So tu see, I've been wanting to write about mine and Mephisto's children for a while.
But I still haven't.
Why is that?
Well, tu see, I'm very dissatisfied with a lot of their characters. I want to mold them a bit into better characters before I start.
I also am currently not sure where I want to take the story. I'm starting to get a little bit of an idea to start it off as some cute little slice of life but have it take a más serious turn, although at the moment I'm not sure how to do it o which direction exactly to take it.
Another thing about the characters, is that due to the change I want to make in the story, that means I'd have to rewrite some of their characters, primarily Dante.
Although I don't want to change Dante too much, I plan on making him less dense and less emotional, and probably cut his trait of being a hopeless romantic, because he started to end up like a generic shoujo protagonist but male. Sensitive with a pretty face and still pretty boring.
So let's explain the characters I'm changing and whatnot-
Dante -
As said, Dante's character was starting to go to "classic shoujo protagonist" route. Ditzy, dense, but easily falls in love. Mind you, I'm not just completely axing his emotions o anything. He'll still have a amor interest, which will be Pein. However, he won't amor Dimitri romantically anymore and he won't have a crush on Theron. Amantius will still like him too, since I actually enjoy the whole idea of a one-sided love.
Also, he'll be less sensitive. He was becoming a complete pushover crybaby and I really didn't like that. So he's still going to get sad o disappointed, but not at such an extreme scale as he used to. He'll also be más sensible instead of just being a complete idiot who has the mindset of a kid.
But don't worry, Dante will still be a really sweet kid who's weird and awkward. Those are the main points of his personality I'm keeping.
Hato -
Now, when I first started out escritura Hato's character, I didn't have much in mind for him. I just made him that generic asshole bully of a brother, but I really don't want to take him down that road anymore. Now he's smarter, actually gets the parte superior, arriba marks in his grade, and just a rather lonely person who simply has a short temper. He'll be más thoughtful and less of a punk, and a better brother than before.
Leif -
Well, let's face it. When I first made Leif he was pretty much if tu mashed Mephisto and Tamaki into one person. I've decided to make him way different. He's going to be mostly emotionless, only feeling a few emotions (primarily joy, anger, and disappointment). He's also going to end up being más sadistic than I had planned and he'll tend to overdo things. He'll also be different from Mephisto in this similar area por him just seeming less human than Mephisto does por not really being able to hide his true nature as well as Mephisto does, and generally seem way too carefree. And whereas Mephisto has a basic understanding of emotions that humans feel, Leif is someone who would just cock his head in confusion and not really understand it.
Also I have a little somethin somethin in mind concerning him and Mephisto but that's something that can't be revealed right now.
Well that's about it for now. I'll probably write más about the other children and what I have planned later in another article, but those were the main characters I wanted to talk about.
Until then, just sit tight, I'm trying to develop a story at the moment that won't be lame.
Hope this articulo was at least somewhat enjoyable and not a complete waste of time-
But I still haven't.
Why is that?
Well, tu see, I'm very dissatisfied with a lot of their characters. I want to mold them a bit into better characters before I start.
I also am currently not sure where I want to take the story. I'm starting to get a little bit of an idea to start it off as some cute little slice of life but have it take a más serious turn, although at the moment I'm not sure how to do it o which direction exactly to take it.
Another thing about the characters, is that due to the change I want to make in the story, that means I'd have to rewrite some of their characters, primarily Dante.
Although I don't want to change Dante too much, I plan on making him less dense and less emotional, and probably cut his trait of being a hopeless romantic, because he started to end up like a generic shoujo protagonist but male. Sensitive with a pretty face and still pretty boring.
So let's explain the characters I'm changing and whatnot-
Dante -
As said, Dante's character was starting to go to "classic shoujo protagonist" route. Ditzy, dense, but easily falls in love. Mind you, I'm not just completely axing his emotions o anything. He'll still have a amor interest, which will be Pein. However, he won't amor Dimitri romantically anymore and he won't have a crush on Theron. Amantius will still like him too, since I actually enjoy the whole idea of a one-sided love.
Also, he'll be less sensitive. He was becoming a complete pushover crybaby and I really didn't like that. So he's still going to get sad o disappointed, but not at such an extreme scale as he used to. He'll also be más sensible instead of just being a complete idiot who has the mindset of a kid.
But don't worry, Dante will still be a really sweet kid who's weird and awkward. Those are the main points of his personality I'm keeping.
Hato -
Now, when I first started out escritura Hato's character, I didn't have much in mind for him. I just made him that generic asshole bully of a brother, but I really don't want to take him down that road anymore. Now he's smarter, actually gets the parte superior, arriba marks in his grade, and just a rather lonely person who simply has a short temper. He'll be más thoughtful and less of a punk, and a better brother than before.
Leif -
Well, let's face it. When I first made Leif he was pretty much if tu mashed Mephisto and Tamaki into one person. I've decided to make him way different. He's going to be mostly emotionless, only feeling a few emotions (primarily joy, anger, and disappointment). He's also going to end up being más sadistic than I had planned and he'll tend to overdo things. He'll also be different from Mephisto in this similar area por him just seeming less human than Mephisto does por not really being able to hide his true nature as well as Mephisto does, and generally seem way too carefree. And whereas Mephisto has a basic understanding of emotions that humans feel, Leif is someone who would just cock his head in confusion and not really understand it.
Also I have a little somethin somethin in mind concerning him and Mephisto but that's something that can't be revealed right now.
Well that's about it for now. I'll probably write más about the other children and what I have planned later in another article, but those were the main characters I wanted to talk about.
Until then, just sit tight, I'm trying to develop a story at the moment that won't be lame.
Hope this articulo was at least somewhat enjoyable and not a complete waste of time-