE FORGIVE ME!
Just some symbols...
Author's Note is in bold
Action/Scene is in italics
Thought Speak is with < & >
Part I: The Beginning
Oh! I forgot to mention that I won't give away the main character's REAL name until the end of the FF, THAT will be determined later...
I'm also gonna throw in a couple references...Just for fun :D
(A car pulls up to the Central Park Zoo...)
?: Here we go... (sighs)
(6 little kids run out of the car)
?'s Mom: tu kids have fun! (turns to ?)Now tu make sure tu keep the kids seguro okay?
?: Mom, I'm not going anywhere else.
?'s Mom: I know, Here, I'll give tu $80, tu make sure that the kids get to eat, alright?
?: Yep
?'s Mom: I'll be back at 6.
?: K, amor you.
?'s Mom: amor tu too!
(?'s Mom drives away and ? & kids go to the front gate)
?: Alright everyone, attendance! Kenny?
Kenny: Here.
?: Carley?
Carley: Here!
?: Lee?
Lee: Here
?: Lilly?
Lilly: Here.
?: Christa?
Christa: Here
?: And... Omid?
(Silence...)
?: Uhh... Omid?
(Omid comes out from behind a arbusto, bush and jumps at ?)
?: AHH!
Kids: HAHAHAHAHAHAH!
?: OMID! DON'T EVER DO THAT AGAIN!
Omid: Chill! Okay? I'm here..(laughs)
?: Ugh... <Today's gonna be a LONG day...>
(Just then, Alice opens the gate)
Carley: Yay! Let's go in!
(All the kids run into the zoo while ? just starts walking)
Alice: Welcome... To the Central Park Zoo...(yawn).. Whatever.
?: Alright here are your maps, make sure to meet at the pingüino, pingüino de habitat at EXACTLY 12:30! Then we'll have lunch, and then tu guys can keep looking around, THEN at 6:00, Go to the front gate and then we'll go... capiche?
Kids: Capiche.
?: Okay, now go have fun!
(All the kids run in different directions)
(Meanwhile at the pingüino, pingüino de HQ...)
Kowalski: Behold...The Transformulator!
(Skipper, Rico, & Private look at each other then, they sigh)
Kowalski: What's the matter?
Private: I'm sorry if i'm being mean to tu Kowalski but... don't all of your inventions always fail?
Kowalski: Well... About 82.5% of the time...but...
Skipper: The private's got a point there
Kowalski: Look, I know my inventions ALWAYS explode but this one is definitely going to work!
Skipper: And how do we know that?
Kowalski: Well... tu don't..but..
Skipper: Exactly, Now who wants to bet that this invention will explode?
Rico: FIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIISSSSSSSSSSSSSSHHHHHHHHH!
Kowalski: WAIT! I didn't even get to tell tu what it does yet!
(All the penguins go silent)
Skipper: Fine, What does it do, Kowalski?
Kowalski: (sigh) With this invention, we can literally be any living animal we want!
Skipper: Ooh! This just got interesting!
Kowalski: All we need to do is set it to any animal of our choice and shoot the needle at them!
Skipper: Needles? NEEDLES?!?
Private: Skippa? Please try to calm down!
Skipper: AHH!
(Skipper then runs around the HQ while the other penguins try to get him)
Kowalski: Skipper... CALM DOWN! IT'S JUST A TINY NEEDLE, SEE?
(Skipper accidently knocks the gun out of Kowalski's hands and tosses it outside)
Kowalski: Retrieve the Transformulator!
(Meanwhile outside the pingüino, pingüino de enclosure...)
?: Where are they? They should've been here 20 minutos ago!
(The sound of something hitting the ground startled ? and accidently dropped the map into the pool)
?: Great. Just great.
(The penguins pop out of the hole)
?: Woah!
Kowalski: SQUAWK SQUAWK SQUAWK!!!
?: If only I knew what they were saying...
Kowalski: Where is it!?
Private: Over here!
(Private points to the invention)
Kowalski: (runs to invention) GOT IT!
(Skipper pops out of the hole...)
Skipper: NEEDLES!
Kowalski: Skipper, Please!
(? sees the penguins running around the enclosure)
?: What are they doing?
(Kowalski accidently shoots the needle at ?)
?: Ow!
(The penguins gasp and look at ?)
?: (touches head) I don't..feel...so good...I think..I..
(? tries to reach the bench)
?: ......Almost.......There.....
(? reaches the bench but instantly knocks out)
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Well, that was Part I of my FF, Tell me down in the comentarios what tu guys thought of Part I.
Sorry if the story looked a bit long, I was choosing whether to el espacio every line out o not... Anyways, thanks for lectura and Part II will come soon!
