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My latst poem!!!

"My Dearest Love"

tu came into my life, por neither chance nor fate.
But por destiny, who dicho for true love, I would no longer wait.
Like an angel, tu fell from heaven, to Earth below.
tu came into my life, and set my corazón aglow.
Whenever tu leave me, and what I say is true.
I lay awake through the night, my corazón crying for you.
tu are my only desire.
To anyone else, I could never aspire.
Though now tu are gone, my dearest love,
I find peace, knowing tu are watching over me from above.
And when, at last, eternity dies.
I rejoice at once again seeing the amor in your eyes.
But in this moment, I shan't lose heart.
For not even death can tear our amor apart.

Feel free to leave comments, I'm always open to constructive criticism.
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it's beautiful!!!!
kiss93 posted hace más de un año
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"latest" poem. sorry bout that!!
michaeljsgirl posted hace más de un año
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its beauitful. i amor ur poem
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liberiangirl_mj said:
This is awesome michaeljsgirl!!! thank tu so much for sharing this with us!!!

"Though now tu are gone, my dearest love,
I find peace, knowing tu are watching over me from above.
And when, at last, eternity dies.
I rejoice at once again seeing the amor in your eyes.
But in this moment, I shan't lose heart.
For not even death can tear our amor apart."

This really makes me cry... I amor tu and I miss tu so much MJ!!!!!

thanks again for sharing your beautiful poem michaeljsgirl!!
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 This is awesome michaeljsgirl!!! thank tu so much for sharing this with us!!! "Though now tu are gone, my dearest love, I find peace, knowing tu are watching over me from above. And when, at last, eternity dies. I rejoice at once again seeing the amor in your eyes. But in this moment, I shan't lose heart. For not even death can tear our amor apart." This really makes me cry... I amor tu and I miss tu so much MJ!!!!! thanks again for sharing your beautiful poem michaeljsgirl!!
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caligurl16 said:
This is beautiful!
I amor it! =D
You're a great writer <33
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