-Penguinlover723
Just some symbols...
Author's Note is in bold
Action/Scene is in italics
Thought Speak is with < & >
Part I: The Beginning
Oh! I forgot to mention that I won't give away the main character's REAL name until the end of the FF, THAT will be determined later...
I'm also gonna throw in a couple references...Just for fun :D
(A car pulls up to the Central Park Zoo...)
?: Here we go... (sighs)
(6 little kids run out of the car)
?'s Mom: tu kids have fun! (turns to ?)Now tu make sure tu keep the kids seguro okay?
?: Mom, I'm not going anywhere else.
?'s Mom: I know, Here, I'll give tu $80, tu make sure that the kids get to eat, alright?
?: Yep
?'s Mom: I'll be back at 6.
?: K, amor you.
?'s Mom: amor tu too!
(?'s Mom drives away and ? & kids go to the front gate)
?: Alright everyone, attendance! Kenny?
Kenny: Here.
?: Carley?
Carley: Here!
?: Lee?
Lee: Here
?: Lilly?
Lilly: Here.
?: Christa?
Christa: Here
?: And... Omid?
(Silence...)
?: Uhh... Omid?
(Omid comes out from behind a arbusto, bush and jumps at ?)
?: AHH!
Kids: HAHAHAHAHAHAH!
?: OMID! DON'T EVER DO THAT AGAIN!
Omid: Chill! Okay? I'm here..(laughs)
?: Ugh... <Today's gonna be a LONG day...>
(Just then, Alice opens the gate)
Carley: Yay! Let's go in!
(All the kids run into the zoo while ? just starts walking)
Alice: Welcome... To the Central Park Zoo...(yawn).. Whatever.
?: Alright here are your maps, make sure to meet at the pingüino, pingüino de habitat at EXACTLY 12:30! Then we'll have lunch, and then tu guys can keep looking around, THEN at 6:00, Go to the front gate and then we'll go... capiche?
Kids: Capiche.
?: Okay, now go have fun!
(All the kids run in different directions)
(Meanwhile at the pingüino, pingüino de HQ...)
Kowalski: Behold...The Transformulator!
(Skipper, Rico, & Private look at each other then, they sigh)
Kowalski: What's the matter?
Private: I'm sorry if i'm being mean to tu Kowalski but... don't all of your inventions always fail?
Kowalski: Well... About 82.5% of the time...but...
Skipper: The private's got a point there
Kowalski: Look, I know my inventions ALWAYS explode but this one is definitely going to work!
Skipper: And how do we know that?
Kowalski: Well... tu don't..but..
Skipper: Exactly, Now who wants to bet that this invention will explode?
Rico: FIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIISSSSSSSSSSSSSSHHHHHHHHH!
Kowalski: WAIT! I didn't even get to tell tu what it does yet!
(All the penguins go silent)
Skipper: Fine, What does it do, Kowalski?
Kowalski: (sigh) With this invention, we can literally be any living animal we want!
Skipper: Ooh! This just got interesting!
Kowalski: All we need to do is set it to any animal of our choice and shoot the needle at them!
Skipper: Needles? NEEDLES?!?
Private: Skippa? Please try to calm down!
Skipper: AHH!
(Skipper then runs around the HQ while the other penguins try to get him)
Kowalski: Skipper... CALM DOWN! IT'S JUST A TINY NEEDLE, SEE?
(Skipper accidently knocks the gun out of Kowalski's hands and tosses it outside)
Kowalski: Retrieve the Transformulator!
(Meanwhile outside the pingüino, pingüino de enclosure...)
?: Where are they? They should've been here 20 minutos ago!
(The sound of something hitting the ground startled ? and accidently dropped the map into the pool)
?: Great. Just great.
(The penguins pop out of the hole)
?: Woah!
Kowalski: SQUAWK SQUAWK SQUAWK!!!
?: If only I knew what they were saying...
Kowalski: Where is it!?
Private: Over here!
(Private points to the invention)
Kowalski: (runs to invention) GOT IT!
(Skipper pops out of the hole...)
Skipper: NEEDLES!
Kowalski: Skipper, Please!
(? sees the penguins running around the enclosure)
?: What are they doing?
(Kowalski accidently shoots the needle at ?)
?: Ow!
(The penguins gasp and look at ?)
?: (touches head) I don't..feel...so good...I think..I..
(? tries to reach the bench)
?: ......Almost.......There.....
(? reaches the bench but instantly knocks out)
------------------------------------------------------------
Well, that was Part I of my FF, Tell me down in the comentarios what tu guys thought of Part I.
Sorry if the story looked a bit long, I was choosing whether to el espacio every line out o not... Anyways, thanks for lectura and Part II will come soon!
-Penguinlover723
